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Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) (Page 30)

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by usaonly

Wonderful update Ankita very emotional one the way you write can feel Ishu state of mine going through trauma.Suddenly turn of meeting for Raman and Ruhi made situation worst for Ishu her fear of loosing Ruhi come dead infront of her.Wondering in the past when they got Ruhi they must find the case of lost child and they adopt her cause Bala is the police so he must done all this formality for Ishu right. Hope Ruhi will clear Raman and Bhalla family that Ishu not Kidnaps her and bring her to hospital to save her Ishima.I trust Aru she will bring it on to higher level of this story.All of the writers here are wonderful writer . I really appreciate your talents and affords you put in this story. Thank you once again dear.ClapClapClap
aww...thnks for liking it yrrr
it really really means a lot
I know I couldnt match the expectations of you people but still you have appreciated so much..m just humbled
and yess..me too trust aruna di a lot
dont worry she will do much better job with this story and can surely take it to a higher level
we all will love it..

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akshatha19

OMG !!! 
what an update...
finally Raman and ruhi met each other...
but the pain ishita has gone through pictured unexceptionally superb...
each and every line just  wow... ankita..

brilliantly written ClapClap
just loved it...


thanks a lot dear
Thete are some people who are always there to read watever you may write and you are one among them
m really glad to hear from you
thnks fir liking the emotional part

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 11:12am | IP Logged
wonderful update ankita
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankita_sidana

Originally posted by AllezJustine

Good update dear, but very sad you made me cry. Loved Raman and Ruhi's reunion.  But Ishita's pain was heart aching and very emotional.
Where the hell is that stupid Bala this was all his falt he needs to fix this.

Good job yaar
so srry if it was not wat u expected or wanted dear
I just wrote what I felt like..hit and miss couldn't be carried to every part..hope u dont mind
thnks for liking
as for bala..he has ran away due to fear..lol

No yaar I liked your addition to the story. And you are right the hit and miss can't continue for ever. 

I also liked the newspaper scene 

Bala has to come he is the only one who can help Ishita, he got her into this trouble 

waiting for next update
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Yes Bala can easily clear everything.Without himself getting in trouble.
Yes Ishita took Ruhi from police and was legally holding Ruhi with police interference.
Original kidnappers are caught by BALA.
Then Ruhi's kidnap case never reached CHENNAI for them to know that Ruhi is Raman's daughter.

ISHITA is broken with Ruhi gone and not able to stay in sences.

Her parents were broken seing her in that state.

BALA has to make entry.He can solve it in minutes as he would be having legal complaint over kid found.

Just Bala can save Ishita from police .
But to bring Ishita back to life.
RUHI is much essential

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Expected situation frm raman
nicely portrayed ish's trauma

waiting 4 ruman scene

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
ankita this was awesome yar
the start was as usual BT u made totally emotional
u made m cry girl
ruman meet ishu's condition
everything

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Great part very emotional.
But WHY Ishita has to bear this ? It's heartbroken. And we know Raman won't be easily pacified even with Ruhi's words.
Now as everyone else I can't wait for the next part.

(But PLEASE again is it possible to have english translation for dialogues especially with long phrases. It's a humble request. I'm afraid to miss important things said in the dialogues when written in Hindi. Thanks again.)

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