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THE AFTERMATH- Sanyukta's POV

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Hi guys! Amreen here! Smile 
 
This is the first sequel to my OS- 'Break UP :('.
In case you haven't read it, here's the link to it-
 
 
This one is in Sanyu's POV...I hope I can successfully get into the skin of her character. Embarrassed
 
Hope you like it!Smile
 
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I am interrupted in the middle of deep slumber as my alarm rings. Half asleep, I instinctively reach for my mobile phone to check if Randhir has sent me a good morning message like he always does.
 
But suddenly, the illusion breaks.
 
I wake up with a start, dropping my phone in the process. I see that my whole pillow is wet with tears.
 
And then I remember...our misunderstanding, our fight and- our break up!
 
Break up! Cry The reality hits me like a ton of bricks.
 
I am overcome with multiple emotions- anger, shock, sadness, hurt...and most importantly...PAIN. Broken Heart
 
I sit by my window in solitude. My roommates are still asleep. And before I can control myself, salty water starts falling down my cheeks, making my already swollen eyes red.
 
Randhir's accusations from last night's fight still pierce me like mirror shards. The wounds are still fresh.
 
WHY? Why did he not understand...or even try to understand?
I was not supporting Renuka Ma'am...I was just trying to save him from a future of darkness and guilt. Because revenge is never the answer.
 
And I accept that his mother neglected him and spoiled his childhood...and it was horrible and also unfair to him.
 
But that phase is over...and he should forgive and let go of the past.
 
"You would choose your career over me any day!"
 
His words echo in my head. 
 
It's just so unfair! Is there something wrong in being ambitious and career oriented? And how could he relate his mother with me? Every successful woman is not like that!
 
I may have big aspirations and I may be dreaming of having a successful career...but I had dreamt of a life with him too.
 
Our marriage, our house, our kids...
 
I wanted us to have a beautiful life together.
 
But he just crushed everything. In one blow. In one minute.
 
Was our love really so weak?
 
As I wipe my tears, I realise that I still love him...despite all that happened. How I wish everything could become ok!
 
But wishes don't always come true, do they?
 
Or maybe they do.
 
I could make everything fine...
 
In fact, I will.
 
 

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:23am | IP Logged
lovely work dear !! Clap main toh emotional ho gayi CryCry
so beautifully written !! update the next part soonest Smile

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivika838

lovely work dear !! Clap main toh emotional ho gayi CryCry
so beautifully written !! update the next part soonest Smile
 
Thank you! Embarrassed
 
Will update soonish...
 
But tell me...did I get into the skin of Sanyukta's character?? Did you feel that she was narrating this part? Coz that was my goal.

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Very well written dear..ya an ambitious lady can be caring as well...but it's hard for pl to understand...nice one...

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anamika2692001

Originally posted by shivika838

lovely work dear !! Clap main toh emotional ho gayi CryCry
so beautifully written !! update the next part soonest Smile
 
Thank you! Embarrassed
 
Will update soonish...
 
But tell me...did I get into the skin of Sanyukta's character?? Did you feel that she was narrating this part? Coz that was my goal.

afcourse dear !! it was so brilliantly portrayed Big smile

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:57am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Yr it was superb
U nailed it

It was perfect
I so luved it
U truly gave justice to this part

Wtng for nxt
Update soon

Pm me

Luv u
Keep smiling

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Haye i am so late :(
Huh next time i will be on time Wink 
Firstly i wanna give u a standing audition 
U just nailed it girl Clap
Sheer briliance :) 
U know sanyukta's POV actually caused pain in my heart :( 
U beautifully portrayed her feelings 
Keep writing :) 
Thnx for the scrap LOL 

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