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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

u hav startd it vikas...so u didnt faced it...
i hop u vl face som presre wen nxt turn comes to u...
the way u wrote frst updte was spell bound...continuation of it is nxt to impoos task fr me... bt i did it as a challnge...nd by seeing u all...i wrked very les on it...
Who said starter wil not have pressure.
It is based on starter thta whole story runs.
It was my duty to make proper base for the story so that it goes goo.


Even slightest mistake of mine counts bigger than that of now.everyone have pressure but different way.
then as eagerly waiting for next turn of mine.
I just hope they don't drop me in romance zone.
It is my acchilis heel .Have never written any perfect romatic scene.
I envy all for that.
starts hav presre bt nt the presre continuers hav...

if  u get romnce part gve to 3rd one... even i m bad at it...writng is okay bt romnce nd matre is out my comfrt zone... i really cant justify...

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

u hav startd it vikas...so u didnt faced it...
i hop u vl face som presre wen nxt turn comes to u...
the way u wrote frst updte was spell bound...continuation of it is nxt to impoos task fr me... bt i did it as a challnge...nd by seeing u all...i wrked very les on it...
Who said starter wil not have pressure.
It is based on starter thta whole story runs.
It was my duty to make proper base for the story so that it goes goo.


Even slightest mistake of mine counts bigger than that of now.everyone have pressure but different way.
then as eagerly waiting for next turn of mine.
I just hope they don't drop me in romance zone.
It is my acchilis heel .Have never written any perfect romatic scene.
I envy all for that.
starts hav presre bt nt the presre continuers hav...

if  u get romnce part gve to 3rd one... even i m bad at it...writng is okay bt romnce nd matre is out my comfrt zone... i really cant justify...
If I got them I will escape giving some random twist.Pressure on you then.
Nice fun right.
Then waiting for ankitha's part.she is no where since morning.usually she would be there.

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

u hav startd it vikas...so u didnt faced it...
i hop u vl face som presre wen nxt turn comes to u...
the way u wrote frst updte was spell bound...continuation of it is nxt to impoos task fr me... bt i did it as a challnge...nd by seeing u all...i wrked very les on it...
Who said starter wil not have pressure.
It is based on starter thta whole story runs.
It was my duty to make proper base for the story so that it goes goo.


Even slightest mistake of mine counts bigger than that of now.everyone have pressure but different way.
then as eagerly waiting for next turn of mine.
I just hope they don't drop me in romance zone.
It is my acchilis heel .Have never written any perfect romatic scene.
I envy all for that.
starts hav presre bt nt the presre continuers hav...

if  u get romnce part gve to 3rd one... even i m bad at it...writng is okay bt romnce nd matre is out my comfrt zone... i really cant justify...
If I got them I will escape giving some random twist.Pressure on you then.
Nice fun right.
Then waiting for ankitha's part.she is no where since morning.usually she would be there.
dont gve romntic parts yar... i vl brng new pairs thn nd i vl skip it...
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Fabulous update, can't wait for the next one.
I so want Raman and Ruhi to be re-united.. But yes, Ishita should not be there with her at that time. Ishita should be introduced to Raman by Ruhi as her Ishima by Ruhi itself after the father and the daughter had enough time to talk and cry their heart out.


Edited by abhilasha_dream - 04 January 2015 at 2:54am

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

u hav startd it vikas...so u didnt faced it...
i hop u vl face som presre wen nxt turn comes to u...
the way u wrote frst updte was spell bound...continuation of it is nxt to impoos task fr me... bt i did it as a challnge...nd by seeing u all...i wrked very les on it...
Who said starter wil not have pressure.
It is based on starter thta whole story runs.
It was my duty to make proper base for the story so that it goes goo.


Even slightest mistake of mine counts bigger than that of now.everyone have pressure but different way.
then as eagerly waiting for next turn of mine.
I just hope they don't drop me in romance zone.
It is my acchilis heel .Have never written any perfect romatic scene.
I envy all for that.
starts hav presre bt nt the presre continuers hav...

if  u get romnce part gve to 3rd one... even i m bad at it...writng is okay bt romnce nd matre is out my comfrt zone... i really cant justify...
If I got them I will escape giving some random twist.Pressure on you then.
Nice fun right.
Then waiting for ankitha's part.she is no where since morning.usually she would be there.
dont gve romntic parts yar... i vl brng new pairs thn nd i vl skip it...
I am an expert in crazy twists.Pressure on others.
Then never mind we work as a team we can manage.
There are ten more to help us .they will definitly help us in it.
Good thing about this we are not alone.We have friends to help in it.

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

u hav startd it vikas...so u didnt faced it...
i hop u vl face som presre wen nxt turn comes to u...
the way u wrote frst updte was spell bound...continuation of it is nxt to impoos task fr me... bt i did it as a challnge...nd by seeing u all...i wrked very les on it...
Who said starter wil not have pressure.
It is based on starter thta whole story runs.
It was my duty to make proper base for the story so that it goes goo.


Even slightest mistake of mine counts bigger than that of now.everyone have pressure but different way.
then as eagerly waiting for next turn of mine.
I just hope they don't drop me in romance zone.
It is my acchilis heel .Have never written any perfect romatic scene.
I envy all for that.
starts hav presre bt nt the presre continuers hav...

if  u get romnce part gve to 3rd one... even i m bad at it...writng is okay bt romnce nd matre is out my comfrt zone... i really cant justify...
If I got them I will escape giving some random twist.Pressure on you then.
Nice fun right.
Then waiting for ankitha's part.she is no where since morning.usually she would be there.
dont gve romntic parts yar... i vl brng new pairs thn nd i vl skip it...
I am an expert in crazy twists.Pressure on others.
Then never mind we work as a team we can manage.
There are ten more to help us .they will definitly help us in it.
Good thing about this we are not alone.We have friends to help in it.
writng is jst lik refreshng nd recreatng myself...its lik a stress bustr comptly diffrnt...njying it...

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by abhilasha_dream

Fabulous update, can't wait for the next one.
I so want Raman and Ruhi to be re-united.. But yes, Ishita should not be there with her at that time. Ishita should be introduced to Ruhi as her Is him a by Ruhi.

Thanks a lot! That's a nice idea to have Ruhi introduce her Ishima...let's see what happens.
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 2:53am | IP Logged
wow... superb update...
Just loved it...
Raman flashback Ruhi... awwah cute...
IshRa elevator scene just enjoyed it...

this is getting too interesting..awesome..
thanks  nivi...









Edited by Akshatha19 - 04 January 2015 at 2:52am

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