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Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) (Page 80)

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Posted: 17 February 2015 at 7:32am | IP Logged
This is a lovely update... glad Raman's plan worked.
Loved Romi finding out the truth and Ishu's taking care of Raman and the way they both thought aout how far they have come.

Well done, thank you very much for sharing.

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Posted: 25 February 2015 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshi.ekansh

Sorry wrong thread


Whoops! Sorry maybe I did geddit it wrong! I've been reading a lot recently and I don't even know which is what anymore! But I do read your work time to time maybe that just messed it up! 

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Posted: 25 February 2015 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Pls pls continue
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Posted: 27 February 2015 at 4:48am | IP Logged
waiting...
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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
      REVERSE STRATEGY


Scene starts in Raman's office Romi just entered there and saw the couple talking with each other.They don't have any idea on what is happening int heir surrounding s and neither did they notice Romi's precense.Romi understood why he got his bike now.But there is one more thing that brought more happiness to him than his brand new bike.It is genuine smile in his brother's face being with his lady.

He understood that they were couple just left from there not disturbing them.But fate has some other plans Raman is disturbed by another call.

Ishita was little annoyed with the disturbance but know Raman has to take the call.

Raman even though not liking the idea took the call.

Raman "Hmm bolo kyaa huan?"

Raman "Achaanak?"

Raman "Yeh mujhsey nahen hoga yaar."

Raman "Kissey aur ko bhejh nahen sakthey kyaa?"

Raman "Kabh jaana hain?"

Raman "Kahan?"

Raman "Theek hain main sham ko nikaltha hun."

Ishita was tensed by this words especially one which say he will leave today evening.

Ishita "Raman kahan jaa rahen hon aap?"

Raman  "Yaar tension math lo ek din ka kaam hain kall aajaongaa."

Ishita "Raman pehley he eek problem chal rahen hain.Fir aap abh jaayengey tho ghar mey kasiey convince karengey hummarey shaadi key liyen?"

Raman "Yaar hummarey ghar mey kuch problem nahen hain.Papa ney abhee message kiyya sabh theek hain ghar mey maa maan gayee."

Raman "Tumhaarey appa ko koi problem nahen hain.Sirf tumhaarey amma bachee hain.Who bhee yahan nahen hain.Tho main rehkar bhe kyaa kartha."

Ishita "Jaaana jaroori hain kyaa?"

Raman "Kaam hain yaar.Aaj jaonga tho ek din mey poora hojaayega nahen tho patha nahen kitney din lagengey baad mey."

Ishita "Theek hain.Khan jaana hain."

Raman "Chennai."

Ishita "Chennai?"

Ishita mind got some idea but she din't reveal any.

Ishita "Theek hain amin abhe chaltee hun."

Ishita "Phone karthey rehnaa."

Ishita leaves from there calling some one.

 

 

 

Scene starts in Chennai Mrs Chandran just entered the arena and she saw and amma and took opportunity.

Everyone are gathered in hall and it was a huge ancestral house.All gathered there with the sudden accident of elderly lady.

Mrs Chandran "Kyaa Madhu tum yahan kyon aaye?"

Amma understood that she is planning something.

Soumya "Ussko aaney key liye  kissye ney mana nahen kiyya na."

Mrs Chandran "Ayya main aisey nahen bol rahen hun.Ishit aka sagaayi hain na teen din mey tum yahan kyon aaye iss samay."

Amma was shocked as she is using hat to get on her.She spoke openly about it and everyone there were shocked by it.

Mrs Chandran "Kyaa yeh sagaayi bhee thoot gayee." She gave a sqyuilled smile as if she made a joke.

Some short lady started Madhu tuney bathaay nahen ke Ishita ke sagaayi honey waaley hain."

Some stout lady "Han Madhu tumney bathaaya nahen.Ladka kaun hain?"

Mihika who was standing there took this chance as opportunity.

Mihika "Amma periamma tension mey bathaan abhool gayee hogee.Daadi jho iss haalaath mey hain kasiey bathathee ke Akka sagaayi kar rahen hain."

Soumya "Mihika yeh theek hain ladka koun hain."

Mihika "Raman Bhalla.Mrs  Chandran aapney mila hain naa unsey."

Mrs Chandran "Han mila hain Punjabee hain."

Short lady "Punjabee.?"

Mihika "Han Main bhe emila hain unsey .Jeeju ney propose kiyya "

Stout lady "Fir bhee punjabee."

Amma don't know what to speak as Mihika is not giving a gap to let her speak.

Mihika "Aapney jeeju ko dekha nahen hain naa." Then looking at some magazine in table.

Mihika "Shaayad dekhey hongey.TV mey bahuth aathey hain."

Mihika "India ka best CEO award mila hain unhey."

Showing the front page of Buisness magazine.

All are shocked with the revealation.

Short lady "Iss Raman Bhalla.Issney Ishu ko kasiey dekha.Aur fir bhee sagaayi key baarey mey humey bathaay kyon nahen."

Mihika "Chitti aisa nahen.Raman Bhalla hain naa.Tho media following jyaada hee hogee."

Mihika "Tho media ko patha chalega tho bewajaa new banaadengey .Privacy nahen hogee naa.News avoid karney Jeeju ney simple sa plan kiyya thaa.Aur daadi ko achaanak tabyath kharaab huin tho Periamma ko aana pada."

Stout lady "Madhavi Sagaai kabh hain?"

Mihika was silent now she understood Amma has no escape now.

Amma "Friday."

Stout lady "Ayyo  sirf teen din bache hain kasiey manage karengey.Madhu tumhey humey pehley bathaana chahiyen thaa.Hum sabh manage kar lethey naa abh Ishu ko tumhaare jaroori thee.Aur tum yahan aagayee,"

Short lady "Ladka accha hain.Mainney bahuth suna hain usskey baarey mey tumhey periappa hummesha bolthey hain kee accha business man hain.New mey bhee naam bahuth aath hain."

Mrs Chandran  was puzzled on turn of events as she understood by her phone call that engagement is not gonna happen.But it is happening.

Mihika "Han jeeju bahuth pyaar karthey hain Akka sey.Ruhi bhee unke he beti hain."

Stout lady "Ruhi wohee ladkee hain naa jho Ishita ney godh liyya thaa.Bala ney "

Mihika "Who Raman bhalla key beti hain.Kissey ney kidnap kiyya thaa.Ek saal pehley ek saal Akka key pass rehrahen thee.Fir kuch din pehly hee sabh sort huan.Ruhi key liyen ek dooserey key saath time spend kar rahen they fir donon ney decide kiyya shaadi key liyye."

Short accha huan "Ishita bauth lucky hain ussey aisey pathee mil rahan hain.Bahut ache the bhagawaan ney bhee usskey saath accha ke kiyaa."

Short lady "Madhu abh tum kyaa karogee.Tum waapas kabh jaa rahen hon.Sagaai important hain na."

Madhu "Han ."

Amma don't know what to speak .

Mihika took the time gap as all are questioning Amma bout engagement and call Ishita.

Mihika "Akka plan success Amma ney maan liyya kee engagement ho rahen hain."

Ishita "Kyaa sach mey."

Mihika "Aur patha hain kabh hain iss Friday."

Ishita "Hmm thankyou Miku.Amma tho mann nahen rahen thee."

Mihika "Kya akka kyon thankyou bol rahen hon."

Mihika "Abh next part jeeju kabh aaney waaley hain."

Ishita "Flight saath bahjey pahunch jaayengee."

Mihika "Theek hain main bakee dekthee hun."

Mihika cut the calla nd rushed to croud as if big news.

 

Soumya "Mihika tum kahan jaarahen hon."

Mihika "Abhee akka ney phone kiyya thaa.Patha chala kee Jeeju kuch kaam key liyen Chennai aa rahen hain."

Soumya "Kyaa ?Kabh?"

Mihika "7'O clock flight land hogee."

Stout lady "Ek kaam karon ussey seedha yahn key aathey hain."

Mihika confused "Kyon?"

Soumya "Yeh theek hoga.Dmaath ko hum bahaar kasiey rehney dethey."

Mihika "Han fir bhee?"

Everyone declared their decision to bring Raman Bhalla there.

Mihika was left with no option.Actually her plan was same.

 

It was around 7:30 and Raman was coming out of airport was surprised to see Mihika waiting for him.

Mihika "Jeeju akka ney mujhey appoint kiyya hain.Aapko pickup karney."

Raman "Wow bahuth bade planning kee."

Mihika accompanied by few other men of house as all were excited to see Ishita's would be husband.

Raman was surprised on what is happening.

Raman "Hum jaa kahan rahen hain."

Mihika "Jeeju surprise."

It took them half an hour and they finally reached and Raman was surprised to see many people waiting to welcome him and understood that hid Madrasan did her magic.

 

 

 

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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
I am sorry .
I know all are angry at me.But plz don't thrwos sandals and tomatos.
Cost's have hiked up.
I will not make that mistake again.
I hope you like my update


Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 04 March 2015 at 10:40pm

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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
thanks for updating vikas 
its simple & sweet update ! But frankly speaking i like  " together forever" part more Wink

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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiyaa02

thanks for updating vikas 
its simple & sweet update ! But frankly speaking i like  " together forever" part more Wink

then there was no twist in story so went simple and for their bonding as I always wanted some one to show.

now there is twist in game.
their engagement and Raman's 5 day challenge,
So this side.

but now it would be more interesting as Raman in chennai as guest in Iyer house
and only Mihika of his cadder means can understand him being young

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