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ArHi SS: Berries & Vodka Ch7A Page 25 04/16 (Page 15)

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Very intriguing. 
Do continue soon. 

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sanamsky IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
outstanding

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MrsKhan-Sobti IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Wow..just wow...the way you wrote about them meeting. .sparks have already started flowing..lalalla..<3...can't wait to read more :D 
Much Love,
Teens!

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
I discovered your story by change, Pages. it is a compelling read. I love Khushi's spirit.
But why do I feel there's something familiar about your writing?

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
wow, very nice! u write fabulously hon! xo

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
the title is so unique btw, love it <3 

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FeistyDewdrop Goldie
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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 7:58pm | IP Logged

Helllo Page!! :))

At this point in the story , im very much looking forward to know more about Akash & Payal's clandestine rendezvouses :D
Wow! What an intriguing start did Arnav & Khushi have? Awesome!! Look how mesmerized both of them were. :D Severe case of Instant Attraction , nai? :D

Silly of me to somehow think that it was Arnav who was sticking the notes for Khushi on her desk but this was the first time they have come across each other!

I love the deep bonding of the siblings. That's a big positive factor for me to read any story. Anjali , Arnav , Akash as well as Payal n Khushi. I can comprehend how soothing n comforting can Payal's presence be , wot with staying under the same roof with a living nightmare! Life's lil mercies.. Sigh!!

I like Lavanya in here. She has been very much been an enigma so far. Interested to read more about her.

Arnav isn't at all the man he is projected to be. This much is super clear to me now. He seems to be a very responsible , sincere person. The description of him near his private pool under the moonlight stole my breath. It was very romantic!

The pace of the story too is very comfortable. Neither too fast nor too slow. Great going da :D

P.S : AD sucks yaa! Extremely sorry about the delay :(


Edited by Ms.KKN - 19 January 2015 at 8:03pm

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
I am hankering for my next shot of vodka, dear bartender! 

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