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ArHi SS: Berries & Vodka Ch7A Page 25 04/16 (Page 16)

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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ms.KKN


Helllo Page!! :))

At this point in the story , im very much looking forward to know more about Akash & Payal's clandestine rendezvouses :D
Wow! What an intriguing start did Arnav & Khushi have? Awesome!! Look how mesmerized both of them were. :D Severe case of Instant Attraction , nai? :D

Silly of me to somehow think that it was Arnav who was sticking the notes for Khushi on her desk but this was the first time they have come across each other!

I love the deep bonding of the siblings. That's a big positive factor for me to read any story. Anjali , Arnav , Akash as well as Payal n Khushi. I can comprehend how soothing n comforting can Payal's presence be , wot with staying under the same roof with a living nightmare! Life's lil mercies.. Sigh!!

I like Lavanya in here. She has been very much been an enigma so far. Interested to read more about her.

Arnav isn't at all the man he is projected to be. This much is super clear to me now. He seems to be a very responsible , sincere person. The description of him near his private pool under the moonlight stole my breath. It was very romantic!

The pace of the story too is very comfortable. Neither too fast nor too slow. Great going da :D

P.S : AD sucks yaa! Extremely sorry about the delay :(

AD sucks, tell me about it. i hvnt been able to sit in peace & write down d next part :(

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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by the_breeze

I am hankering for my next shot of vodka, dear bartender! 

Friday ;)

i don't want you drunk midweek Tongue
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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Looks like Akash knows Payal already . He is looking after khushi on Payal's request .
Khushi is red saree , she is preoccupied with the problems of her life unaware of a chocolate brown eyes trailed on her .
Did you have to stop at Arshi's eye clash ? Well written

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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
I really like this story of what I've read ... And I would live to read further
Plz pm me when you update again

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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear...loved it...
sorry for late comment
n thanx for pm

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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MDTharun

Looks like Akash knows Payal already . He is looking after khushi on Payal's request .
Khushi is red saree , she is preoccupied with the problems of her life unaware of a chocolate brown eyes trailed on her .
Did you have to stop at Arshi's eye clash ? Well written

Hahah...at your question, well, it was the right thing to do ;)
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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 5:30am | IP Logged

loved it berries and vodka

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