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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nividances

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

it was god buddy.
really liked nok jhok's .
Yup next is ankitha.
I just hope it wont come back to me to unite them.just kidding.
We have stopped in number od times/
But really a nice and elegant part.
It would be nice if they get to know Ishita before they know Ruhi is with Ishita

Thanks Vikas. I agree that it is important for the Bhalla's to interact with Ishita before they find out about Ruhi so they don't doubt Ishita and Ruhi's bond. That's why I had a small interaction between Toshi and Ishita. Hope the next person gives more interactions between Ishita and the Bhallas. I want Ishita and Raman to both see the good side of each other before the big clash over Ruhi between them. Although the end is obvious to me, Ruhi can't live without her Ishima so her papa will get an Ishima free when Ruhi returns to him. LOL It will be nice to see exactly how the story wraps up though.
funny thing is we are writting the story and we ourself don't know what is going to happen.
The way story is running.I think it will come back to me to unite them or start marriage talks.

but very nice part buddy.
Next is ankitha .no problem we can trust her as we trust ourself.
She will do what is needed to be done.


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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
tak a bow...
its wonderful...
excellntly written...
whose nxt...??

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by nividances

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

it was god buddy.
really liked nok jhok's .
Yup next is ankitha.
I just hope it wont come back to me to unite them.just kidding.
We have stopped in number od times/
But really a nice and elegant part.
It would be nice if they get to know Ishita before they know Ruhi is with Ishita

Thanks Vikas. I agree that it is important for the Bhalla's to interact with Ishita before they find out about Ruhi so they don't doubt Ishita and Ruhi's bond. That's why I had a small interaction between Toshi and Ishita. Hope the next person gives more interactions between Ishita and the Bhallas. I want Ishita and Raman to both see the good side of each other before the big clash over Ruhi between them. Although the end is obvious to me, Ruhi can't live without her Ishima so her papa will get an Ishima free when Ruhi returns to him. LOL It will be nice to see exactly how the story wraps up though.
funny thing is we are writting the story and we ourself don't know what is going to happen.
The way story is running.I think it will come back to me to unite them or start marriage talks.

but very nice part buddy.
Next is ankitha .no problem we can trust her as we trust ourself.
She will do what is needed to be done.


obviously ankita make it reach new heights no doubt in that...
evn i dont wht comes up2 me nxt...
byseeing each updte...im sacred yar... i dont i can do justice or not...

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shavi2311

tak a bow...
its wonderful...
excellntly written...
whose nxt...??

Thanks Shavi! Smile

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by nividances

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

it was god buddy.
really liked nok jhok's .
Yup next is ankitha.
I just hope it wont come back to me to unite them.just kidding.
We have stopped in number od times/
But really a nice and elegant part.
It would be nice if they get to know Ishita before they know Ruhi is with Ishita

Thanks Vikas. I agree that it is important for the Bhalla's to interact with Ishita before they find out about Ruhi so they don't doubt Ishita and Ruhi's bond. That's why I had a small interaction between Toshi and Ishita. Hope the next person gives more interactions between Ishita and the Bhallas. I want Ishita and Raman to both see the good side of each other before the big clash over Ruhi between them. Although the end is obvious to me, Ruhi can't live without her Ishima so her papa will get an Ishima free when Ruhi returns to him. LOL It will be nice to see exactly how the story wraps up though.
funny thing is we are writting the story and we ourself don't know what is going to happen.
The way story is running.I think it will come back to me to unite them or start marriage talks.

but very nice part buddy.
Next is ankitha .no problem we can trust her as we trust ourself.
She will do what is needed to be done.


obviously ankita make it reach new heights no doubt in that...
evn i dont wht comes up2 me nxt...
byseeing each updte...im sacred yar... i dont i can do justice or not...
we just have to do our best.It will automatically works.
I think I am the only to not take pressure yet.
but it won't help.So chill and read untill our turn comes again

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:06am | IP Logged
ohh my godd... this is freaking awesome... read all the stories in a go... mindblowing yaar..

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by shavi2311

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

Originally posted by nividances

Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

it was god buddy.
really liked nok jhok's .
Yup next is ankitha.
I just hope it wont come back to me to unite them.just kidding.
We have stopped in number od times/
But really a nice and elegant part.
It would be nice if they get to know Ishita before they know Ruhi is with Ishita

Thanks Vikas. I agree that it is important for the Bhalla's to interact with Ishita before they find out about Ruhi so they don't doubt Ishita and Ruhi's bond. That's why I had a small interaction between Toshi and Ishita. Hope the next person gives more interactions between Ishita and the Bhallas. I want Ishita and Raman to both see the good side of each other before the big clash over Ruhi between them. Although the end is obvious to me, Ruhi can't live without her Ishima so her papa will get an Ishima free when Ruhi returns to him. LOL It will be nice to see exactly how the story wraps up though.
funny thing is we are writting the story and we ourself don't know what is going to happen.
The way story is running.I think it will come back to me to unite them or start marriage talks.

but very nice part buddy.
Next is ankitha .no problem we can trust her as we trust ourself.
She will do what is needed to be done.


obviously ankita make it reach new heights no doubt in that...
evn i dont wht comes up2 me nxt...
byseeing each updte...im sacred yar... i dont i can do justice or not...
we just have to do our best.It will automatically works.
I think I am the only to not take pressure yet.
but it won't help.So chill and read untill our turn comes again
u hav startd it vikas...so u didnt faced it...
i hop u vl face som presre wen nxt turn comes to u...
the way u wrote frst updte was spell bound...continuation of it is nxt to impoos task fr me... bt i did it as a challnge...nd by seeing u all...i wrked very les on it...

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shavi2311

u hav startd it vikas...so u didnt faced it...
i hop u vl face som presre wen nxt turn comes to u...
the way u wrote frst updte was spell bound...continuation of it is nxt to impoos task fr me... bt i did it as a challnge...nd by seeing u all...i wrked very les on it...
Who said starter wil not have pressure.
It is based on starter thta whole story runs.
It was my duty to make proper base for the story so that it goes goo.


Even slightest mistake of mine counts bigger than that of now.everyone have pressure but different way.
then as eagerly waiting for next turn of mine.
I just hope they don't drop me in romance zone.
It is my acchilis heel .Have never written any perfect romatic scene.
I envy all for that.

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