New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8) - Page 4

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

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Originally posted by: sathuraj

Dear Devu...

 

Nice start dear...super writing...

 

u have written it so well, dont worry dear...

 

Astha and shlok going to get married...

 

who is responsible for the marriage...

 

astha and shlok r blaming some one...

 

They already decided to part away after 1 year...nice start...

 

So the magic between them to say those three little words is going to happen between this period...

 

or...are they going to release it after 1 yrs...

 

I know...u will answer all my question in ur following update...

 

Thanks for the pinky wonderful treat...

 

awaiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: Smirna.vava

lovly proluge .ashlok going to marry and hate each other and decided to apart after 1year.interesting...,..thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: akashavani

DEVU...Absolutely loved your ...lovey banner...and prologue  to dear...and the story line too...Ur narrating is interesting  too.

AShlok seems to be getting married..on one year contract...btw them only maybe..,...must see how they will fall in love ...

Waiting for more ...loved it .

Originally posted by: Subhashini_chow

Hey Pinky on Mission writing👏

Lovely prologue dear ..Don't worry there is no mistakes at all

and very interesting update😃

They decide to apart after one year before Marriage how come

but we know they never apart Ashlok forever😊

Love the Title n Bannar

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Congo DEvu..

Sorry for late reply..

ok  now..coming to Prologue.. too good.

U write very well.

These two getting married ,but will seperate after a year..

Nice mind mumblings and their frustration to break up or not to meet..very well emoted..

And my Devu became a writer..Nice..

Join the club..

Nice update..wtg for chap 1

Originally posted by: swathin

lovely prologue
waiting...

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

wheee...congratulations my dearest... U started writing 🥳

Loving ur banner... Prologue... Concept... Tittle... loving everything about this story dear ❤️

So these two gonna break their heads to utter those three little words... Interesting n very romantic concept buddy 👍🏼

Can't wait to read the updates continue soon
ALL THE BEST! 🤗