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Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) (Page 8)

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arunabhi

Shavi .. Interesting second part ..
Bhallas and Iyers are friends... I liked how you put forth Ishitha and Ruhi together..
Who is the next person ??


Thank u

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Jayashree.

read both the parts
story is going good
@vikas
it was a intresting start liked it so much Thumbs UpClap
@shavi
u too continued the story very well Clap Clap
eagarly waiting to read the next part
please continue soon...


Thank u so much
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Plz press like button.
How can we know whether any one is reading or not.Give your opinion frankly.

You may not know.But Sraivani made this part in short notice .
Shravani was supposed to make part no 3.
But because of no 2.Who took this challenge series as joke.Or ran away as coward unable to make it.Shravani was given notice to make post yesterday evening and she got ready with it in short time.
She deserves credit for this work and her loyality to team and team work.


Shravani you are a start buddy.




Vikas i knw i nvr mentioned my ful name its nt shivani its SHRAVANI

sorry.

I wont acpt sorries frndshp so no sorries frm nxt tym
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akshatha19

wow...
loved the second part...
@shavi2311
lovely update...
birthday concept was awesome...
Ishita and Ruhi just superb
when Raman N Ishita wished birthday in unison..very nice...


waiting for next update...



Thank u so much

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prachi_vrushan

love d 2nd part @ shavi 2311it was beautiful Mr.bhalla n Mr.iyer r friends so may b its gone interesting ruhi is birthday wow n ishra wish her wow next writer plz make Raman come to Delhi

Its glad u liked it...
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Nice one buddy.
As expected and for betterment you are taking it to safer side.
But felt little expansion would have been better in dialogues.
Then making Ruhi's real and assumed birthday same was great idea.But now my part became a let down but agreeable.Twists should be made.
Everything is perfect and I would have done the same if I were writting.
Hope no 3 is not a quitter.Old no 2 prooved to be.

You made it perfect by making Ruhi to starve but not eat without Ishita.
If I were not to break rule by making more than two scenes.I would have made it till this point.


So even if Raman makes Ishita arrested (legally can't as there is a legal police complaint on both sides and flaw can't be noticed easily of Bala so no blame) Ruhi will not eat till Ishita is there to feed her .

Awesome part.
I wish next writer is fast .Plz buddy update fast.
I have waited five days for this post.Don't break rules.

FOR ALL WRITERS.I WILL BE SENDING BASIC Line of advice for safe flow of story.

Sorry fr leting down ur updte...hop others vl justify it
I din't mean that way.
I want to say.
I could'nt think of that before.
Yaar yahan tho poora meaning hee gadbad hogayan,

leave it.
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Nice one buddy.
As expected and for betterment you are taking it to safer side.
But felt little expansion would have been better in dialogues.
Then making Ruhi's real and assumed birthday same was great idea.But now my part became a let down but agreeable.Twists should be made.
Everything is perfect and I would have done the same if I were writting.
Hope no 3 is not a quitter.Old no 2 prooved to be.

You made it perfect by making Ruhi to starve but not eat without Ishita.
If I were not to break rule by making more than two scenes.I would have made it till this point.


So even if Raman makes Ishita arrested (legally can't as there is a legal police complaint on both sides and flaw can't be noticed easily of Bala so no blame) Ruhi will not eat till Ishita is there to feed her .

Awesome part.
I wish next writer is fast .Plz buddy update fast.
I have waited five days for this post.Don't break rules.

FOR ALL WRITERS.I WILL BE SENDING BASIC Line of advice for safe flow of story.

Sorry fr leting down ur updte...hop others vl justify it

I din't mean that way.
I want to say.
I could'nt think of that before.
Yaar yahan tho poora meaning hee gadbad hogayan,

leave it.


Cool vikas... I got ur meaning... Chck ur inbox...
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Nice continuation waiting for the next part loved ishu ruhi bonding could hav expanded ramans pain in a broad way 

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