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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Accolades to all the writers involved here. Such impressive work. I tell you. I'm amazed at this retelling. Truly amazed. 

Just a suggestion, please ignore if it hurts any feelings. Can we have a beta reader? Due to contrasting writers and different people writing it and the styles that vary, can we have someone to beta read it? It's no issue with the writing or the flow, just a bit of final polishing.  

On a lighter note. This is amazing. Do you'll have a group or thread where you'll discuss the plot line? The DFL team for PYKEK did something and we had a group on FB where we discussed everything out. Or us everything post here on a first time basis? 

Reading this makes me want to participate, but I won't do any justice. Shall look out for title updates. 

Keep up the good word. ;) 


Edited by AraBearxx - 10 January 2015 at 12:51pm

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Nice update thank to Bala had come and clear MU. And now Raman talk to Ruhi and can understand that Ruhi also love Ishu and he let her go to visit her.Hope next meeting will be very emotional one and Raman can be soften for Ihsu. Waiting for next part.Smile

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Originally posted by AraBearxx

Accolades to all the writers involved here. Such impressive work. U tell you. I'm amazed at this retelling. Truly amazed. 

Just a suggestion, please ignore if it hurts any feelings. Can we have a beta reader. Due to contrasting writers and different people writing it and the styles that vary, can we have someone to beta read it? It's no issue with the writing or the flow, just a bit of final polishing.  

On a lighter note. This is amazing. Do you'll have a group or thread where you'll discuss the plot line? The DFL team for PYKEK did something and we had a group on FB where we discussed everything out. Or us everything post here on a first time basis? 

Reading this makes me want to participate, but I won't do any justice. Shall look out for title updates. 

Jeep up the good word. ;) 
everyone writes theri own thought.No previous planning.
This time list is over.We would be sure making another thread after this one finishes,

If many are ready we can open one simultaneously too.We would be happy if  you have suggestion plz share with us.
Actually main idea is that they have to continue others work with their own twist so discussion would be deviating.So we can make other thread we can make that rules.

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 12:58pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM



everyone writes theri own thought.No previous planning.
This time list is over.We would be sure making another thread after this one finishes,

If many are ready we can open one simultaneously too.We would be happy if  you have suggestion plz share with us.
Actually main idea is that they have to continue others work with their own twist so discussion would be deviating.So we can make other thread we can make that rules.






Reply begins from here.. Why? Because quoting with mobile version of IF is worse than the site itself. 



A beta reader? That's what I suggested. Reading this in one go. The story does flow but you have to swiftly adapt to different styles abruptly. If we could have a beta reader who could just weave together everything. But then on another note since everyone is reading it part by part rather than in one go the difference would go unnoticed.
What I like about this is how the story flows. It picks off right where the previous individual leaves it. That's impressive. On how it's perfectly passed on. Read impressive. 

Suggestions? On what? 

Nah. Too busy with real life. Wouldn't join this even on another thread. I have so many pending works that I feel bad for as it is. 


Edited by AraBearxx - 10 January 2015 at 1:11pm

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Hello
Finally, Bala came and Ruhi said her feelings.
But unfortunately, I didn't understand everything because I don't know Hindi.

(Sorry !!! I know I always complaint about it. Everyone had done a GREAT job with their writing. Thank you very very much.)

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AraBearxx


Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM



everyone writes theri own thought.No previous planning.
This time list is over.We would be sure making another thread after this one finishes,

If many are ready we can open one simultaneously too.We would be happy if  you have suggestion plz share with us.
Actually main idea is that they have to continue others work with their own twist so discussion would be deviating.So we can make other thread we can make that rules.






Reply begins from here.. Why? Because quoting with mobile version of IF is worse than the site itself. 



A beta reader? That's what I suggested. Reading this in one go. The story does flow but you have to swiftly adapt to different styles abruptly. If we could have a beta reader who could just weave together everything. But then on another note since everyone is reading it part by part rather than in one go the difference would go unnoticed.
What I like about this is how the story flows. It picks off right where the previous individual leaves it. That's impressive. On how it's perfectly passed on. Read impressive. 

Suggestions? On what? 

Nah. Too busy with real life. Wouldn't join this even on another thread. I have so many pending works that I feel bad for as it is. 
Suggestion on improvising the thread.What else.
As it is the starting all is not formulated well.So just asked as you said you previously worked on similar concept.

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by adlin1784

Hello
Finally, Bala came and Ruhi said her feelings.
But unfortunately, I didn't understand everything because I don't know Hindi.

(Sorry !!! I know I always complaint about it. Everyone had done a GREAT job with their writing. Thank you very very much.)

Will add subtitles tomorrow..!! and will pm u regarding it.! Smile

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Destroyed For Love 

Worked on this. It was massive on a larger scale. We had episodes. Every Sunday, I think. Got busy in life mid way so wasn't fully a part of it. I confess. We had newspaper articles, videos, vlogs, merged videos, publishing, interviews and so much more. It was a thrilling expertise and time consuming too. We basically discussed the plot line, plotted and then selected people to write it. It was a huge process. The discussing. Writing. And the editing. And it was a mass effort. Like so many of us agreeing on one flow and merging our ideas. We should do it for YHM. In September or October. I wanna start it here. It's gonna be my baby. The forums retelling of YHM. AH I'M EXCITED ALREADY!! So much for having an exam in 24 hours. Need to hit the books. 


Coming to this. 

It's fine till now. It flows. And that's all matters. The editing team can sit and edit it after everything is done. 


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