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Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) (Page 40)

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nividances

What happens next? Are we repeating the list or having other people continue? I see that no one else has signed up for the next chapters. I would like to write another part if it's allowed. Smile
we will be repeating cycle after the list complete again starts from 1.means me.
after maya writes


Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 January 2015 at 2:39pm

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by nividances

What happens next? Are we repeating the list or having other people continue? I see that no one else has signed up for the next chapters. I would like to write another part if it's allowed. Smile
we will be repeating cycle after the list complete again starts from 1.means me.
after maya writes

Okay, got it. Thumbs Up
Thanks. Smile

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
The first part is simply awesome

Ishita's strong relationship with cute little Ruhi and Raman's hard time missing his daughter, the only love and his life are beautifully written.

Bala should be punished severely by the authorities and get suspended for not taking the case serious willingly for his own family member's benefit.

Read the second part a little.

Ishu's bond grew with Ruhi in this one year so much that she became a part of her and feeling bad for Raman.

Bhallas shouldn't have left Raman like that. They should have been with him in his saddest days.


Will read all the parts from now.

TM, it is really a great writing style. It helps good team work, dealing with challenges, sharpening mind, builds up creativity and what not.



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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Edited the comment on pg 37
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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Very nicely explained abt ruhis love for ishima n its gud that raman understood his daughter's plight for mother .their convo was very emotional n bala explained evrythng crystal clearly .loved the whole part n title was so apt now awaiting nxt part

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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Beautiful update buddy and Congratulations to you for turning dazzler! Smile

And now it's my turn, and will post the update, probably by tonight! Smile

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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Finally got a chance to read your update Nikki I was a little bit scared by the title I don't knoe why.. But I really loved it especially the conversation of Papa and daughter it was done brilliantly. . Ruhi's drawing was something I realy was hopping soneone will use in in to the story and I'm happy you did.
Great job


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Loved both parts by Aruna and Nikki can't wait for the next part

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