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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:31pm | IP Logged

he sent the book HOME! ... OMG.. that spunk  that attitude  that character ..WHO have you created here NishaDay Dreaming

Speaks volumes about this man ..ain't it... a subtle hint that our man may want to put her in a spot where she has to answer  her parents (truth or lie -who knows) , which means ' i dont want to hide this 'whatever we have' from the world' . Cant wait to see how u take it forward 

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
yay title changed.. update coming up :)

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Part 51
Sixth Sense & Sea Weed Green

SUNDAY...
"Who sent you a HOW to make RASAM book?" Appa was curious but a lil worriedShocked

"Edavadu prank aa irukkumo?" "Is it a prank?" "Do u want to call Baldev?"
"madhu did u send rasam recently for any of her coworkers?"
 Appa's questions WOULDNT ENDCry

Amma took the book from her hand and sifted...
"All of us are good cooks... was it mailed to the wrong address?" Amma wondered LOGICALEmbarrassedBig smile

II's face was like a tomato... as she imagined how she would squish Rakshasan like the tomatoes floating in the rasam... squished and peeled and shred to fibres...Big smile

Her heart did the NOW familiar hyper ventilation as it brought back that magical encounter.Embarrassed
SHE TENDED TO REMEMBER EVERYTHING ABOUT HIM AND EVERYTHING ABOUT THEIR ENCOUNTERS
EVERY BREATH HE TOOK SHE COULD RECALL, she had a vivid image of every aspect of his love makingBlushing
His admonishments, his proprietorial attitude, his persistence... his tactics of slowly but steadily wearing her downBlushing

The blanket and the two forms snug underneath like he didnt want the world to know what he attempted to do under the woolEmbarrassed
... as if it were a "this is what I do every evening when I return from work" vibe...Day Dreaming

She was barely beginning to acknowledge it to herself, what are the odds she would acknowledge to her parents?
ZERO!!!Big smileClap

"Should we return it?" Appa asked as if it was some illegal thingLOL

She grabbed it from Appa... "Vendaam... ummm... no... I mean... Appa.." she stuttered
"ayyo Appa, Amma do u remember that Garhwali girl Babita Singh? Amma taught at KV Amma knew most of her class... Amma TAUGHT ECONOMICS, II took commerece in 11th
It was a GOOD LIE...
 She lives in Blore, annikki the other day on FB la she asked me rasam recipe I gave it to her, 
she called to tell me it didnt turn out how she wanted it.. and so tease panarthukku, in oirder to tease me she sent this"ClapClapEvil Smile

LIES COME VERY EASY TO ME RAKSHASA!!CryEvil Smile

WHAT HAVE U DONE TO ME?Cry
AYYO!!Cry
She didnt have Babita on FB... she had NO idea where the girl was now...

She crushed the lil bubble wrap like envelope box... eliminating any chance of it being sent back...
Hanging on to something sent by someone that doesn't mean anything to herEmbarrassed


"Amma, I can use this book, I only know how to make ONE KIND OF RASAM.. idula 21 kinds irukku, there is 21 kinds in this" "I am just going to keep it... lets say some well wisher who hates my cooking sent it.. she managed a lame wink... fleeing the room...Embarrassed

Sunday evening...
pulling clothes off the lines in the balcony Akka continued to wonder.. she hadn't said anything to Bala yet... II...had inadvertently ...she had completely forgotten her "physical" thing with Subbu... anda cted like she was experiencing everything for the first time with Rakshasan... II may have made an innocent slip but whoever she was talking to... took FULL NOTICE

By brushing off the experience with Subbu, she had completely discredited it ... in a heart beat... when Akka had asked about it repeatedly II's response was a tepid "whatever" "meh?" "I guess it happened with Subbu Huh?"Shocked
 "it was so forgettable I don't even remember it"Sleepy

Though it was not the most exciting performance of Subbu AND Akka hated Subbu passionately.. ...II herself had never gushed about the full first experience OR the "almost" second experience ...NEVER...Big smile
 
On the contrary ...NOW... .. claiming to have NO MAN in mind...and asking the question for "purely hypothetical" as II "claimed" she was stuttering, shaking, trembling, and gasping for breath.. during the phone call.. and had said YES to the "knock your socks off" comment.. WHY? what had changed from then vs now? Why did she act like her socks had been knocked off NOW? but NOt when it actually happened?

Unless it had happened with someone NOW?
WHO WAS IT? her instinct prodded her something was off yet again...

II had had given her a sliver...she was closest to Vandita... one such sliver had predicted Subbu's actions beforeBig smile

What WILL THIS sliver do?Wink

Monday...

 
As expected something had to go wrong on the work front, bugs were detected in a portion (of the customized for "automobile dealership") of the transaction software in the Gurgaon showroom

Her audit of the reports from the legacy systems vs the KMPG installed SW showed various discrepancies...mid week, around Wednesday... the receipts for the entire last week did not match especially in cash based transactions

She alerted Ashwini... and things started going downhill from there...

JUST when they were able to gain Mr Ranjan's support and confidence around the whole project...


Srikanth texted her mid week "Will you be my shopping guide at Delhi Haat one more time?"
"I might have to work Saturday" she did not lie
She wondered was the guy was upto..
"It shouldn't take too long" he promised

"How about Saturday at 11?" she asked reluctantly although polite
"Will be there at the gate at 10:50, the man hung up thrilled

Amma Appa had heard about this from Natesan Mama... HE HAD CALLED TO TELL HIM HE Srikanth wants to hang out some more... Amma and Appa were giddy with joy, like THEY WERE IN LOVE or something..Amma hummed... Appa invoked Lord Krishna randomly... both went unnoticed by II

II was either cursing the IT Gods or invoking Rakshasan...on Rakshasan,




performance eval was coming up in a week and Excelsior was proving to be no shining medal on her lapel
Baldev's boss rated both of them... she rated her team and took it to Baldev, he approved or declined the ratings they argued and disagreed and eventually found common ground

Though she loved people management she HATED the RATINGS PROCESS she was jumpy and unhappy all the while through, it bothered her to be forced to rate people in a curve
She got "directives" from corporate... that had to be adhered to...

While working 60 hours a week on Excelsior she attempted to hand off the Rajouri Garden parts supplier to another team WHILE filling out evaluation forms for the A, B, C,C D on her team
Her own self rating? "Oh I can do that at night"

YA RIGHT!!!

Rating herself instead of think about Rakshasan and his misdeeds? She tried one night, two nights, three nights... she managed to write THREE THINGS ABOUT HERSELF... in the first part of the form... the form went from 1.1 to 9.9...
KMPG employees mocked the system as the "point to point hell"

She found herself looking at the "No" book or the Post It with French words or the Rasam book

For a DENIAL relationship this was a bit much?

Sure!

For a relationship that DIDNT EVEN EXIST.. was she spending inordinate amounts of time tormenting herself?

no clichd symbolisms... no selfies or FB postings or dinner dates, or roses, or gifts like couples dancing in white mist inside a sno globe.. or car rides, or walking hand in hand  in Janpath...trying on earrings while he took pictures,

haggling on girlfriend's behalf about an already ridiculously low priced skirt to be all macho showing off cut throat bargaining tactics in the process sending a poor store hand to unemployment ... ALL FOR THE girlfriendBig smile



 he didn't argue chivalrously with her auto wallah, he didn't stand guard near her seat when she sat on the aisle seat in a bus... no cooing on the phone like toddlers (SOME OF HER FRIENDS DID THAT)...no weekend sexcapades at Bijwasan farm houses...Big smile

She was firm about the fact that he wanted to destroy her life... yet thought of him every minute she was not working...Embarrassed

He was just calling her bluff at every step... and acknowledging it with generous overwhelming mind numbing kissesEmbarrassed

Friday ...

she wound her way to the elevator at 11:45 ish.. with coffee & cookie in one hand and the latest edition of Business India... it had the new RBI Chief Raghuram Rajan on the cover.. she admired him immensely...She would sleep with it under her pillow tonite... and, after memorizing every word he said in the interviewClap...She would buy and read up every book he quoted, and look up every data point he referenced... she would DO IT ALL to someday be where he was todayEmbarrassedClap... 
lunch hour was approaching... she wandered attempting unsuccessfully to flip to her "idol's" interview page...
a man not too far from the elevator, wearing glasses and dressed very formally...spotted someone he knew... he called her name out...
She turned startled... at first then visibly shocked... she smiled

"SREEE?" she smiledShockedBig smile


A REALLY TALL LEAN GUY  was talking to a woman five feet away... in seaweed green cargo shorts and egg shell cream Banana Republic tee turned from the entrance of the Daily Perk watching the tall 20 something girl sprint towards a bespectacled man her height...
 SHE greeted him with a WIDE smile and began talking  he yanked the ear bud from his left ear to be able to hear the chatter clearly, he didn't understand it but she seemed really happy... she showed him a magazine she was holding and asked him to hold her coffee and cookie while she flipped to some page... he bent to read, she did too and their heads bumped... she rubbed hers.. he reached to rub hers... and he gulped his burning hot coffee burning his insides



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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Looks like someone is burning Wink
II is a total nutcase and I mean that in the best way possible! LOL

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
R&B getting uneasy seeing Shree n II Big smile 
little unexpected but if it is just initial startle on his part, it is expected. 

may be II's skin will feel the burnt of it Tongue

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
vandu is perfect akka- sis elder by just few years :) love her here as well as there in madshow.

and what's with R&B 'proprietorial attitude'.. is it like marking his territory Wink


Edited by Ad_Mumbai_Girl - 06 January 2015 at 5:29pm
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arya1991

Oh. God.
You have me hook, line & sinker.
I'm staying awake at such an ungodly hour (for my time zone) just reading your latest update.

I think your R&B and II have me far, far, far more hooked than the actual YHM's RKB & IRKB.

Aaayyyooo!!!!!
Naan yenna solaradu?? 
Enake paithyam pudikumnnu nennakiren... Sariya ongaloda II madiri... R&B paithyam!

So hot. So mysterious. I'm constantly wondering what is going on in that mind of his, apart from those random Google translations and oh-so-significantly-insignificant gifts of his!

You've created one hell of an alternate universe out here. And pls don't be too shocked if people start fan-girling more after your R&B than our actual Raavan Kumar Bhalla, who's being completely useless on the actual show.

I love your R&B. He's got a mind of his own. And a body that does as he & his mind pleases.

Muah!
Much love & kudos, to your brilliant writing, and amazingly kickass characters.
Awaiting your next update with bated breath.
THANKS SO VERY MUCH ARYA!!

I am beyond thrilled to read your comment
The response to this tale has been NOTHING short of ASTOUNDINGClap.

For a regular working mother/wife/employee like me, your words are life changing.
I think its a combination of things... its because the show itself is on the decline and the characters I crafted seem to be original, identifiable,  intelligent, young, urban, and ambitious...
I am not part of the 20 something demographic any more... THOUGH I WISH I WAS, with R&BWink

I suspect the 20 somethings identify more with II than gushing over R&B. That for me is a victoryBig smile
I am thrilled I offered an opportunity for them to relate to a woman, albeit in fiction, that's more REAL than what the show seems to have.

R&B is stuff fantasies are made of... I wrote him more carefully than I wrote II. Despite 4 updates  A DAY (someone posted a statistic today) I think R&B turned out OKBig smile

The lines in blue... what can I say I am quite speechless

I am happy to be the creator of such fantasies I guess...
I dont have the snipping tool on my home laptop, I am getting it ASAP to get snapshots of comments like yours and save them for posterity...

IF EVER I publish this tale or write any more, I shall include every compliment from these pages




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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SunshineBliss

he sent the book HOME! ... OMG.. that spunk  that attitude  that character ..WHO have you created here NishaDay Dreaming

Speaks volumes about this man ..ain't it... a subtle hint that our man may want to put her in a spot where she has to answer  her parents (truth or lie -who knows) , which means ' i dont want to hide this 'whatever we have' from the world' . Cant wait to see how u take it forward 


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