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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshi.ekansh

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Hey shravani... Another beautiful update from your side. Loved it totally ... The shopping scene and the teddy that reminds them of their first meet... The scene where Ruhi was upset with her Ishima and was running around. Raman doing masti as well and the tickling scene... It was so sweet..

But syappa on its way.. Ishita misunderstood Raman. ab let's see how he manages to manaofy her.

Great update dear.. Loved how you gave it an roothna manana angle...

thanks yar...
rootna manana is essence of ishu-ruhi bond...


nd raman hav to prve he is serious abt thm... so he was to prve ishu tht...

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AllezJustine

Wow two great updates, sorry for not replying sooner I'm having a very busy couple of weeks at work. 
Vikas I liked Raman's protectiveness for Ruhi & Ishita. 

Very interesting twist Shravani , poor Raman got in trouble while trying to protect his loved ones. 

thank u...
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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Haha, bechara raman! This was so cute we needed to see some ram-ishita-ruhi bonding and you showed it beautifully! 

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I loved all the updates so far...the story has progressed beautifully. ..well im next will update today

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivashna

Haha, bechara raman! This was so cute we needed to see some ram-ishita-ruhi bonding and you showed it beautifully! 

thanks...
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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Part 14 ...You are the one

It's been two days now. ..raman was being ignored by ishita ..he and ishita would interact with ruhi but as soon as ruhi was away ishita just wouldn't speak to raman ..raman wanted to apologise and was looking for ways and means to do so. When he was ppondering over this Mrs Bhalla saw it and questioned him
puttar ki hoya tenu ...kinna dukhi lag raha hai
kuch nahi mumma woh bas yun hi ..
puttar main jaanti hun tujhe ..kiske saath jhagda kiya hai bol de ..
arey mumma aapko aisa kyun lagta hai ki hamesha meri hi galti hai ..main bas usey bachane ki Koshish kar raha tha aur woh ulta mujhpar hi baras padi .rehne do mumma main kuch soch lunga aap tension na lo
raman got up and walked away ..Mrs Bhalla could not understand which girl was raman worried about but she thanked maata rani thinking that love has entered raman's life

raman goes to iyer house to meet ruhi
papa aap aa gaye chalo papa hum drawing banaayengey
ru baby kya banaye hum ...he said with a sad face looking at Ishita
kya hua papa aap itne sad kyun ho
kyunki mujhse koi naraaz hai ruhi ...
ishita's eyes were focused on raman when ruhi interrupted
ishima papa ko kaho ki sorry bolne se sab theek ho jata hai
nahi ruhi beta kabhi kabhi sorry kaafi nahi hota ..
just then mr iyer calls out to ruhi ...
chalo ruhi neeche khelne jayenge. ..
hearing this ruhi runs away leaving behind raman and ishita ...who were silent for long
ishita gets up to go away when raman holds her hand
leave me raman ..how dare you
no I wont leave you ..tumhe meri baat sunni padegi ...bahut ziddi ho tum ...
aapko kya laga zid sirf aap kar sakte ho ?
Raman held her hands gently in his and said...ishita I am sorry ...I didn't want u to get in trouble because of me ..
dekho shagun ko main acgi tarah se jaanta hun ..woh aurat meri choti bachi ko yunhi chodkar chali gayi..usey kidnap karvaya ..aur kho bhi diya ...if it wasnt for u ishita then main apni beti se kabhi nahi mil paata ... par woh aurat ab bhi apne dirty games khel rahi hai woh ruhi ka istemaal karna chahti hai usne ruhi ki custody ke liye apply kiya tha .. isliye main ruhi ko judge ke paas pe gaya aur meri ruhi ne tumhe chuna ishita...she chose u tumhare wajah se main case jeet gaya..meri bechari bachi toh apni biological maa ko pehchanti tak nahi..kaise pehchanegi...uss aurat ne meri bachi se pyaar hi nahi kiya...par tum ishita ..bina kisi rishte ke tumne meri beti ko apnaya aur maine bewajah tum par ilzaam lagaye ..main nahi chahta tha ki aisa kuch ho specially tumhe shagun se dur rakhna chahta tha bas isiliye ...tumbe uss din trust ki baat ki na toh mujhe realise hua ki trust issues hain mujhe ...akhir pyaar mein dhokha kha chuka hun ...insaniyat par bhi bharosa nahi raha ..par jab bhi tumhe aur meri ruhi ko dekhta hun toh pyaar mein vishwas hota hai...insaniyat par vishwas hota hai ..aur bharosa karne ka mann hota hai ki kahin na kahin bhagwaan hain jo kabhi bhi nainsaafi nahi karte ...bass yeh kehna chahta hun ..please mujhe maaf kar do
ishita who had tears in her eyes listening to raman said...maaf toh main karti par aapne kuch galat kaha
kya?
Ruhi sirf aapki nahi hai...ruhi humari hai raman ...
they both smiled because no one could deny this that ruhi was theirs
raman's phone rang and thats when he realised that his hands were entwined with hers..he let go but she was still lost in his eyes
ab chodo yaar phone toh uthane do
oops sorry was all she could say and raman went away answering the call leaving behind a smiling ishita
after a while ishita heard the doorbell ring she opened the door to find a packet lying on the doorstep it was addressed to ishita vishwanathan iyer...
she read it ..yeh tumhare liye laaya tha I know tumhe green pasand hai but im sure tum isse bhi pasand karogi wear tgis tom ...
it didn't take her time to guess that this was from raman
she opened the packet to find a beautiful blue outfit
for some reason the very fact that this was a gift from raman gave her goosebumps
ishu udhar door par kyun khadi ho...andar aao kanna
hearing these words ishita mentally smacked herself for blushing just infront of bhalla house but she thanked God when she saw that the door was closed ...little did she know that someone saw her through the little gap in the door as it wasn't closed completely. ...


not proofread ..im glad this is my 100th post so its special...your views and comments are welcome..criticism welcome too...I hope I have met ur expectations ...



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Dears,

 This thread is awesome & this story is an masterpiece. Loved it 

Writers You all are fantastic, mind-blowing, awesome, amazing lack of words at d moment. M speechless. Still thinking to write more words for appreciation but nothing comes into my mind at the momentConfused

Thank you so much for this storyBig smile

 

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