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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
I'll have my OS ready by Friday max. We have the following left and need to be finished by 25th. Where is everyone at? Anyone need help?


  1. An OS with only those CID officers who LEFT THE SHOW (but not died, means u cant include Tasha, Aditi & Daksh) Tongue - SHREYA
  2. Write a poem on Pankaj - Minimum 10 lines, no maximum limit, hindi or english language. Wink - RESHMA
  3. Write an OS on Abhijeet leaving Tarika. Wink - BT
  4. Write an OS on the end of DS track in a sensible way. Wink - RAVI
  5. You need to give a punch line along with a suitable title to the every present cast and have to relate him/her to a character (from a movie or serial or play or a novel character) with whom you think CID characters share a close resemblance and which qualities of them make you think so. Tongue - RAVI
  6. Write an OS of a conversation between duo after Survi left in flashback. Wink - ANGEL


Edited by KhotaSikaShreya - 20 January 2015 at 6:22pm

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
I'll do it asap dear.. Probably today evening I'll be working on it..
Someone help on how to start.. should I mention his entry or directly describe his character??
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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Describe his character else you'll end up having to mention Suraj as well.

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KhotaSikaShreya

Describe his character else you'll end up having to mention Suraj as well.

Okies boss!! Big smile
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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
Guys I've written this much so far. Anyone have any suggestions on how I should continue? If not I'm thinking of dividing it into a couple of mini conversations where each can talk a bit about themselves and CID and then we have the tribute to the 4 cops and then I close the OS at dinner.


The Anniversary Party

 

Super Fast Event Planners Office, December 20th, 11:10AM

Shreya ran into her colleague's office. She said, "Haan Sree?"

"Yaar boss ne ek naya event diya hai lekin meri team bahut busy hai. Kya tumhari team le sakti hai?" Debasree asked.

"Haan bilkul. Kaisa event hai?" Shreya asked.

"Anniversary party. Commissioner sir CID team ke liye ek 17th anniversary party organize karna chahte hain. Aur unke strict instructions hain ke saare purane CID officers ko wapas laana hai," Debasree explained.

"Kab ke liye?" Shreya asked.

"21st January," Debasree replied.

"Forensic doctors ko bhi wapas laana hai?" Shreya asked.

"Nahi. Unka koi zaroori nahi hai. Lekin saare officers ka aana zaroori hai," Debasree replied.

"Done," Shreya agreed.

She took the file that Debasree handed and ran out again.

*****

Super Fast Event Planners Office, Boardroom 1, December 20th, 12:10PM

After reading through the file, Shreya looked up at her team. She said, "Guys sab se pehle toh hume yeh jaana hai ke CID ke saare purane officers kaun kaun the aur phir unhe dhoondna hai, unse baat karni hai, aur unhe kisi bhi taran convince karna hai ke iss party main aayein."

"Main research karke saare naam nikalta hoon," Ravi said.

"Phir main aur Angel saare paate nikal lenge," Bluetides said.

"Aur main party ki tyariyan karna shuru karti hoon," Reshma said.

"Reshma tum aapne saath Pari, Ranju, aur Anjali ko bhi le lo," Shreya said. "Main Ravi ki madat karti hoon."

"Done," Reshma agreed.

*****

Super Fast Event Planners Office, Boardroom 1, December 22nd, 10:05AM

Ravi came in and said, "Saare naam mil gaye hain. List kafi lambi hai lekin."

"Koi nahi. Bolo," Shreya said.

"Okay. Pehle hain DIG Baldev Raj. Phir ek DCP Surendra Pal aaye the. Unke tasveerein mil gayi hain. Phir DCP Dipanker. ACP Prithiviraj aur ACP Digvijay bhi hain. Uske baad males main hain Rajat, Viren, Vineet, Rishi, Jayant, Vivek, Suraj, Sudhakar, Kavin, Dushayant, aur Karan. Do teen aur officers the lekin unke naam kabhi pata nahi chale. Aur females main hain Asha, Kajal, Lavanya, Kaveri, Muskaan, Divyana, Priyanka, Anushka, aur Mridula. Forensic doctors ke naam bhi laaya hoon. Woh the Dr. Vrinda, Dr. Nyla, Dr. Anjalika, Dr. Niyati, Dr. Sonali, Dr. Alka, Dr. Vaibhav, Dr. Sameer, aur Dr. Amrita," Ravi said, reading off a sheet.

The 7 team members looked stunned at all the names that Ravi had taken. Anjali asked, humorously, "Woh paanchwa naaam kaunsa tha phir se?"

Ravi scowled as the other 6 burst out laughing. Then Shreya said, "Okay ab inhe sab ke paate nikalo aur sab ko phone karne main lag jao. Yeh sab aane chahiye."

*****

Super Fast Event Planners Office, Boardroom 1, December 28th, 1:45PM

Reshma said, "Err...Shreya ek problem hai."

"Kya huya?" Shreya asked.

"ACP Digvijay aur Suraj jail main hain. Aur woh ACP nahi raha," Reshma commented.

"Aisa karte hain jail se special permission lete hain unn dono ko bhar niklane ke liye ek din ke liye. Ab Commissioner sir chahte hain ke sab aaye toh sab hi sahi," Angel suggested.

"Cops ke beech criminals. Wah kya baat hai!" Shreya commented, laughing.

"Chalega. Dono criminals ko cop treatment milega," Anjali said, laughing.

Ravi got off the phone and said, "Okay saare forensic doctors aa rahe hain. Maine abhi Dr. Vaibhav se baat khatam ki hai aur woh bhi aa rahe hain."

"I got the DIG, the 2 DCPs, and the 2 ACPs," Ranju said.

"Aur maine abhi Asha ko bhi confirm kar diya," Pari said. "Mera final approved list hai Asha, Kajal, Roma, Lavanya, Kaveri, Muskaan, aur Divyana."

"I booked a banquet hall for the celebration," Reshma said.

"Aur main catering dhoond rahi hoon," Shreya updated.

*****

Super Fast Event Planners Office, Boardroom 1, January 15th, 2:11PM

"Sab tyar?" Ravi asked.

"Haan. Bas ek baar sab aane lag jaayein toh hotel main theda denge," Reshma said.

"Shreya kahan hai?" Anjali asked.

"Last minute pe caterer ne backout kar diya. Toh woh ek naye caterer ko dhoondne gayi hai," Angel replied.

"Chalo koi baat nahi. Abhi 6 din hain," Ranju said.

"Haan lekin jitna late book karoge utna zada charge karenge caterers," Pari said.

"Caterer koi zada charge nahi karenge kyun ki ab do caterers book kar diye hain maine. Dono ko alag alag cheezein de diya hai taki dono ke paas zada naa ho aur woh back out naa karen," Shreya said, coming in.

"Toh ab sab tyar hai for sure?" Ravi asked again.

"Done deal boss. Ab hone do anniversary party," Reshma said, for the team.

*****

Blue River Banquet Hall, January 21st, 6:10PM

The 8 looked at each other nervously. They had realized as they stood here that this was the first time they had organized an anniversary party for cops. And that too by inviting so many past cops back. Now the guests were going to start arriving and they had to be sure that everything would go well.

As if in answer to their thoughts, the door opened and the current CID team slowly walked in. Shreya whispered, "Here goes nothing."

And then the guests started arriving. Dr. Vrinda and Dr. Sonali were first to arrive. They were chatting amicably about their new roles in their respective cities. They were followed by ACP Digvijay and Suraj who were led in by 6 police officers. The police officers stayed at the door as ACP Digvijay and Suraj came forward. On seeing them Dr. Sonali and Dr. Vrinda's faces tensed. Dr. Sonali said, "Yeh dono yahan kya kar rahe hain? Maine toh suna tha ke inhe dono ko jail ho gayi hai."

"Well phone pe mujhe kaha gaya tha ke Commissioner sir sab ko laana chahte hain toh isli yeh dono bhi aaye honge," Dr. Vrinda replied.

The tension lifted from their face as Divyana came in. She shook hands with both and introduced herself. Dr. Sonali asked, "Tum abhi kahan pe ho?"

"Maine police force chor diya hai. Actually main ek private detective ban gayi hoon yahani Mumbai main," Divyana replied, smiling. "Aur aap dono?

"Main Delhi CID main hoon ab," Dr. Sonali replied.

"Aur main Delhi CBI main," Dr. Vrinda replied.

"Acha isli aap dono aise baat kar rahe hain jaise aap ek doosre ko bahut samay se jaante hain," Divyana said, understandingly. Then she changed the topic and commented, "Waise decorations bahut ache hain. Yakeen hi nahi hota hai ke CID ko 17 years ho gaye hain."

"Yakeen toh hume bhi nahi hota hai. Time kaise guzarata hai," Dr. Sonali commented, happily.

"Yakeen toh mujhe bhi nahi hota hai. Aise lagta hai ke kal hi CID ko chora aur aaj CID 17 years celebrate kar raha hai," Kavin joked.

"Kavin humne sach main CID ek taran se kal hi chora hai. Saal ke shuru main hi toh gaye the," Dushayant said, seriously.

"Dushayant please. Yahan toh thoda sa maza kar lo," Kavin pleaded.

"Kyun? Kya Dushayant bilkul bhi maza nahi karta hai?" Divyana asked.

"Nope. Bahut hi serious rehta hai," Kavin replied.

"Yeh toh bilkul meri taran hai," Rajat said, coming into the conversation as he entered the hall.

Reshma leaned over to the team and whispered, "Yaar aisa nahi lagta hai ke Rajat aur Dushayant ek se hain."

"Totally," Shreya agreed, in a whisper.

"Par yeh dekho. Vineet aur Vivek ne entry maar li hai. Ab atmosphere jamega," Angel whispered.

"I can't wait to see what will happen when DIG Baldev Raj, DCP Surendra Pal, and DCP Dipanker enter," Pari whispered, curiously.

Meanwhile back in the cop conversation, Vivek was saying, "Aur hum dono ab ek saath lag gaye hain Agra main."

"Mental hospital main?" Kavin asked, jokingly.

"Nahi Taj Mahal main," Vineet replied, equally humorous.

"Taj Mahal main kab se previous CID officers ki zaroorat par gayi?" Anushka asked, entering the conversation. It was hard to tell if she was joking or serious.

Not one to take chances, Vivek replied, seriously, "Jab se joke karna band ho gaya."

"VIVEK!" Kajal exclaimed, entering the party and scanning the hall.

"Kajal? Oh my god! It has been so long!" Vivek exclaimed.

The 2 hugged like friends and then Dr. Nyla seized the moment and gave them a bear hug. The 3 separated, laughing, as the others looked on with a confused expression. Vivek explained, "Actually hum teeno ek saath the CID main ek point pe."

"Mujhe maat bhoolna," Dr. Niyati said, smiling.

"Aap ko kaun bhool sakta hai Dr. Niyati?" Vivek asked, smiling back.

"Bhoolna chao bhi toh main bhoolne nahi doongi. Abhijeet ko kaha tha ek baar ab tumhe kehti hoon. Vivek main tumhe choom sakti hoon iss baat pe," Dr. Niyati said, raising her eyebrows ever so slightly.

Vivek and Kajal burst out laughing as the memory of Dr. Niyati flirting with Abhijeet came back. Rishi came in at this time to hear the laughter and asked, "Kya meri entry pe hansa jaa raha hai?"

"Bilkul nahi," Kajal replied.

"Haan yeh log purani yaadon pe hans rahe hain," Dr. Sonali supplied.

"Waise yaadein toh hamari bhi bahut si hain," Suraj said, trying to enter the conversation.

But no one replied somehow sensing that Suraj and Digvijay weren't good to talk to. Dushayant continued the conversation as if Suraj had never spoken, "Kavin yaad hai hamare pehle din pe kya huya tha?"

"Kaise bhool sakta hoon. Main ek hijacked bus ke upar char gaya tha aur undar kud gaya tha," Kavin said, smiling at the memory.

"Aur mere pehle din pe maine ek aadmi ko shoulder pe goli maari thi kyun ki main usse sirf disarm karna chahta tha, marna nahi," Jayant said, entering the conversation.

"Woh baat toh koi kabhi nahi bhool sakta hai," Viren commented.

"Waise Lavanya aur Kaveri abhi tak nahi aaye," Vivek mused.

"Hum aa gaye!" Lavanya exclaimed, making an entry at that exact moment.

"Kya hum main se koi kehta phir entry maarne wale the?" Anushka asked, jokingly.

"Nahi bas timing hi kuch aisi hogi," Kaveri said, smiling.

As the conversation continued and the cops entered, Shreya said, "Guys shouldn't we make a mention to those 4 CID officers who passed away in the line of duty?"

"Sab ko aane do phir," Ravi suggested.

"4 kaun?" Reshma asked.

"Actually main jab naam dhoond raha tha toh mujhe 4 aise officers ke naam mile jo duty pe maare gaye. Tasha, Aditi, Daksh, aur Roma," Ravi replied.

"Main bas soch rahi thi ke kyun ki sab aise CID ki anniversary celebrate karne aaye hain toh unke naam bhi lene chahiye," Shreya mused.

"Ah yeh dekho. Sudhakar, Muskaan, aur Priyanka aa gaye," Pari said, changing the topic.

"Toh kya huya? Asha, Mridula, Karan, aur ACP Prithivraj bhi aa gaye hain," Ranju said.

"Matlab ab bas kuch doctors aur 2 DCPs aur DIG bache hain," Shreya counted.

"Oh I forgot to tell you. Dr. Anjalika aur Dr. Alka ne cancel kar diya hai," Reshma said, suddenly. "Unhone aaj subah phone kiya tha aur kaha tha ke woh aa nahi payenge."

"Boss Dr. Vaibhav bhi nahi aa raha hai," Bluetides said, speaking for the first time that evening.

"Aur Dr. Amrita?" Shreya asked.

"No updates," the 7 commented.

Then DIG Baldev Raj and DCP Surendra Pal came in. A few moments later DCP Dipanker entered as well. Now the entire team was here.

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
I'll finish mine asap..
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My OS is nearly done. Will be posting it tonight or tomorrow maximum.

The other one won't take much time. But are the lampies to be included or not?

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Lovely Shreya di.. I enjoyed reading and second your idea.

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