Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 4

Originally posted by: usaonly

Nice concept for all of you.I have a request i like to read the story but can't understand Hindi kindly have some English translation will be grate for me and some other friends who can't understand Hindi too. Thank you.😊

awww nice start...

Wow totally different sinerio
Ishu and ruhi are together since 1 year
But hope she doesn't end up in any problem
Raman finding his daughter
Waiting to read further

Originally posted by: Nichuss

awww nice start...

with suspence and kidnapping...OMG...

i just wish ishu wont end in big problems... due to raman...

ruhi has become a smart ishimma girl...

bala was wrong being selfish...

but for ishu ruhi became life savior...

waiting for ruhi meeting raman aftr 1 year...

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 9 years ago

Great start Vikas very interesting story line different from TV show. Hope next person will continue in the the good role too.And thank you for consider my request hope other writer will do too.👏👏

dialogues added in english

hehehe...i don't know when did i became a part of this..!! 🤣

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

hehehe...i don't know when did i became a part of this..!! 🤣

It would surely be done by either ankita di or aruna di..!! well loved to be a part of this competition..!! Will be waiting for updates..!! Though till now i am at last position..!! That means i am ending this..!! Will catch up with updates soon..!! 

continue soon. writers..!! 

Edited by AllezJustine - 9 years ago

@SAKIV-RAM
well started superb starting..u did  vikas..this challenge concept n idea is great...opening batsman VIKAS has done very well making a six in first attempt with a not out tag..lets see what other batsmen/writer comes up to...it was really very interesting to read ..

waiting for the next part. whose next buddy?