New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8) - Page 7

Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update:)iliked it :)continue soon:)and who is that person that says whose marriage?:)
To know the ans will be waiting for next update:)
Happy new yr in adv:)
Posted: 9 years ago
Res! Devu, will soon unres!
Posted: 9 years ago
devu...thanks for pm...fascinating ๐Ÿ˜ƒ waiting next part
Posted: 9 years ago
Well executed, thought provoking, mesmerizing compelling read! Loved it immensely!
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update..
I love the cs and the update..
Ashlok are too cute, one arrogant another fierce..loved their monologue, contradicting each pther but not saying it in front..
I think their will be cupid in their love story..
Who is this another voice at the end?
Shlok won't be in love ๐Ÿค” well see mr.! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Update soon..
Thnx for the pm..
Posted: 9 years ago
lovely start dear
waiting to read more
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by avni4


Thank u so muchhh for pm...n it doesnt look like ur first work...seems like u hv master in writing work...n story sounds like tom and jerry   now but i feel that u will
Turn it into a fairy tail latter...good job yaara..its beautiful 
thz for ur lovely words dear๐Ÿค—
most welcome๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by whitelily


interesting start ๐Ÿ‘
thz dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by charanyaaj


All the best devu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Beautiful prologue dear
thz a lot saru๐Ÿค—
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by k.taddy1234


Nice Start.. Love it very much
thz kusum๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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