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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bluetides

Originally posted by debasree04

BT...agar good likhoge to marks aise hi good milenge...Wink

toh mera challenge edit kar ke sirf  "GOOD" likh doo ROFL
shayad tab gOOd milenge LOL

tab to bas yehi mil sakta hei -  OO ROFL

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Posted: 30 January 2015 at 3:30am | IP Logged
She read my story SleepyWinkLOL

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Posted: 30 January 2015 at 4:30am | IP Logged
I have started reading/watching yesterday & have just finished all...

my review together :

1- Making a grand tag on CID leads - Abhi-ACP-Daya (550*500)

its okay but very much simple...u can make it thodasa better!


2- An OS with only those CID officers who LEFT THE SHOW (but not died, means u cant include Tasha, Aditi & Daksh)

Good one! U included us also in it...that's innovative idea! Clap


3- Make a siggy on Forensic Experts who present in CID [you must include all of them, even if someone present for 1 episode, then he also must be included, only u can avoid those unknown doctors present in 1998] - Any size, Non-animated, Captions is your choice.

I told that you have to include every forensic expert in siggy except 1998 ones but you missed Dr Amrita [Mouli Ganguly] who was present for the episode of Invisible Bullet (16-23 August 2002). And there is no such caption also.


4- Make a siggy on Dr Tarika - Any size, Non-animated, Captions is your choice.

Tji is a forensic expert but in ur siggy its not shown at all. So choice of pics is not good!
Siggy is okay for me! Clap


5- Write a poem on Pankaj - Minimum 10 lines, no maximum limit, hindi or english language.

Good one! Clap


6- Write an OS on Abhijeet leaving Tarika.

Sorry BT but i dnt understand your OS...can u explain me? OS ka theme tha Abhijeet Tji ko chod raha hei...it means their break-up! What u wrote i really dnt understand. You somehow divert from the main theme! I am extremely sorry but i m not at all convinced!


7- Write an OS on the end of DS track in a sensible way.

Good one Ravi...Clap
i really like how u showed everyone's POV! Star


8- You need to give a punch line along with a suitable title to the every present cast and have to relate him/her to a character (from a movie or serial or play or a novel character) with whom you
think CID characters share a close resemblance and which qualities of them make you think so.

Fantastic Ravi...i love all titles & punch lines...freddy sir most - hidden diamond...very true! Star


9-Write an OS of a conversation between duo after Survi left in flashback.

Nice one Angel...Clap


10-Write 10 points explaining why trio are not promoted even after 17 years despite their efficiency and dedication.

Nice reasons! Tongue


INDIVIDUAL CHALLENGES!

@Sri
Hahahaha...bechari tumhari sister! LOLLOL
Just wonderful...i can imagine every scene while reading it! Big smile
Aaj main upar ! Wink
Maja aa gaya!  Big smile


@Reshma - siggy is good but choice of pics is not so good...if u use better pics then the theme can be depicted much better! Clap


@ anjali - Good one Anjali ! Clap


@vis - i have already told u still again saying that its ROFL story! LOL LOL
Hats off ur imagination & sense of humor! ClapClap


@Angel - choice of pics is good...but somehow it can be little better in presentation. Otherwise good! Clap


@Abhishek - I have already told u still again saying that the story is very much simple one...it would be better if u write it in little complicated way! Good effort! Clap


@Ravi - Magru Das...OMG!!! ROFL
But vis gave the episode name - 'Space mein alien' na? Wink
Wonderful WU! Clap


@Anamika - Song choice is perfect! Tongue
Anamika u have to say thanks to FB pages for supplying pics.LOL Wink
...anyway perfect vm! Good job! Clap


@Parii - Good one Parii...Clap


@aditya_anjaan - Good one ! Clap


@BT - Really wonderful paragraph on Jaywanti !! Clap


@ Saman - OMG!!! What u wrote! LOL
Good job...ek taraf Shakespeare dusri taraf Harry Potter! Clap Wink


@Himani - LOL ! Dream! Great! LOL


@Ranju - Siggy is good but i think u missed few wonderful moments...Clap


@buublly - Nice poem...good job! Clap i wish last line sach ho jaye! Wink




Edited by debasree04 - 30 January 2015 at 5:21am

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Posted: 30 January 2015 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Shreya, can you please sticky that thread? I am just unable to search for that 'under construction' thread. D'oh

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Posted: 30 January 2015 at 5:01am | IP Logged
My reviews
 
Team A:
 
1. 1) Make a grand animated/non-animated tag on CID leads - ACP sir-Duo (550*500) [It should be tag, not siggy] Tongue (Reshma)
 
 
Lovely one. Smile
 
2.  An OS with only those CID officers who LEFT THE SHOW (but not died, means u cant include Tasha, Aditi & Daksh) Tongue (Shreya)
 
 
Nice one Shreya, but I wish it had been more than a party LOL When I saw the subject I imagined a little OS with Vivek and Muskaan or Lavanya. Is it compulsory that all those who left have to be present? Confused. Anyway...this was good too.
 
 
 
3. Make a siggy on Forensic Experts who present in CID [you must include all of them, even if someone present for 1 episode, then he also must be included, only u can avoid those unknown doctors present in 1998] - Any size, Non-animated, Captions is your choice. Tongue (Angel)
 
 
Nice siggie, honestly I didn't know that someone is missing until I saw Deba's review. So I give you benefit of the doubt or I should say I am lenient. Tongue
 
 
 
 
4. Make a siggy on Dr Tarika - Any size, Non-animated, Captions is your choice. Wink (Angel)
 
Good one. Smile
 
 
5) Write a poem on Pankaj - Minimum 10 lines, no maximum limit, hindi or english language. Wink (Reshma)
 
Well written Reshma...esp 'Though his jokes aren't worth a sugarcane'. LOL
 
 
6) Write an OS on Abhijeet leaving Tarika. Wink (Bluetides)
 
Everything was going well, the suspense was building up...but suddenly you turned it into a YSPT in FW style.
 
 
This part...
 

Salunkhe sir: " We knew that signal is high at Forensic lab, and we installed the indicator in forensic lab and jab jab indicator on hota tab..." he paused passing a naughty glance towards Abhijeet.

Abhijeet was too shy as all eyes fell on him and he chuckled, cursing Daya who was showing all his teeth by now like a colgate ad.

Looking at Daya he murmured " idea sahib ki thee aur phasa diya muse"

Freddy: " tab kya doctor saab", He absolutely understood what was untold. But he is taking revenge for all threats Abhijeet made in past regarding bahbiji

Salunkhe sir: " aur kya Freddy, ye Abhijeet sir mere lab ko teenager class room bana rahe the bus", he concluded.

Everyone broke into loud laughter and finally Abhijeet had to speak

Abhijeet: " wo ..wo kuch toh aise hee baat banana tha taki investigation details nikal na jaye. Hum ne socha bus kuch din ki baat hai par " taunt tone " panch sal lug gaye na"

Pankaj : " matlab sir.. ye lab me jo .."

Duo together " YSPT ... Yeh sub plan tha"

Nikhil: " Longest YSPT of CID history sir"

 
Naaku artham kaaledu. Confused
 
 
 
 7. Write an OS on the end of DS track in a sensible way. Wink (Ravi)
 
Good one...glad they made everything clear unlike what they have shown. This OS will mean the end of this track for good. But no.. Sony won't do this. Unhappy
 
 
8. You need to give a punch line along with a suitable title to the every present cast and have to relate him/her to a character (from a movie or serial or play or a novel character) with whom you think CID characters share a close resemblance and which qualities of them make you think so. Tongue (Ravi)
 
 
Good one. Big smile but Daya-Ron Weasley? I don't know...LOL (just my thoughts...) Ron is sometimes a bit confused, dumb..Daya isn't. But other than that, yes...he had this so-called affair with S who's from their friends circle. Pinch  He had hallucinations in Room no 303 like Ron did after eating Romilda Vane's chocolates, he fought with Abhijeet like Ron fought with Harry in Goblet of Fire, so ok. LOL
 
 
ACP. Daya, Freddie are from HP, but Abhijeet is not...why? Confused
 
Honestly I don't know many of the characters you have mentioned. But your explanations were good. Big smile
 

9) Write an OS of a conversation between duo after Survi left in flashback. Wink (Angel)
 
Good one...Smile Enjoyed reading.
 
 

10) Write 10 points explaining why trio are not promoted even after 17 years despite their efficiency and dedication. Wink (Shreya)
 
Good, but since it's you I  expected more crazier explanations. Evil Smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


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Posted: 30 January 2015 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Deba di,

Individual challenge : yeah, I myself am not happy with the siggy. The dreadful pics blocked my brain LOL and am not good in blending so many pics in one siggy. Anyways thank you.

Duo OS : thank you so much Embarrassed . Glad you liked my very first attempt in writing.

Tji siggy : I tried to show every angle of the character. Confused Sorry if I failed to match your expectation Unhappy .

Forensic siggy : I tried my level best and we collected as many doctors' pics as possible. Invisible bullet caps are not posted. So it was impossible for me to get the video downloaded and make a pic. Thanks Smile .

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Originally posted by ANGELICEYES

Deba di,

Individual challenge : yeah, I myself am not happy with the siggy. The dreadful pics blocked my brain LOL and am not good in blending so many pics in one siggy. Anyways thank you.

Frankly speaking, i feel there r 3 rows with their pics...try to avoid this row thing...add pics zigzag way...

Duo OS : thank you so much Embarrassed . Glad you liked my very first attempt in writing.

yeah i enjoy the OS. Good attempt! Clap

Tji siggy : I tried to show every angle of the character. Confused Sorry if I failed to match your expectation Unhappy

Just look at the siggy not as a cid fan...can u understand that Tji is a forensic expert...u should include pics where she working on microscope or examine something...

Forensic siggy : I tried my level best and we collected as many doctors' pics as possible. Invisible bullet caps are not posted. So it was impossible for me to get the video downloaded and make a pic.

I purposely give this siggy...koi na koi chut hi jayega LOL


Thanks Smile .
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Posted: 30 January 2015 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Vis di : thanks a lot Big smile Embarrassed . Glad you enjoyed the OS. Yeah, Deba di ne kaha toh pata chala 1 doctor missing hai, warna hum logon ko bhi pata nahi tha Tongue .

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