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ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts - Thread 2 (Page 136)

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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Chapter 4th 
Hmm, something is really fishy. Why Karan is hell-bent on insisting her on seeing only to the particular Dr Deshmukh? Mothers become possessive and over-protective when the thing comes to their child. She argued with her husband for her child's sake. I am happy that she's enough courage to oppose to her husbands decision.
Arnav's thoughts just touched my heart and give hope that destiny will bring them closer to each other. And I can feel that both are somewhere emotionally connected to each other. They are strangers, but their souls are connected.

Part B
Kitna pyara aur meetha bolta hai arnav jesy har ek lafz mein shereeni ho shehed jesi.. Such a delightful their conversation was. I was right that both are connected by an invisible bond...Arnav is attracted towards her despite knowing that she is a forbidden fruit for him...That's called love maybe. I know it's too early to say, but for love, there is a moment enough to fall in love.
And Deepthiya ending of the second part knocked the air out of my lungs...It was distressing and heart-wrenching situation for Khushi...I am sad for her beyond measure...How can be she so nave that her husband was aborting her child after knowing about the gender of the child and she was totally unaware what was happening to her or around her...I was sensing something fishy, but this revelation just flummoxed me completely...
Just because Khushi is not giving birth to his heirs, he aborted them...this is completely unfair...this thinking disgusts me. The discrimination between genders, it's awful. I have the finest example for this. My Prophet (p.b.u.h) has only one daughter. His generation starts from His only daughter. Once again you touched a very sensitive concept. but dear trailer was totally different...however Arnav is the same. :p

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Chapter 5t A

Omg! Karan parents are also involved in this sin...Uff mere Khudaya itna zulm who bhi nanhe bachiyun ke sath...Mujhe bohut bura lag raha har us Maa ke leye jo aisy lamhaat se guzrati hai..I am glad; yes, I am glad that Khushi heard Karan's conversation...This is distressing the way they are talking about aborting her baby...

The moment when she took arnav's hand and splayed on her stomach, was indeed the highlight of this update. My skin broke into goose bumps after reading the first part...That was so heart-touching. What her fault the way she betrayed by her husband, What her fault in this if she is not giving them their heirs...Life becomes too miserable to live sometimes.

Part B

Loved, loved the way arnav deal with Karan. The nurse, the doctor, Karan, and his parents, all are involved in this sin and I am glad that Arnav is connecting the dots together to get a clearer picture. The whole confrontation scene was brilliantly written and the way Arnav seeks answers from him, just outstanding...

No words can justify how brilliantly you write about Khushi's situation...She is broken beyond repair. Literally, my eyed welled up when Khushi was pleading her baby for one kick. very emotional chapter. Her own husband is the killer of her babies. Her husband, whom she trusts blindly give her biggest shocked of her life. When she lost all her hopes, arnav come their for her as a new ray of sunshine.

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hEART WRECHING UPDATE..
HOPR KHUSHI AND BABY WILL BE FINE.

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 9:29am | IP Logged
great work yaar
no words i have to say
i think this type of shows to be made instead of some crap saas bahu serials
salute for u r this effort
its its just ...amazing part
the same time proud to be a girl ...
loved the update ,,
i can't think about the babies who killed inn the womb...
y people are being so cruel 

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
Comment for chapter 3 edited on pg. 7 Big smile

Sorry for the delayEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Omg kara is so cheap.. Poor Khushi

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Poor khushi.. Hope arnav saves her baby..

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Just read chapter 3..

woe like the way Arnav reply to karan..

then the way khushi felt ehen he touched her stomach n baby..

her cal to la explaining her feelings felt bad for khushi.


Karan is a real jerk. Angry


wow dr ASR on mission dr deshmukh to gai aab..

glad he is now handling khushi's case


chapter 4-


Like the way Arnav realise about karan..

oh my god karan is totally jerk. .

ike the way Arnav straighten him...

when Arnav came to check khushi he was again mesmerised by her..

the eay hr text his mom hehr..

OMG karan is getting abortion done because its girl child Angry
Arnav got hold of it

eagerly looking forward

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