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Posted: 07 April 2015 at 11:08am | IP Logged
haha she thought arnav was mohan bhaiya Tongue
wow both r attracted to each other clearly...but arnav thinks she is akash's would-be... and she does not knw who he is Big smile
strange y arnav wants to be hidden... n whats the mystery behind tht red sari?

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Posted: 07 April 2015 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
welcome back, Awesome update and thanks for PM. Can't wait for the next update.

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Posted: 07 April 2015 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
Great update

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Posted: 07 April 2015 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
I am just so happy that you came back and updated! Dancing
It took me some time to understand the chappie what with all the going back and forth in time so I'm a little confused, what is this list Arnav is talking about? 

But other than that, it felt really good to read that Khushi acknowledged the dangerous attraction she feels for Arnav. Her need to run was understandable given his gaze on her the whole time. But really, when I read that some guy used to follow her around I was creeped out. Boy am I glad that she listened to Payal's advice and accepted Akash's offer of taking the driver home. What I don't get is, if Payal is Akash's "Miss Gupta", why wasn't she at the party? 

Also the mystery of the red sari remains unsolved. There are so many questions in my mind about that, that I won't even begin with them now other wise it will be one long comment Tongue

Hmmm, what made the great ASR shake a leg??? Surprising! But am glad that happened, the chemistry that you described due to a simple brushing of hands was electric! Khushi's mistaking Arnav for Mohan had me LOL. but why did he say that Mohan driving Khushi home was "unacceptable"??? Also did he really drop her home?? Very intrigued. Do write soon dear.. You have piqued my curiosity! 


Thanks for the PM! 

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Posted: 07 April 2015 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Lovely update!!
Your storytelling style is very unique adds to the intrigue!!

That last scene was funny LOL

And welcome back.. Where had you disappeared? Hope you will update soon Smile

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Posted: 08 April 2015 at 5:07am | IP Logged
awesome story continue soon...

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Posted: 09 April 2015 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by the_breeze

I am just so happy that you came back and updated! Dancing
It took me some time to understand the chappie what with all the going back and forth in time so I'm a little confused, what is this list Arnav is talking about? 

But other than that, it felt really good to read that Khushi acknowledged the dangerous attraction she feels for Arnav. Her need to run was understandable given his gaze on her the whole time. But really, when I read that some guy used to follow her around I was creeped out. Boy am I glad that she listened to Payal's advice and accepted Akash's offer of taking the driver home. What I don't get is, if Payal is Akash's "Miss Gupta", why wasn't she at the party? 

Also the mystery of the red sari remains unsolved. There are so many questions in my mind about that, that I won't even begin with them now other wise it will be one long comment Tongue

Hmmm, what made the great ASR shake a leg??? Surprising! But am glad that happened, the chemistry that you described due to a simple brushing of hands was electric! Khushi's mistaking Arnav for Mohan had me LOL. but why did he say that Mohan driving Khushi home was "unacceptable"??? Also did he really drop her home?? Very intrigued. Do write soon dear.. You have piqued my curiosity! 


Thanks for the PM! 

The list - Most eligible bachelor ;) 

Will have to post a longer update for the next part. May be Arnav was just jealous of Akash, for once he seems to have something Arnav wants but thinks he can't have, may be? LOL

Thrilled to have you back. 

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Posted: 09 April 2015 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kclovearshi

Lovely update!!
Your storytelling style is very unique adds to the intrigue!!

That last scene was funny LOL

And welcome back.. Where had you disappeared? Hope you will update soon Smile

Hi, Thanks. I have been around ;)

I'm intrigued to know why you found the last scene funny LOL


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