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Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) (Page 47)

shivashna Groupbie
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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shavi2311

wow...yar...excellnt...
im speechless...

raman climbng pipe tht too 3 am... nd acptd his mistake...8th wonder...
loved their coffe convo nd raman's [roposal...

amazng twst fr nxt one...


Thanks!! I hope you liked it :)

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshi.ekansh

Hey Anshika... Great part. loved the confrontation... IshRu scene was brilliantly written. Raman understanding their bond was much needed.

Maybe they are destined to be together. Maybe we are destined to be together.

Off course they are... Loved ur part. U took our story to another step.


Hey, Thank you so much buddy! Smile

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AllezJustine

Grest update yaar loved it, I've been very busy at work and did not get a chance to read it before. It wss worth the wait.
Ruhi and Ishita conversation was heart touching but like everyone else my favourite part was Raman's thoughts at the end and how he wished Ishita a good night.





Thanks a lot buddy! Smile
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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Fab part yaar ravan kumar ne galti maanli n pipe chada tha omg teenager ban gaya ha dikte toh aise hi n he poured his heart out to ishita grt improvement. u wrote well yaar dint look like  it was ur first piece

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 9:16am | IP Logged
just superb loved it

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 9:30am | IP Logged
superb update yr.!!

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Beautiful update Shivashna. You make Raman fighting with his inner was good and he want to set it right  by going to propose Ishu. May be next update she will say yes but I love to see her bonding with Raman first before they getting marry.i like your Idea to put Raman to climb the pipe to sneak to Ishu house cause we will not see this side on TV.Wink

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 10:57am | IP Logged
@SHIIVASHNA
nice buddy...
Raman inner talk the turmoil amazing shown,
 he climbing pipe  was unbelievable, that to at 3am...
Madhavi would have banged himLOLLOL, were slingthly escaped ...
IshRa convo was so nice, esp proposal last three lines was too gud...

waiting for the next writer's update...




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