OS: One Last Goodbye!

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:15am | IP Logged


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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Anny90 Goldie

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Doctors are trying to save his life.. And he feels every activity of them..he thinks about death. He feels about it.. 

Edited by Anny90 - 29 December 2014 at 7:50am
Shamsad1607 Goldie

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:35am | IP Logged
yey!!  you did it!
finally someone dared to kill him!
jo kaam sikander ne nehi karr paya tune karr dia!!  waah meri sherni! Clap
every thought, every emotion, every word was flawless... kya happily ever after afterlife hain yaar... all are there for him, each he lost was with him.finally.  he is with her.

i know ladies gonna beat you to your pulp...but it is a beautiful work indeed.
love you..Hug
keep writing. 

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laila1994 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 6:04am | IP Logged
OMG. What did you doShocked
It was wind blowing and beautiful.
I simply loved every word of it.
Thankyou for such a wonderful OS.

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angelshah IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 6:57am | IP Logged
i just couldnt describe it
it was wonderfull

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-Carrie- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 7:15am | IP Logged

I hate for anything bad happening to him CryCryCryCryCry

But then it was the only way for him to find eternal peace again. With his Roshni!

So this time heart went out for Sameer! Now he is truly alone! Ouch

Beautifully written! 

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dinazz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Wow. Big smile this is one truly amazing and magical work. The way you have described the emotions and feelings. And Wow We see all of them together in this story.  A different story.  Atlast with this story arni  will unite together forever. 
Thanks for the pm .Smile 

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