Originally posted by: lalarukh
Nine months are slowly getting close,
I am surrounded by the blanket of yours;
Slowly I am growing in your womb,
Please don't send me to the tomb;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
Aren't you happy? You can see me soon,
I am excited to see the world of sun and moon;
In your womb, I am counting days,
To show you mother, my little gaze;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
Mother, I am excited for my first toy,
I promise I will become your joy;
Please don't feel me as a burden,
Whatever you decide cannot be undone;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
I know you are waiting to see me play,
More than you I am excited to see that day;
Oh mother, won't you start my life story,
Please don't make my life a history;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
I am excited to play in your lap,
With my deeds, I will make you clap;
Oh world, give me a chance to live,
Even if you don't, I will forgive;
Oh world, my life is now a question,
Please don't give it name of abortion.
not mine but loved it...:(
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Originally posted by: deepthiya
Oh Lord, I didnt expect you to unres so soon, knowing how busy you are in your AD.This chapter was very difficult for me to write, one it was high on emotional drama and two you werent there when I wrote, to boost my strength. Dammit, You spoiled me staying alongside while I write and now I am unable to pen down anything without you.For me the entire Kick scene was very emotional but my fav 2 high points were when she haqse grabbed his hand and put it on her stomach and second one is when she slumps down on the steps of bus mumbling my baby is dying.I proof-read at least 6 times and every time I missed you reading those parts...Now stop crying and come back to me sooonnnπ..Aisa nahi kahoongi bcos I understand. π
Originally posted by: Meenu_Luvs_ASR
I am not stepping into this thread until i get next better Update... I am damn upset.. π‘π€’
And ROSY... AWESOME WORDS..ππ
U r the writer... U will know better.. BETTERπ‘π
Originally posted by: Meenu_Luvs_ASR
U r the writer... U will know better.. BETTERπ‘π
ok.. then let me promote it to BEST UPDATE.. For what you have mentioned!!Originally posted by: deepthiya
I was confused if u meant better means speedy update or happy updateπ
Originally posted by: lalarukh
Nine months are slowly getting close,
I am surrounded by the blanket of yours;
Slowly I am growing in your womb,
Please don't send me to the tomb;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
Aren't you happy? You can see me soon,
I am excited to see the world of sun and moon;
In your womb, I am counting days,
To show you mother, my little gaze;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
Mother, I am excited for my first toy,
I promise I will become your joy;
Please don't feel me as a burden,
Whatever you decide cannot be undone;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
I know you are waiting to see me play,
More than you I am excited to see that day;
Oh mother, won't you start my life story,
Please don't make my life a history;
Oh world, can't you hear my voice?
I am excited to play in your lap,
With my deeds, I will make you clap;
Oh world, give me a chance to live,
Even if you don't, I will forgive;
Oh world, my life is now a question,
Please don't give it name of abortion.
not mine but loved it...:(
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