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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
 

Wonderful update I love the hit and miss both of them so annoy together. Thing are going well this way more fun to read Ruhi just  in front of their house they still not awear of it.Thank you so much Nivi for English update you so sweet girl. Smile

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Mine mine mine. Wonderful update nivi. Loved the bond and the urge Mr Iyer had towards Raman.

Ruhi saying Rish Rish was utterly cute.

Ishra met again. And the nok jhok part was superb. Ishita is still insecure. .

Bhalla family is unaware of the fact that there happiness is waiting next door for them...

superb update. Waiting eagerly for next part.

Splendid job...

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
it was god buddy.
really liked nok jhok's .
Yup next is ankitha.
I just hope it wont come back to me to unite them.just kidding.
We have stopped in number od times/
But really a nice and elegant part.
It would be nice if they get to know Ishita before they know Ruhi is with Ishita

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

it was god buddy.
really liked nok jhok's .
Yup next is ankitha.
I just hope it wont come back to me to unite them.just kidding.
We have stopped in number od times/
But really a nice and elegant part.
It would be nice if they get to know Ishita before they know Ruhi is with Ishita



I completely agree Vikas... Knowing Ishita prior would lessen their worry and they could imagine how much love Ishita has for Ruhi...

The story is getting interesting...

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
awesome dear
seriously ishita's plight u described very well
n too bonus ishra first meet n nokjhok
its gone a interesting
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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by usaonly

 

Wonderful update I love the hit and miss both of them so annoy together. Thing are going well this way more fun to read Ruhi just  in front of their house they still not awear of it.Thank you so much Nivi for English update you so sweet girl. Smile

Thanks a lot for commenting! Glad you enjoyed it. Your welcome for the English translations (I saw your post before I posted my part so I added them in at the last moment). 

I think it's nice for IshRa to have some sort of equation before Raman and Ruhi unite. Right now they don't like each other but it would be nice to have a few moments of both of them seeing each other's good side. 

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshi.ekansh

Mine mine mine. Wonderful update nivi. Loved the bond and the urge Mr Iyer had towards Raman. 

Ruhi saying Rish Rish was utterly cute. 

Ishra met again. And the nok jhok part was superb. Ishita is still insecure. . 

Bhalla family is unaware of the fact that there happiness is waiting next door for them...

superb update. Waiting eagerly for next part. 

Splendid job...

Thanks Sakshi! Ruhi is such a cute doll and I couldn't resist making her even more adorable.
Glad you liked it, although you gave me a good part to follow up with so thanks to you for that.
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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM

it was god buddy.
really liked nok jhok's .
Yup next is ankitha.
I just hope it wont come back to me to unite them.just kidding.
We have stopped in number od times/
But really a nice and elegant part.
It would be nice if they get to know Ishita before they know Ruhi is with Ishita

Thanks Vikas. I agree that it is important for the Bhalla's to interact with Ishita before they find out about Ruhi so they don't doubt Ishita and Ruhi's bond. That's why I had a small interaction between Toshi and Ishita. Hope the next person gives more interactions between Ishita and the Bhallas. I want Ishita and Raman to both see the good side of each other before the big clash over Ruhi between them. Although the end is obvious to me, Ruhi can't live without her Ishima so her papa will get an Ishima free when Ruhi returns to him. LOL It will be nice to see exactly how the story wraps up though.

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