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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonia_1


 Beautifully written OS ... describing Manik's loneliness even though he is surrounded by his friends. Music is his true refuge.

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Autumn_Hue

A great insight into Manik's character hinal.. I loved this one shot great writing, keep writing more.. 

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _keertu_

that was written beautifully!!Clap

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humzy

awsm os
beautifully written
loved it

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by topsy003

WOW... very very nicely written ClapClap
you described Manik's inner turmoil very beautifully. the words you used and the mind vs heart talk was fabulous. This kind of writing is way more tougher than story telling and hats off to u for the splendid job. StarStarStar

Please do write more. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

also give me links of your other works.I would love to read them.

love 
amby

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Really appreciate it!

Will definitely keep writing!
Thanks once again Big smile
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysti

this was one beautiful piece on Manik
Kudos to you

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishu3003

this was an amazing write-upClap
lovedd how u portrayed manik's emotionsClap
lovedd ittt very muchStar

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You have no idea how much these comments mean to me <3
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Beautiful...Amazingly well written...Could feel Manik in your words...I hope you won't stop...Embarrassed

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