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Posted: 01 February 2015 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amus5

missing piece of the Vintage collection Shocked now what could be the link between that and the present one which is obviously an imitation,but, is the first creation of Khushi Confused.Is it an inspiration for Khushi which is my assumption 

I see RED when ASR and the lady in red come face to face Wink the same way ASR sees RED having come face to face with Anjali

here comes Salman Khan's number and so the rest of the world may as well be damned LOL

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon Big smile



 a party, khushi and no salman khan number? not even possible. LOL

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Posted: 01 February 2015 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by TwilightStar_JP

Hey buddy! 
Just came across this! Usually I avoid drinking but this one, not the ones to avoid! I don't mind having them again and again!

Basically I just want to convey I love this story! It's refreshing and fresh!

How much can a girl go through? I simply wonder when Khushi will get her silver lining! And Arnav is a mystery man?

It's wonderful to see how things unfold here!

And the fact that payal is dating Akash and through him is watching over her little sister simply proves she loves her sister but doesn't want to show it!

And our boy is already smitten by the vision in Red? And feels Jealous?? Oh what fun it is to read such Mu's!! 

I wonder how things will unfold from here! Can I buddy you for future work?


Cheers

hey buddy, thanks a lot for giving this a shot. titles can be misleading. i say that with caution however. don't want any one misunderstanding things either. arnav khushi and red, works like a charm every single time ;)

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Posted: 11 February 2015 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Hey there Page! Smile


I see that there has been a LONG DRY SPELL here in my absence! now why would you want your patrons to go thirsty huh? Cmon give us a nice big shot of vodka soon!! Wink 


CH 5: There is an enticing quality in the description of Khushi from Arnav's eyes/POV. You can't help but be drawn into the magic that is taking place around these two. I read the first two paras again and again, so much did I love your writing. Also not to forget, he has noticed that she had made additions to his design and the fact that he likes them is a positive. I hope that somewhere down the line, he gives Khushi a chance to bring out her creative designing side and wow us all. I also admired the business aspect that you brought into this chapter with the poaching of a designer, it made Arnav more real in my eyes. I always wanted the serial to actually show him doing some business, realistically that is, but alas that remained a dream and I appreciate you portraying him to be the ruthless and tactical businessman that he is supposed to be. Thumbs Up



Somehow I love the conversations between the Raizada siblings, even in the previous chapter comment I mentioned this about Anjali n Akash and now I would like to applaud you for the part between Anjali and Arnav. Hmmm, lot of information you have given us through that medium. There is a "Bored House Wives Club"?? LOL! And forgive me if I am being dense, but who or what is Snooki??? Aha the vodka makes an appearance! Ooo, And Khushi in her red saree is berries! Pathetic, I know but I have a very active imagination, as you may have figured out by now!! Anyway, I'm glad that there is no cheating husband involved at the moment in Anjali's life. All that has already happened so that particular clich won't be happening. I had a silly grin on my face when Arnav was making scandalous statements to his sister. And really he is Bachelor#2?? Who is #1??? Awww he is so sweet when he is ignorant of the fan following he has who actually spend hours voting for him! Confused



He can't seem to stop looking for Khushi! That girl is gonna regret wearing red! And though a major part of me knows that Khushi is NOT the Ms. Gupta that Akash and Anjali are talking about but I would really relax if you clarify that in any upcoming chapter. Ooohh a jealous ASR is a treat to watch, please make ample use of him!! You know what, you make it clear to us that Khushi and Akash have nothing going on between them but let Arnav remain under that misconception! That way the jealousy track can be used to a greater extent!! Cool



Khushi's musings about Arnav were no less captivating, brought a barrage full of memories about the shooting of the calendar and Diwali all mixed together and made me so nostalgicDay Dreaming ! Well I'm glad that she decides to let her hair down and dances to her heart's content! But we all know that someone will be watching her whilst she dances with gay abandon and this is only going to heat things up more!! Nuke



After writing such a FABULOUS update, where have you disappeared huh?? Cmon bartender, your patrons are waiting with their glasses in hand for the next round. Hug
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Posted: 11 February 2015 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pages

Originally posted by amus5

missing piece of the Vintage collection Shocked now what could be the link between that and the present one which is obviously an imitation,but, is the first creation of Khushi Confused.Is it an inspiration for Khushi which is my assumption 

I see RED when ASR and the lady in red come face to face Wink the same way ASR sees RED having come face to face with Anjali

here comes Salman Khan's number and so the rest of the world may as well be damned LOL

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon Big smile



 a party, khushi and no salman khan number? not even possible. LOL

Well said LOL Dancing *does an impromptu Khushi style dance*
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Posted: 11 February 2015 at 3:26am | IP Logged
This story is so mysterious that it managed to charm me!
There is something in your writing technique that just captures the attention!
So, Arnav is obviously Jealous thinking of Khushi as Akash's Miss Gupta...wonder what he would feel upon realising that his real competitor is some Bankelal...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 26 February 2015 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by the_breeze

Hey there Page! Smile


I see that there has been a LONG DRY SPELL here in my absence! now why would you want your patrons to go thirsty huh? Cmon give us a nice big shot of vodka soon!! Wink 


CH 5: There is an enticing quality in the description of Khushi from Arnav's eyes/POV. You can't help but be drawn into the magic that is taking place around these two. I read the first two paras again and again, so much did I love your writing. Also not to forget, he has noticed that she had made additions to his design and the fact that he likes them is a positive. I hope that somewhere down the line, he gives Khushi a chance to bring out her creative designing side and wow us all. I also admired the business aspect that you brought into this chapter with the poaching of a designer, it made Arnav more real in my eyes. I always wanted the serial to actually show him doing some business, realistically that is, but alas that remained a dream and I appreciate you portraying him to be the ruthless and tactical businessman that he is supposed to be. Thumbs Up



Somehow I love the conversations between the Raizada siblings, even in the previous chapter comment I mentioned this about Anjali n Akash and now I would like to applaud you for the part between Anjali and Arnav. Hmmm, lot of information you have given us through that medium. There is a "Bored House Wives Club"?? LOL! And forgive me if I am being dense, but who or what is Snooki??? Aha the vodka makes an appearance! Ooo, And Khushi in her red saree is berries! Pathetic, I know but I have a very active imagination, as you may have figured out by now!! Anyway, I'm glad that there is no cheating husband involved at the moment in Anjali's life. All that has already happened so that particular clich won't be happening. I had a silly grin on my face when Arnav was making scandalous statements to his sister. And really he is Bachelor#2?? Who is #1??? Awww he is so sweet when he is ignorant of the fan following he has who actually spend hours voting for him! Confused



He can't seem to stop looking for Khushi! That girl is gonna regret wearing red! And though a major part of me knows that Khushi is NOT the Ms. Gupta that Akash and Anjali are talking about but I would really relax if you clarify that in any upcoming chapter. Ooohh a jealous ASR is a treat to watch, please make ample use of him!! You know what, you make it clear to us that Khushi and Akash have nothing going on between them but let Arnav remain under that misconception! That way the jealousy track can be used to a greater extent!! Cool



Khushi's musings about Arnav were no less captivating, brought a barrage full of memories about the shooting of the calendar and Diwali all mixed together and made me so nostalgicDay Dreaming ! Well I'm glad that she decides to let her hair down and dances to her heart's content! But we all know that someone will be watching her whilst she dances with gay abandon and this is only going to heat things up more!! Nuke



After writing such a FABULOUS update, where have you disappeared huh?? Cmon bartender, your patrons are waiting with their glasses in hand for the next round. Hug

elllooo strangerHug where were you? all that red, and you went missing. i'm back now. such a treasure trove your comment, if khushi is berries - arnav is the vodka then??  you want some clarification so that you can enjoy reading about arnav suffer cooking up all sorts of unwanted imagery between berries and his brother?LOL oh that just sounds so wrong.D'oh

its friday already. i had to take a break cause of asli duniya being a hard taskmaster. me back now. 
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Posted: 26 February 2015 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Nightingale...

This story is so mysterious that it managed to charm me!
There is something in your writing technique that just captures the attention!
So, Arnav is obviously Jealous thinking of Khushi as Akash's Miss Gupta...wonder what he would feel upon realising that his real competitor is some Bankelal...
Continue soon...

Thank you. 

i'm tired of reading about shyamwa running after khushi, time for some comic relief, bankelal just fits the bill. and i thought they made quite an enticing picture in that little scene they had on the show.LOL
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Posted: 26 February 2015 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadia98

vodka is done with potato,which favorite sabzi of khushi,mine too,FREAKING AWESOMESmile
Sorry just wanted to talkLOL.

But i am being quite impatient,i know it hasn't been so long,but what can i do,UFFF
I am so irritating,still looking fowardSmile

you guys are so awesome.

loving the comments for this chapter.

here's another link - khushi once named her kids aloo kumar = potato LOL

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