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~VeeBa SS~ Phir Dil Tod Dia (Part 3 added) (Page 2)

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nice concept...pm me too

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Originally posted by Asyalover

nice concept...pm me too
Cud u plz like the "Want a PM?.." post Smile just so it's easy for me to find all the people I have to PM Smile

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Previous Part


[ NOTE: I'm changing the last precap cuz well I couldn't add that bit into this part Disapproveso here's the new precap for this part..

"Guys be quiet! Koi sun le to!? Itne andhere me to ghar ka bhi pata nahi chal raha!"

"Wo wala ho ga! Lights wala!"

"Ya lets go! Sab kuch ready hai na?"


Sry for any inconvenience.. You guys were looking forward to itUnhappy..

So now here's this part..]

Part 3


"Teri sandal ki itni aawaaz kyun aa rai hai? Dihaan se chal!"

"Koshish kar rai hoon! Tum ladko ko kya pata hamari aur hamari sandal problems ke baare me!?"

"Guys be quiet! Koi sun le to!? Itne andhere me to ghar ka bhi pata nahi chal raha!"

"Wo wala ho ga! Lights wala!"

"Ya lets go! Sab kuch ready hai na?"

"Yes"

*          *          *


Ratan had regained consciousness but then felt tired and slept. Now she had woken up.

Ranvi who had been sitting by her bedside the whole time asks "Beeji ab aap ki tabyat kaisi hai?"

Ratan sits up in her bed and makes a confused face. "Tabyat? Haan Ranvi meri tabyat bilkul theek hai.. Menu ki hona hai"

Ranvi is startled. "Par beeji.. Nihal Chachu.."

Ratan indifferently replies "Aa gaye Nihaal Singh Ji? Menu unse milna hai"

She's about to get off the bed when a confused Ranvi makes her sit down again and asks in a serious tone "Beeji kya aapko yaad nahi Nihal Chachu ko kya hua?"

"Ranvi.. Mujhe zara chutki kaat.." Ranvi has a lost expression. She continues with a troubled look "Wo mujhe ek buhot bura sapne aaya tha... Nihal Singh Ji ki.. ki.. maut ka.." Ranvi looks at her with a pained look and her voice rises with tears rolling down her face "kaat na chutki Ranvi! Mujhe yaqeen dila de ke wo ek buhot bura sapne tha Ranvi!" She holds Ranvi's collar and is now crying loudly "Kaat na! Yaqeen dila de Ranvi! Ranvi!"

Ranvi tries to console her and take her hands off him "Beeji.. Beeji.. Beeji!" He finally takes her hands off and holds her by the shoulders. "Wo sapna nahi tha Beeji.. Wo sach hai... Nihaal Chachu ab is dunya me nahi rahe" a tear rolls down his own face as he hugs Ratan who is crying badly.

He feels anger and thinks "Baldev me tenu iske liye kabhi maaf nahi karanga"

*          *          *


Veera is walking aimlessly through the Pritampura streets. She had given Baldev hope that she will get him out soon but she knows very well this isn't a simple matter... It's a murder case. He told her to check the messages in his mobile but how is she supposed to go to his house.. What will she say to his parents? They had heard what had happened..

Balwant had come from some work to tell that he got a call from Bansuri that Baldev had gone somewhere so the Baraat will come a bit late.

He had just told them that and that's when Ranvi had barged in. After that, everything seems like a blur to her... It happened so fast and then she left.

Veera thinks "Tayaji ne taiji ko zaroor bata dia ho ga.. Itni bari baat wo chupa thodi sakte hai.. me abhi gai aur taiji mujhpe gusse ho gai to unke ghar ka mahol kharab ho jaye ga. Mujhe kal jana chahiye"

Thinking this she walks home.

*          *          *


Ratan wanted some fresh air so she came in the main hall of their house. Ranvi was with her everywhere she went in case she fainted again.

Gunjan was sitting in her room on he floor by the wall. She couldn't get over the news that her brother was a murderer and had been silently crying ever since thinking of how severe the consequences will be. Her throat feels dry so she goes to get water but realizes the jug at her side table is empty. She goes downstairs and is walking to the kitchen when she hears..

"SURPRISE!!!"

Precap:
Someone- lekin tujhe unse ese baat nahi karni chahiye thi
Veera- ab tu mujhe sikhayegi!?


~veeba4eva

p.s. This time the precap is for real Wink

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:29am | IP Logged
part 3 is confusing about new entry

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Asyalover

part 3 is confusing about new entry
Part 4 will clear everything up Smile... "Just stay tuned and keep reading" GeekTongue
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:13am | IP Logged
nice update Big smile who is that Mr. x? continue soonBig smile

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Read all the parts just now, nice update, looking forward to know who the mysterious entry is????

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Who's this mysterious woman? Ye aur gehrata jaa raha hai

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