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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lalarukh

Nine months are slowly getting close,
I am surrounded by the blanket of yours;
Slowly I am growing in your womb,
Please don't send me to the tomb;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


Aren't you happy? You can see me soon,
I am excited to see the world of sun and moon;
In your womb, I am counting days,
To show you mother, my little gaze;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


Mother, I am excited for my first toy,
I promise I will become your joy;
Please don't feel me as a burden,
Whatever you decide cannot be undone;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


I know you are waiting to see me play,
More than you I am excited to see that day;
Oh mother, won't you start my life story,
Please don't make my life a history;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


I am excited to play in your lap,
With my deeds, I will make you clap;
Oh world, give me a chance to live,
Even if you don't, I will forgive;
Oh world, my life is now a question,
Please don't give it name of abortion.


not mine but loved it...:(



Its is so beautifully and painfully written...Thank You Lala for sharing it. Hug

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:08pm | IP Logged

Please don't kill me...

By Girish puri

Let me see this world..

I am a baby,

i am in my mother's abdomen,

Today my mother went for pregnancy test,

the result is positive,

My mom is very happy,

Mom said to dad,

You are going to be a father,

My dad is so happy, 

he gives many hugs and many kisses to mom,

I am also very happy,

My mother starts taking healthy food,

because she understands,

her food is my food,

My mother touches her hands, several times to the tummy,

Because she wants to feel,

My heart beat,

my little hands, my legs and my little head,

and today, i was in a ultra scan,

wow, i am a girl child,

but, i was killed,

My  dad and doctor killed me,

yes, i was murdered,

But why...?

Is it just because i was a girl ?

Is it just because they have to marry me,

and it requires lot of money ?

Is it just because, they have to give dowry for me ?

Is it just because, after marriage, i shall go to my husband's house,

and i shall be of no use for them ?

People love to have,

a mother,

a wife,

and of course a girl friend too,

Then why not a daughter ?

If you are a human...

Think over it,

and reply back to my crying soul..

i am waiting.


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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
I am not stepping into this thread until i get next better Update... I am damn upset.. AngryDead
And ROSY... AWESOME WORDS..Big smileClap

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lalarukh

Nine months are slowly getting close,
I am surrounded by the blanket of yours;
Slowly I am growing in your womb,
Please don't send me to the tomb;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


Aren't you happy? You can see me soon,
I am excited to see the world of sun and moon;
In your womb, I am counting days,
To show you mother, my little gaze;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


Mother, I am excited for my first toy,
I promise I will become your joy;
Please don't feel me as a burden,
Whatever you decide cannot be undone;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


I know you are waiting to see me play,
More than you I am excited to see that day;
Oh mother, won't you start my life story,
Please don't make my life a history;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?


I am excited to play in your lap,
With my deeds, I will make you clap;
Oh world, give me a chance to live,
Even if you don't, I will forgive;
Oh world, my life is now a question,
Please don't give it name of abortion.


not mine but loved it...:(

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seriously speechless..
Waese Aap donu k paas kaam nahi hai kya sivaa mjhey rulaaney ka..
Maa Update dekey rulaati hai aur Aap aese...lol

seriously last lyns... Can't.. Nothing.. Ufff

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepthiya

Originally posted by lalarukh

UFFF   PLEASE ...EIK KICK...:( :(...kiya likh deya deeps...

i am crying right now...though not a mother myself  but the way u have written it ...i am feeling right now like i am about to lose my own baby and i have to safe her any way possible :(...

simple hats off deeps... out of this world...way par excellence writing...


from the time khushi heard the convo between her husband and  in laws on ph to the moment she being standing still and nurses passing by ...and whole ambiance u have created...hats off hats off simple hats off...

i am feeling chocked right now...the pain at heart is immense...the fear of losing ur precious gift...the fear of losing ur part of soul...the fear of a mother to be who already lost 4 daughters...and that also damn brutally...deeeps i am dead after reading it...u r fantastic and fantastic ...wt an excellent writing skills...emotions ur cup of tea and u deserves standing ovation for that

i am short of words due to pain...due to cries ...due to tears...bauhat dard ho raha hay..:(

loved the way she went bold with arnav...in that boldness there was piousness it was like having safety, security from a stranger whose touch not so strange...in that touch of his she felt the world ... the love for baby which she felt first time from some one else other than herself...

the whole bus scene u wrote...the sky crying with her...that wet 1000 rupee...that tight knot of remaining left money...that controlling sobs...her past thoughts about boy toys ...the way first daughter died to last one...and then the plead for one kick...:(...i am speechless deeps...


i am crying...hats off for ur excellent writing...big hugs...

Oh Lord, I didnt expect you to unres so soon, knowing how busy you are in your AD. 

This chapter was very difficult for me to write, one it was high on emotional drama and two you werent there when I wrote, to boost my strength. Dammit, You spoiled me staying alongside while I write and now I am unable to pen down anything without you. 

For me the entire Kick scene was very emotional but my fav 2 high points were when she haqse grabbed his hand and put it on her stomach and second one is when she slumps down on the steps of bus mumbling my baby is dying. 

I proof-read at least 6 times and every time I missed you reading those parts...

Now stop crying and come back to me sooonnnCry..Aisa nahi kahoongi bcos I understand. Smile

i am missing u loads too...hope to be back with u and on this thread asap ...both the high points u mentioned they r indeed breaking points...plus all the gestures she sobing controlling her cries...that holding of pall knot tight...uff...that crossing of road seeing the clinic like life depends on it...that pleading for kick...that crying sky...ufff...fantastic writing


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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Meenu_Luvs_ASR

I am not stepping into this thread until i get next better Update... I am damn upset.. AngryDead
And ROSY... AWESOME WORDS..Big smileClap

LOLLOLLOL

Next better update matlab? Please clarify. 

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepthiya

Originally posted by Meenu_Luvs_ASR

I am not stepping into this thread until i get next better Update... I am damn upset.. AngryDead
And ROSY... AWESOME WORDS..Big smileClap

LOLLOLLOL

Next better update matlab? Please clarify. 
U r the writer... U will know better.. BETTERAngryLOL

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Meenu_Luvs_ASR

Originally posted by deepthiya

Originally posted by Meenu_Luvs_ASR

I am not stepping into this thread until i get next better Update... I am damn upset.. AngryDead
And ROSY... AWESOME WORDS..Big smileClap

LOLLOLLOL

Next better update matlab? Please clarify. 
U r the writer... U will know better.. BETTERAngryLOL


I was confused if u meant better means speedy update or happy updateLOL

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