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New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8) (Page 8)

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 8:09am | IP Logged


                                                                     
                                             Part One

Hotel  Marine Plaza in Mumbai

Two hansome guys sitting near the window,facing to the sea,"Arey yar Ram,where is she???it's getting late,I told you these girls have no standard,punctuality etc etc etc...how u guys fall in love with these crazy people...unbelievable!!!!!

Oho my angry young man,,the great Shlok Agnihothri,they will come,plz wait na,just 10 more minutes,for me...plzzz...once u fall in love u will understand my situation,buddy...

Shlok:ok,but only 10 more minutes...and what did u say,Me..In LOVE !! ha ha good jok..but highly impossible..

Ram:not impossible,it's possible..we will see(winked)

Shlok:ofcz,we will see...

After 5 minues,2 beautiful girls entered in to the hotel room,and walking towards the table occupied by our handsome's..

Shlok :What the???what she doing here???

Ram :who?

Shlok :Arey wo,that drama queen kirlosker.

Ram :(try to control laugh)wo,she is best friend of saya.

Shlok:What??but..

Ram :(cut of his words)cool buddy,she is a nice girl.plzz,don't embarrass me in front of them.

Shlok :(murmuring)nice girl,my foot...

At the same time in between those beautifuls...

Astha :Wait Saya

Saya :What happened Asthu??

Astha :look there,that arrogant agnihothri.what he doing here??

Saya :(not at all surprised)he is best friend of Ram,they are collagemates.

Astha :What??why didn't u tell me before,I...

Ram's words stoped Astha...

Ram :hi beautiful,why r u standing there,plz sit na..

Saya :asthu,don't get upset yar,plz for my sake,u don't mind him.now let's go..

Astha :(suppressing anger)mmm..let's go.

Saya :hello handsomes,what's up...

Ram :hi dear,nothing just waiting for you 2.

Astha and Shlok didn't look at each other.

Ram :hey astha,what happened to u?why r u so silent?

Astha :nothing yar,am ok.

Shlok :(completely ignoring astha)hi saya,how r u sweetie..

Astha :(in mind)sweetie!!!oh god,these firlty guys and their tantrums..

Saya :yaa shlok,am fine,way abt u..

Shlok :Me..what happened to me,always coool...(slightly pulling his collar)

Astha :(quite irritated)so ram,what's ur plan abt marriage???

Shlok : (in mind)ohh,this chatter box gonna open her bundle of enquiries..

Saya :asthu,marriage..

"whose marriage",suddenly somebody's voice stopped their convo.four of them looked at the figure just standing infront of them...

This is part one hope u like it..

 

 



Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 28 December 2014 at 9:06am

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Wanna give u a tight hug buds, ri8 nw Hug
You are such a cute writer mahn!
Muaaahhh :*
U asked me b4 dat, whether u wl b able 2 grew upto my expectations n nw I hv d answer Smile Ofcourse YOU DID!
I lovvveeed it yaar Embarrassed
Both d cs n update!
In d cs, I felt like AaShlok having sm traces of resemblance with vijay simran of Priyamanavale Wink
Bt d chapter was smthng different!
Arrogant Agnihotri n Drama Queen Kirlosker r frnds of two love birds Shocked LOL
Do work as cupids and eventually fall in love Wink
Bt d prologue Shocked D'oh
Let me Connect d dots D'oh
It wl take time n, n wl b more easier if u update soonish! Wink LOL
Ps: Last lathae ashareeri aara? ROFL



Edited by ..AngelicAnu.. - 28 December 2014 at 10:13am

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 9:22am | IP Logged
What an update devu my sweet girl! Hug It had the right amount of wow factor! Clap 

Simply outstanding, believe me you are a very very good writer, infact you are loaded with the ammunition of writing! Wink

I loved them both on first sight Wink and how could i not i love arrogant heroes and spirited heroines Tongue
And Mr Shlok Agnihotri has no illusions about love Ouch but he is gonna fall flat on his face, people like him do he won't be hit by love but would be bitten by love! Evil SmileLOL

Loved that hotel scene to the core...

Both uncomfortable with each others presence, but still noting every point about each other's conversation WinkLOL first sign of attraction is there! Wink

Keep it up gal Thumbs Up and stun us with your next update, i am immensely liking the storyline! Wink


Edited by mahirmukhtar - 28 December 2014 at 12:06pm

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Lovely start to a lovely story...with khati maathi nok jhok...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
So thats clear that ashlok dont like each other...now it will be super duper treat to read the story that how the two of them will fall in loveEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
And loved the character sketch sweety...ClapClapClapClap
Continue the story soon...



Edited by meerab... - 28 December 2014 at 9:34am

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 9:36am | IP Logged
loved the first chap buddy .
so they both know each other..
but despise each other to the core.
how will they survive the marriage and the  rest..God only knows.

nicely written.


Edited by deepavasudev - 28 December 2014 at 9:34pm

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Character Sketch is lovely dear..StarStarStar

I loved the way Shlok and Aastha were avoiding each other...Tongue

Arrogant Agnihotry and chatterbox KirloskarWinkLOLLOL Cute jodi they will make..Big smile

Lovely update Part one Devutty...I know its short becoz you are having fever..Shocked Buts its ok dear..I know you will make the next part longer..Big smileBig smile

Love you a looot DevuuuHug

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Beautiful devu...
After reading the prologue i thought the story is like priyamanavela film...
But it is not like that movie...
Loved the first part...
Shlok-Astha dont like each other...
Waiting fr second part...
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM

Edited by charanyaaj - 29 December 2014 at 3:30am

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Nice update:)iliked it :)continue soon:)and who is that person that says whose marriage?:)
To know the ans will be waiting for next update:)
Happy new yr in adv:)

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