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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Ok how the hell did I get to this intriguing story two days LATE? I know I couldn't have missed this yummy title... Ahhh I was busy eating, drinking n snoozing!! Nice story!! 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DIYA_21

Nice and interesting start of the story...

Thanks!!
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tiramisu_coffee

Ok how the hell did I get to this intriguing story two days LATE? I know I couldn't have missed this yummy title... Ahhh I was busy eating, drinking n snoozing!! Nice story!! 

Better late than never.

Just what we need here, along with Berries & Vodka. Some Tiramisu & Coffee ;)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Great start! You gave us an insight into the mean girls' minds.. It's a real jungle out there with people you consider to be on your team bitching about you behind your back... I hope La hears all this... 

Glad to see that Khushi is holding up well among these idiots... Ahhh she has been working for Akash all this time... Well I for one can't wait for sparks to fly when Arnav and she meet... 


Hmmm, What's all this about a mysterious one-night stand that has affected Arnav to this extent??? Very intrigued... Oh boy, I hope he doesn't mistake Khushi to be one of the gold digging, cheap girls he is used to. (This has been done to death and I really expect your tale to be very different coz of the unique title) 


If I may make a suggestion, the font you use feels weird to read... Please dont take it the wrong way.. 


Thanks for the PM dear... Happy Holidays! 

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Thanks Disha,for leading me here.Big smile
Very intriguing title and the interesting start to the story.
Who was the mystery girl with Arnav? 
Can't be Khushi, can it? 

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by the_breeze

Great start! You gave us an insight into the mean girls' minds.. It's a real jungle out there with people you consider to be on your team bitching about you behind your back... I hope La hears all this... 

Glad to see that Khushi is holding up well among these idiots... Ahhh she has been working for Akash all this time... Well I for one can't wait for sparks to fly when Arnav and she meet... 


Hmmm, What's all this about a mysterious one-night stand that has affected Arnav to this extent??? Very intrigued... Oh boy, I hope he doesn't mistake Khushi to be one of the gold digging, cheap girls he is used to. (This has been done to death and I really expect your tale to be very different coz of the unique title) 


If I may make a suggestion, the font you use feels weird to read... Please dont take it the wrong way.. 


Thanks for the PM dear... Happy Holidays! 

Hi, Thanks you and a very Happy Holidays to you too! The title is a result of it being the holiday season, lots of drinking and indulgence..the only thing missing is a mistletoe. 

Thanks for the feedback. About the font, I don't understand why IF doesn't have a better selection of fonts, I picked this cause I don't like any of them. Will change things around with the next update. Tell me how that goes. 

This story reads simplicity in my mind, I'm feeling pressured now with all that mention of it being different. Cliched is so much fun, don't you think?




Edited by Pages - 30 December 2014 at 1:53am
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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 2:24am | IP Logged
nice start. i will be honest in saying title ws the reason i started reading .

so office romance...cool
and the description u gave of bankelal he is not cute...preeto is wrong : P
continue soon.

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruti46

nice start. i will be honest in saying title ws the reason i started reading .

so office romance...cool
and the description u gave of bankelal he is not cute...preeto is wrong : P
continue soon.

Bankelal is not cute? Have you seen what Arnav thought he looked like in the actual show?

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