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SAKIVIAM
SAKIV @SAKIVIAM IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Akshatha19



i wish next person at least make them meet...
I don't wish same.
I need little more.
I need insecurities of Ishita coming out now and fear of loosing her.
I wish Sakshi gets chance to write their reunion part
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shivashna
shivashna @shivashna Groupbie Inactive
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey
This seems really interesting and I feel that each writer has done amazingly! The next time you do this kind of challenge, please inform me as I would love to try contribute a bit as well! :) 
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AllezJustine
Zami @AllezJustine Senior Member
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sakshi.ekansh


Great part Zami.
Raman's turmoil and pain was shown excellently.. Ruhi recognised her papa. Felt bad for her. Let's see we make her meet her papa soon.

Waiting for the next part.

Thanks yaar, I so wanted Ruhi to remember her father so it wouldn't be uncomfortable for her when they meet

Waiting for the next update
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AllezJustine
Zami @AllezJustine Senior Member
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM


Awesome part buddy.
It was really perfectly imaginable.
Ruhi just remembers none except his father an her present world Ishima.
Mihika is there.Whole Raman's army ti fight Ishita.

Can't wait for next part.
Ishita would be broken if Ruhi is taken away from her.

Thanks Vikas, your start lead me to this so thank you for a very interesting and different storyline.

Raman was like a mother to Ruhi so its normal that she would remember him. 
I'm getting excited..
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AllezJustine
Zami @AllezJustine Senior Member
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM


I don't wish same.
I need little more.
I need insecurities of Ishita coming out now and fear of loosing her.
I wish Sakshi gets chance to write their reunion part

Yah I think it would be interesting to explore Ishita's feelings and reaction.
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Ant way kets see what happens
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Akshatha19
Akshatha @Akshatha19 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM


I don't wish same.
I need little more.
I need insecurities of Ishita coming out now and fear of loosing her.
I wish Sakshi gets chance to write their reunion part

ya but i felt bad for Ruhi ... 
will hope sakshi has unique ideas abt her story...
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SAKIVIAM
SAKIV @SAKIVIAM IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Akshatha19



ya but i felt bad for Ruhi ... 
will hope sakshi has unique ideas abt her story...
Ruhi never remembered him till she heard his voice.
She loves both of them equally.But she got habituated to Ishita .

Still now every one showed Raman's emotional side as he missed Ruhi.
Then in Ishita and Ruhi scenes their bond is mentioned.
But not effect of Ruhi on Ishita and how much Ishita is fragile without Ruhi.
Ishita's insecurities are not mentioned.So every one i ssympathizing Raman.It is right but Ruhi is soul for both Ishita and Raman's life
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AllezJustine
Zami @AllezJustine Senior Member
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by harichandana


Omg its perfectly unimaginable nvr expected this in tis part . could imagine all the feelings of raman in this part awesome buddy perfectly hope they meet soon n waiting for ishitas reaction .please update soon nxt member

Thank you. Glad I surprised you with an unexpected scene.😃

I'm also waiting for the next updates
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AllezJustine
Zami @AllezJustine Senior Member
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Yhm-KaruDivu


So beautiful . I loved this . 
Guys , doing a great job . Keep it up . 

Thanks keep reading I'm sure it will get better and better
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AllezJustine
Zami @AllezJustine Senior Member
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by abhilasha_dream


Awww... Plz reunite my lil Ruhi with dear Raman fast... I can't see them craving more... Ishita is good but Ruhi and Raman are suffering due to Bala's selfishness... Bala should be punished for this.

You know I wonder what will happen to Bala what he did was not far, but then its not Ishita's fault why should she suffer. Lets wait and watch
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