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Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) (Page 42)

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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshi.ekansh

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It was an amazing update nikki. Loved how Ruhi all in her innocent way told Raman that she loves her Ishima a lot... And The Iyers explained the situation finally to them. You portrayed the emotions so well.

Great job...


thanku so much...
glad u loved it..
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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 10:27am | IP Logged
beautiful update...
IshRu scenes perfectly portrait,
 the emotional part was brilliant esp...
insecurities of ishita was really very nice...
Raman getting know about  Ishita was really good...
Ruhi lines was just the best ...

i loved Raman lines- "Maybe Ishita and Ruhi are destined to be together.. Maybe WE are destined to be together!"... 
WE words used perfectly yaar
 just amazing...

well written...

p.s - i feel next person who is writing if possible  make IshRa fall in love with each other...




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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 11:01am | IP Logged
"Maybe Ishita and Ruhi are destined to be together.. Maybe WE are destined to be together!"
This was just magical. Perfect way to end.

I really liked seeing Raman softening towards Ishita a bit, seeing how much she loves Ruhi, and most importantly admitting that she may love Ruhi more than him.

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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Lovely update Anshi glad Raman can see the bond Ruhi and Iahita share together so he knows that not only he love Ruhi and set receive uncondition love but Ishu too get same equal share or may be little bit more than him good point dear.Now Atlease he accept that it is better that Ruhi had stay with Ishu than go to orphanage so MU is clear. Like to see next part that Raman try to get along with Ishu and her family to made up for his MU and he can slowly develope some feeling for Ishu may be get some light moment and romantic next update.Smile

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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Nikki...sabse pehle to kaan pakadke sorry yrr
my internet was not working since two days..i know it should not be something which I should hav missed but i hate this reliance vale now

Coming to update
fab fab fab...aww...m proud of myself nowTonguejo case maine dala tha acha jawab diya...perfect ending to the drama sequence
and ruman...aww...i could feel for ruhi...and i knew she wpuld miss her ishima...poor girl is afraid of going away from her dad and also wants to meet her ishima
so..perfect ground set finally..noe waiting for ishra story to behin
Kept the expectation...baby its more than I expected..loved itt yr..totally
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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Beautiful update

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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update anshi
yaa...it was much needed to take story to next level
and raman trying to woo ishita is a great idea
am already imagining the scenes
cant wait to see how the next writer takes it
loved how you explained ishraru emotions
and that goodnyt part was really beautiful
good job anshi
i liked your writing
and pls if u write somethung next tym..do let me know through a pm pls

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