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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 2:47am | IP Logged
so finally arnav meets khushi...or atleast see her...

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pages

Originally posted by 1chilly

Now, who was the girl in the red saree?
You've again left us with a cliffhanger.
And where did Aakash meet Payal?
Waiting for Arnav and Khushi to meet.


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<div><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">didn't mean to turn it to another cliffhanger but it seems that way because the other half of the update is missing. will post the rest tomorrow.</font>


You've left it suitably ambiguous, was the expletive directed at the garment or the wearer of the garment. Waiting ...

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Oh I know all about crazy deadlines at work ... I feel like a 20-dollar ho everyone wants to bang just cuz they can ... Lol ...Arnav has one hell of an eye-sight!

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Red sari, khushi, Asr ...
U ended in cliff hanger..
Wrong..

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tiramisu_coffee

Oh I know all about crazy deadlines at work ... I feel like a 20-dollar ho everyone wants to bang just cuz they can ... Lol ...Arnav has one hell of an eye-sight!

Lol...tell me about it.
i am here now. will complete the part today.

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Whoa Anjali's question was so bang on and deep. No wonder Akash was tongue tied and couldnt give a proper response. Oh dear, who is this Ms. Gupta that Anjali is teasing Akash about? I think it's Payal coz he has mentioned her earlier when he said he wanted to talk to her about Khushi and some incident at the workplace. Arnav's thoughts were very well written. Loved reading about everything from his POV. The bond between the siblings was adorable and full of warmth. Aha our darling Khushi has found her way to his favourite spot in the garden! Sigh when he sees her. it's gonna be magical!! IPKKND and SaRun I miss you so much... Oh it seems that the saree is from their collection. I can already see him blaming it of stealing it and giving her a lecture on being opportunistic and gold digging.. But but but he might just get blown away by the sheer beauty that our Khushi is. 

Hey it's not fair stopping at such an important juncture and keeping us thirsty for more! Please do update soon. Super eager to read about the pehli mulaqat! 

Thanks for the PM! 

Oh looks like you updated! Will comment on part 2 now! 

Edited by the_breeze - 14 January 2015 at 11:01pm

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pages

Originally posted by the_breeze

Wishing you and your loved ones a very Happy New Year Page! Hug

Whatever font and colour you have chosen for Ch 3 is perfect for me. Thanks for clearing up the confusion that Payal = Jiji. 


As you might have guessed from my comment, I have a pretty hyperactive imagination, I mean I came up with my version of how the story would be just by reading the prologue and Ch1. What are your thoughts about it? Do I come close to what you have planned?? Wink


Update soon! 



your version sounds mischievous LOL Tongue

once this is done, you tell me.


Oh you bet I will Wink

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by the_breeze

Whoa Anjali's question was so bang on and deep. No wonder Akash was tongue tied and couldnt give a proper response. Oh dear, who is this Ms. Gupta that Anjali is teasing Akash about? I think it's Payal coz he has mentioned her earlier when he said he wanted to talk to her about Khushi and some incident at the workplace. Arnav's thoughts were very well written. Loved reading about everything from his POV. The bond between the siblings was adorable and full of warmth. Aha our darling Khushi has found her way to his favourite spot in the garden! Sigh when he sees her. it's gonna be magical!! IPKKND and SaRun I miss you so much... Oh it seems that the saree is from their collection. I can already see him blaming it of stealing it and giving her a lecture on being opportunistic and gold digging.. But but but he might just get blown away by the sheer beauty that our Khushi is. 

Hey it's not fair stopping at such an important juncture and keeping us thirsty for more! Please do update soon. Super eager to read about the pehli mulaqat! 

Thanks for the PM! 

Oh looks like you updated! Will comment on part 2 now! 

i was wondering where you were. i want to keep this story light hearted, no heavy duty drama here. focus on arnav-khushi and all the drama around them. i tell you, you realize how good ipk was when you see all the trash on tv today. why did this show have to end so soon. whats ipk, if they don't take over the other's favorite spots ;)

i hate the formatting if offers. really struggled to get this one right. ended up changing the color again. but i like this best.

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