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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Awesome update. ...

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Srilathalolla

Deepthi because of you today I am able to see so many strong women nooo nooo nooo i m still baby.. bt yes stronger oneWinkhehehehehe who are raising the future in a correct way and I can see a ray of hope. All the credit goes to your writing dear. God bless you and your family. LOVE YOU. Clap

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Hey di, hilake rakh diya aapne to. It was a fabulous heartwrenching chapter. Today i got to know why u name this as "Sex between hearts". At first i thought it would be something romantic in Arshi. But now i came to know that it was mentioned as a sex determination of those poor girls whose hearts r brutally ruined by their own father. Its rediculous why dnt these stupids understands that it doesnt matter if the child is girl or boy, but ofcourse it matters that how much a child loves its parents or how much its parents love their own child.

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Deepthi, reading all the comments feeling both v.happy and v.sad to see so many of us remembering similar problems with either in their own life or they heard of. Sad that so many are affected by this directly or indirectly and happy that they could discuss something out of their heart and mind which we can't even think of sharing with anybody else. Thank you for creating this ff and making them lighten their heart by letting their frustration out. Clap It is the harsh reality of life that we are not able to share everything in our mind even to people who are v.close to us. You have provided a opportunity to vent it out..all.

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by JforChimpanzee

Hey there!

I was bored of all the studying and thought of checking IF once. And I think I am not disappointed because I found this story.
You know, this is truly amazing. And the concept is by far the most challenging to write. You are doing a great job.
I dont know where to start from as I am deeply effected by Khushi's torment. I know she isnt dumb. She is just an optimist who finds positive in everyone and every other thing. I dont blame her for being a victim in this foolery her in laws and hisband played with her. What matters is that she has left it behind now.
I want to see a strong Khushi in the future.
And what to say about our hot-shot Doctor. He is enigmatic and full of life. And Khushi is lucky enough to have him in her life. Omgeez I cant wait for their story to start. We are there right?
So, I will stalk this thread and bookmark this link. I am not sending a buddy request because I am not sure if I would be able to comment everytime you update. Sorry! AD is a byotch lol. I hope you understand.
Will be waiting for the future chapters.
Love
J

Welcome to the thread J. I too want and wish a miracle to happen to all those women who are undergoing this to become v.strong and independent including khushi.

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepthiya


Cupping his splayed hand, she pressed it firmly against her stomach and uttered, "Now its perfect!" She gave a glorious smile, like the ones that appears when a person achieves everything they have dreamt. "Do you hear that? That's my daughter's heartbeat." She gleed, living momentarily in her delusional world...her eyes deserted, lost and drier than usual, not leaving his own.. not even to blink.

Oh! How you connected these soul together by these lines ...
Khushi Arnav what can I say
Your words always left me speechless
Beautiful update as always Big smile

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by owin

What a wonderful story.
Kushi asking for just a kick, reminded me the time when I was pregnant with both children I used to get worried if I couldn't feel baby's kick for more than an hour.
For the first I went to india for my delivery and had lot of complications.When I used to get really worried most of the time we end in hospital to check her heart beat.
For the second one I had to get a heart beat monitor to keep my blood pressure in control.
What Kushi Was going through is some thing which I can't even imagin. You have written Kushi's pain beautifully.

I had to tell you some thing.My sister have two girls and she accidentally became pregnant for the third time when she was 38.Husband and wife both are highly educated and working aboard.
They don't have any pressure from laws or parents Unfortunately she came back to india and had an abortion.
I came to know about all these after she had done it.
Whatever reason she gave I couldn't tolerate that she had an abortion of a healthy baby and that too when she was in her 16 th week.I don't understand how could a doctor agree for that,
Was she worried that it was going to be another baby girl or was she worried about her job.
(She convinced my parents saying that her health is really bad that she can't have another child.
And it disgusted me,because bottom of my heart I know why they did an abortion.I know it's their decision but I lost whatever respect I had for them.And the relation too.Why every one think abortion is not a murder.Its easy to kill a life inside the womb.

Any way right after that I became pregnant for the second time.
I had a healthy baby boy.I still remember when the sonographer said that we are going to have baby boy(we live in UK)my husband said he would have been more happy if it was a girl .
I have this feeling in the bottom of my heart that Allah had given me baby which my sister killed.
I haven't shared this feeling with anyone else .
Your story has moved me so much that I had to share it with you


Owin, Thank you so much for sharing most important incidents of your life. All your comments are very encouraging and definitely a treat and big boost to any writer. 

Its sad that your sister had to take such decision at that stage of pregnancy but I dont think I will allow myself to judge her action, because I am not in her shoes to really understand the situation. 

I remember mentioning this in some other post that I am not against abortion in general but I am against sex determination abortion or any such procedure after 12th week of pregnancy. 

The fact that your sister became pregnant at that age makes me wonder if thats accidental. Unfortunately no contraception is 100% failproof, and I have seen many giving into the accidental pregnancy and later not being happy, frustrated post the childbirth. Imagine a life coming into the world and facing disappointment from its own parents. 

That doesnt mean I am OK for abortion at any trimester. If a couple do not want a child, they should not let the fetus grow to such stage (beyond 12 weeks) and then decide to pull the plug. That's nothing but premeditated murder in my opinion, if they know it earlier and let it grow for that long. If they do not want, they should make decision at the earliest possible. And the word earliest here is very tricky, because I know one of my friend who didnt know that she was pregnant until she was in 4th month. Especially women with irregular menstrual cycles always have hard time to find it on time. And how do we judge such couple who wants to abort? 

If a couple is really firm not to have a child and against abortion in case of accidental pregnancy, the only way is not to indulge in any physical intimacy but is it really possible to lead a life with your partner without physical intimacy, which is, if not THE MOST but ONE of the MOST important aspects of marital life. 

Accidents happen to everyone but its not fair to judge someone for the decisions they have taken. Because believe it or not, most of the woman, especially a mother of 2 deciding to abort a third child at that stage would feel guilty all her life and especially if there is no support from the family. In a way, she chose to punish herself life long relieving the child from the disappointment and loveless life it would have faced upon entering this world.

And like I said, Infanticide is a small part of this story. As narrated in the prologue this is about the woman's right to make choices. Thats why even law states, its the woman who should decide what to do with her child. Not a husband, not in-laws/parents, nor her doctor unless there is medical emergency.

I do not intend to offend anyone with my views. I apologize if I unintentionally hurt your feelings.


Edited by deepthiya - 07 January 2015 at 8:36am

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepthiya

Originally posted by owin

What a wonderful story.
Kushi asking for just a kick, reminded me the time when I was pregnant with both children I used to get worried if I couldn't feel baby's kick for more than an hour.
For the first I went to india for my delivery and had lot of complications.When I used to get really worried most of the time we end in hospital to check her heart beat.
For the second one I had to get a heart beat monitor to keep my blood pressure in control.
What Kushi Was going through is some thing which I can't even imagin. You have written Kushi's pain beautifully.

I had to tell you some thing.My sister have two girls and she accidentally became pregnant for the third time when she was 38.Husband and wife both are highly educated and working aboard.
They don't have any pressure from laws or parents Unfortunately she came back to india and had an abortion.
I came to know about all these after she had done it.
Whatever reason she gave I couldn't tolerate that she had an abortion of a healthy baby and that too when she was in her 16 th week.I don't understand how could a doctor agree for that,
Was she worried that it was going to be another baby girl or was she worried about her job.
(She convinced my parents saying that her health is really bad that she can't have another child.
And it disgusted me,because bottom of my heart I know why they did an abortion.I know it's their decision but I lost whatever respect I had for them.And the relation too.Why every one think abortion is not a murder.Its easy to kill a life inside the womb.

Any way right after that I became pregnant for the second time.
I had a healthy baby boy.I still remember when the sonographer said that we are going to have baby boy(we live in UK)my husband said he would have been more happy if it was a girl .
I have this feeling in the bottom of my heart that Allah had given me baby which my sister killed.
I haven't shared this feeling with anyone else .
Your story has moved me so much that I had to share it with you


Owin, Thank you so much for sharing most important incidents of your life. All your comments are very encouraging and definitely a treat and big boost to any writer. 

Its sad that your sister had to take such decision at that stage of pregnancy but I dont think I will allow myself to judge her action, because I am not in her shoes to really understand the situation. 

I remember mentioning this in some other post that I am not against abortion in general but I am against sex determination abortion or any such procedure after 12th week of pregnancy. 

The fact that your sister became pregnant at that age makes me wonder if thats accidental. Unfortunately no contraception is 100% failproof, and I have seen many giving into the accidental pregnancy and later not being happy, frustrated post the childbirth. Imagine a life coming into the world and facing disappointment from its own parents. 

That doesnt mean I am OK for abortion at any trimester. If a couple do not want a child, they should not let the fetus grow to such stage (beyond 12 weeks) and then decide to pull the plug. That's nothing but premeditated murder in my opinion, if they know it earlier and let it grow for that long. If they do not want, they should make decision at the earliest possible. And the word earliest here is very tricky, because I know one of my friend who didnt know that she was pregnant until she was in 4th month. Especially women with irregular menstrual cycles always have hard time to find it on time. And how do we judge such couple who wants to abort? 

If a couple is really firm not to have a child and against abortion in case of accidental pregnancy, the only way is not to indulge in any physical intimacy but is it really possible to lead a life with your partner without physical intimacy, which is, if not THE MOST but ONE of the MOST important aspects of marital life. 

Accidents happen to everyone but its not fair to judge someone for the decisions they have taken. Because believe it or not, most of the woman, especially a mother of 2 deciding to abort a third child at that stage would feel guilty all her life and especially if there is no support from the family. In a way, she chose to punish herself life long relieving the child from the disappointment and loveless life it would have faced upon entering this world.

And like I said, Infanticide is a small part of this story. As narrated in the prologue this is about the woman's right to make choices. Thats why even law states, its the woman who should decide what to do with her child. Not a husband, not in-laws/parents, nor her doctor unless there is medical emergency.

I do not intend to offend anyone with my views. I apologize if I unintentionally hurt your feelings.

I 200% agree with you Deepu. Very well said.Clap... In the case of accidental pregnancies... I too believe it's the couple's decision to abort the fetus in the earliest stage. We cannot judge them. Because I saw with my own eyes that my pinni, who delivered her son  with in first year of their marriage... Used to curse the baby for spoiling her life. My mom raised the kid.. Many said, why did you keep the child.. If you didn't  want it you should have abort it. But she said, abortion is wrong that's why I kept it. I wonder why she didn't think abandoning child is also wrong. After few years.. They moved to different place.. I still remember .. My mom used to cry in the middle of the nights.. remembering my brother... 

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