Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 24

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

so srry if it was not wat u expected or wanted dear

I just wrote what I felt like..hit and miss couldn't be carried to every part..hope u dont mind

thnks for liking

as for bala..he has ran away due to fear..lol

Originally posted by: nividances

That was really great Ankita! I'm glad that you made Raman and Ruhi meet, but Ishita's state is terrible without Ruhi, as expected. Great job carrying the story along. I am really looking forward to a Raman-Ruhi conversation in the next part. 

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

I know what I updated was not what you people wanted. But according to me hit and miss was already shown much. How long can we drag one thing. And about Ishita meeting family first, I think however much we know someone. That feel that your daughter is with them from past one year will earn a person nothing but hatred. Atleast first step will be angry reaction only. How can one simply let go of such a big issue. That too when the person is Raman kumar Bhalla. Even Bala is nothing in front of him. We should not forget his character. Moreover, when Ishita ruhi bonding, ishra nok jhok and family members knowing ishra was introduced, I loved those ideas. But whole story...all parts cant be taken on that only. If you people wanted me to just write a part involving some family moments, knowing each other and hit and miss of ruman then it would just have been extended. I simply wanted to add more to this story. Everyone has one's own views about everything. And I think that was the purpose of this thread...to build up a story using many brains.

Sorry for disappointing you people. I couldnt keep up your expectations. But i wrote what I felt like. In one part you can put focus on one thing only. And my focus was Ishita. And I am glad it didnt come out that bad. 

Srry once again. I didnt mean to spoil someone's mood. Thats all my point of view.