Haan, bas sapne me π π ..Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya
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Originally posted by: ANGELICEYESHaan, bas sapne me π π ..
Thanks dear:-) u know even m not v satisfied with my poem π³ I think d reason is that ki pehli baar maine koi poem dil se nahi likhi πOriginally posted by: ANGELICEYESPadh liya poem, Anu di its lovely π but you write better than this one π .. Some lines about love in general are so beautiful βοΈ . I love the last few lines specially 'ya phir izhar e mohbbat me hi zamana guzar jayenge' π .
π Well, I wanted to make it a dream sequence (can't bear AT even for a second and here I had to write, so I wanted to make it entirely virtual, human psychology, you see) and for that I needed to make things look like that only, just like dreams are meaningless most of the times, putting some portions out of what we did that day or earlier in a weird sequence, so I chose for this kinda plot. And bhajans were something for which I'll be judged, so those were necessary π.Originally posted by: ANGELICEYESHimani, what was that π€£ ? 1st part was so scary, then 'Tarika ji' bhajan started π , and best part was that its all dream sequences π€£ ...
But overall it was a very good attempt βοΈ π π .. Excellent narration..
You should try your hands more in writing yaar ππΌ ππΌ ..
Originally posted by: buubllyHey frns now m ready to make u all fall in love with ATπwith my romantic poem of 56 linesπ
if u have guts then plz read itπ but at ur own riskπnd after reading plz plz don't try to throw rotten eggs & tomatoes on mebcoz,samjha karo yaar menhgaayi bahut badh gayi haiπ€£
Thank u buddy π I read ur OS,it was v nice π enjoyed it v much:-)Originally posted by: aditya_anjaan
Hey its very nice yaar.πHonestly speaking, u have described AT's relation nicely.The last line of Izhare mohabbat is just awesome. Love it.π³I love AT from the beginning. Ur poem made me fall in love with them again...β€οΈWell done...ππΌ
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