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Manik Malhotra's weather forecast #2

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Ask me how is it to be alone
Like a lone tree up the hill..
with no one to watch my plight
and to sooth my broken heart
I looked up in the sky
to wish upon the fallen stars
I couldn't find any
for the sky was cloudy and dry.

So many summer nights before 
I wished for a star of my own
It was you who came along
to lit up my lonely world,
and filled it with love so tender
My stars and your fireflies
together wove our sky of love
and sealed it with a promise 
that should last for ever..

I held your hands only to leave it
I held the key to your heart only to lose it
I left you all alone only to come back
for all the roads lead to you
as it always was..
Like a little kid
I longed for the sky of love
So bright and sunny like your smile..
But you said it will never come back..
and called it so toxic and dark..




Link to Manik Malhotra's weather forecast #1


Comments are appreciated!!Embarrassed


Edited by in_luv_wit_life - 26 December 2014 at 5:03am

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Beautiful! Clap 

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Beautiful Ann Big smile

I know you are kdrama fan like me LOL, you reminded me of PERSONAL TASTE. LOL .

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 2:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadhanager.

Beautiful Ann Big smile

I know you are kdrama fan like me LOL, you reminded me of PERSONAL TASTE. LOL .

I got the title from personal taste onlyLOL..You can check out the link to first part I have given..there i have given credit for titleBig smile

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 2:47am | IP Logged
This is such a wonderful piece of writing.It creates such vivid imagery resonating to the beat of the heart.How wonderfully does it throw light on manik's state of mind which is clouded with fear,hurt and remorse.You be such a gifted writer and long live the series for bringing out such wonderful writers and poets.Embarrassed.Well pretty much thats all i got to tell...simply spellbound by the sheer simplicity and elegance of your post

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 2:55am | IP Logged
"I held your hands only to
leave it
I held the key to your heart
only to lose it
I left you all alone only to
come back
for all the roads lead to you
as it always was.."

Its beautiful. no more word needed its just beautiful in itself. amazing. keep writing.

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 3:43am | IP Logged
in luv wit life
Thank you for writing this, absolutely luv the poetry for manan,  How beautifully you have woven their story in the poetry, superb.  
And i luv your siggies but the caption at the bottom quoting steffi graf is the best.  Im a big fan of steffi Thumbs Up. she was an epitome of grace n humility even when she aggressively pursued every point, too good.

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -bharti-

in luv wit life
Thank you for writing this, absolutely luv the poetry for manan,  How beautifully you have woven their story in the poetry, superb.  
And i luv your siggies but the caption at the bottom quoting steffi graf is the best.  Im a big fan of steffi Thumbs Up. she was an epitome of grace n humility even when she aggressively pursued every point, too good.

Thank you Bharti for your kind wordsSmile..I am also her fan..and yes this quote is something every human should follow in his/her life..

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