New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8) - Page 9

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

First of all congratulations to you Devu for writing your first SS! 👍🏼

But it doesn't look like your first writing 😉 it's simply fantastic! 👏

Loved the prologue 😃 and the title is superb too those three little words ofcourse of love! 😉

The banner is very beautiful too a true blue hypnotic effect on the eyes! 😃

Shlok is arrogant i liked that part love arrogant heroes! 😛😉

So it seems a contract marriage of about one year is gonna happen and both Astha and Shlok don't like each other really ohh 😉 will got to see their hot nok jhok! 😈😉

Will wait eagerly for the first chap devu!  You've raised my curiosity level! 😉

Nice one Devu...waiting for the next...tks for the pm

Firstly, congo for starting a fiction Devu.👏 Nicely written and nice story line! Well done👍🏼 Eager to know what happened n what will happen. Update soon😳

Nice update Devu oh fight at first sight Ashlok r mad at each-other but will mad for each-other in time right 😉! Shlok n Astha r polls apart but they agree for marriage but only for 1 year very interesting. Thanks for PM n waiting for next update dear.

Wooiiw nice start dearest ^^

sry for the late reply...m not well
lovely prologue
part 1st..SUPERB👏
Ashlok hate each other
nice start...⭐️

Part 1:

great start of this story dear loved it 👏👏& part 1 both know each other but not liked😡😡 waiting next how story move forward😉😉

Wish you a 👏👏👏

HAPPY NEW YEAR🤗🤗

                     In Advance😳😳😳

Great update, loved it a lot! 😊

The fact that they know and don't like each other is interesting. The meeting in the hotel showed that they both tried to ignore each other but fail to do that.

I am eagerly to find out when and how they will fall in love...interesting indeed!

 

Continue soon, thank you for pm!

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Edited by Fimiramak - 9 years ago

Prologue, CS and the part 1 all are nice. Thanks for the PM.