swaron ff hamesha forever(pt4/pg10updated) - Page 4

ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

wow yar prachi... its really aswom...

do update soon...

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Shailja

@Kshailja

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice story...
So Swaron r best frnd...
Luvd their cute wala tom n jerry fi8...
Swayam ki dream grl to pakka Sharon hi hogi...
Update soon...
Nd plsss pm me also this tym..

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Sakshi

@-SwaRonWorksPm-

Groupbie

Posted: 9 years ago

Sharon Swayam Tom n jerry fights.

so cute.

plz update nxt soon.
waiting to knw Shanaya ka character cz I feel it's gonna b sumthng fr Swaron n their life.

Sakshi.

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i_yatharthk

@i_yatharthk

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

nice concept prachi

tom jerry fights between swaron are nice

character of shanaya waiting for her role in their lives

and i have a suggestion for you

swayam ke dreamgirl wale sequece is new and would love to read about it further

do pm me about the next update

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

haye meri ms unique!!!

kyaa likha hai aapne!!!

swaron fight toh chalti hi rahegi naaa!

oh idiot, mansu aur mere fights ka mast examplelikha!!! 🤣

ofcourse meri jaan, ur rey!!

hehehe beautiful writin

paagalpaan to the limit!!!!

!!!!updates ka time!!

swayam ne Sharon ko bhagayaaa 😲

oyeshes the srp!!!!!srp!!!!!

hehehe atleast they reach on time..

fir woh smirk hayeeehayeee

aur fir tom n Jerry firse shuruuu

ggang rey ko dekhti he!!

kyaa?! mujhe marna nahiii hehe

universeji bachaaaooo

fir shanaya ki entry!!

!!dekhte he hota he kyaa

loved loved the updatedate

ab jaldi updates kar!!kar!!

am waiting...

love u!

dramaqueen

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98
res
unres
yee
me 1st
it was such a nice part.der day in college
swaron fight like idiots
bt dats wat made dem special
dats der speciality
i so love dem in dis way
dey both jst need a topic
n dey start der fighting
all d trials of keeping dem shut by gang r of no use
bt who is dis shanaya
hope she is nt villan
update soon
n thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi

yup u r first
thanx im glad u liked it
i know they r idiots n we love this idiots right
shanaya??? wait wait ill let u know soon
villian?? i too have this question😉

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan
heya prachi
firstly sorry cudnt comment
individually on each update
the story is really refreshing
swaron the besties
at the start i felt as it was something
really poetic by reading swayams
dream which i came to know as the story proceeded
its really cool
i loved the fighting nhok jhok
between swaron
the second update was really fast
swaron running to reach class on tym
swaron fights were again a
treat to read
mr shukla commenting on swayam
omg now whos this new entry?
a new dancer in the group
nic updates
update next part soon
thnx 4 d pms
do continue this as an FF

im glad u liked it
thanx for liking it
new entry?? wait for it

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv
nice update..story is really interesting..
new girl shanaya..hope negative character nahi hai..
update soon..
n thanks fr d PM

u r welcome
im glad u like it
shanaya negative?? i dont know 😉

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Nice

Mja aa gya yr
Aww they love to annoy each other

Haha

Now who is this new girl???

Update soon

Thanks 4 d pm

im glad u like it thanx for liking n commenting

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
wow yar prachi... its really aswom...

do update soon...

thanx sure

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