OS: One Last Goodbye! (Page 3)

Karan.Preeta IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 1:50am | IP Logged
love it
awesome OS 
n thanks 4 pm

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ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 2:24am | IP Logged
wow di...
its awesome and mind blowing didu...
just loved it..
do continue soon...
and thanks for the pm..

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anitasharma Goldie

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 4:22am | IP Logged
Beautiful os

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shreya09 Goldie

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 6:24am | IP Logged
u killed him ShockedShocked CryCry
beautifully written Helna Thumbs Up
than man deserves peace... and and that is possible only when his Roshni is there with him... now he will live... "happily ever after..." 
very nice os. but don't u dare try this kind of end for our Arjun in any of your ongoing or upcoming ff samjhi !! Evil Smile

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Swara85 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Ouch Di..kya bolu samajh nahi aa raha..
From writing pov : Brilliant and beautiful.

From my pov.. Why did you do this..?Cry I can't see anything happening to Arjun.Cry

From Arjun's pov..: Thank you for doing this..HugAt least now he'll be in peace and happy..
Now you see I have mixed feelings all at the same time..Aap ko jo pov accha lage wo rakh lena.
Thanks for pm.

Edited by Swara85 - 28 December 2014 at 10:09am

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ariyabestfan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 1:11am | IP Logged
that was really beautiful..
sashashyam IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 12:21am | IP Logged
My dear Kunchu,

In a word, exquisite.

Unbelievably sensitive,and written with a sureness  of touch that totally eschews maudlin grief and lamentations.

This is the best way for Arjun to go,  to be at peace at long last with his Roshni and the ETF gang that had gone before him, from Riya onwards.

The  only ones I feel sorry for are Rathod, now abandoned to a lifetime of loneliness, and to a lesser extent Shree. That is why they say that no one should mourn for the dead, only for those left behind.

I would write more, but my knee has not recovered easily from the surgery, and it stiffens painfully if I sit at the laptop for more than 15 minutes.

Warmest good wishes for 2015 to bring you  good health, peace of mind, and a lot of fulfillment, literary and otherwise.


Shyamala Aunty

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vidya.anand IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 1:17am | IP Logged
As I said already, it was a sad and poignant one but then there is one solace. He found peace and solace finally. atleast his love and life with Roshni got an eternal ethereal chance to be relived! Cry

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