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Rudra the Chuha SS - Chapter 3 updated (26/01/2015) page 3 (Page 3)

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Nice but yeah...kinda short one...(greedy Me!)

Not complaining as Rudra the chooha did not make an appearance today...your Parud are very close to the original ones i suppose...thats my feel so far; wait for more... 

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That was lovely!!

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Nice continuation. Now that Disher is aware I know he's gonna yell at Rudradev. Can't wait for more...

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Nice story, I liked it too too much, can yu  pls remind me about the update wenever yu write one. 
Cool update and nice thinking

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fantastic start.

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Great story...u portray very cutely. Update soon. Thanks for pm me.

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Hey all. It's been quite a while since my last update and I apologize for that. I was lacking motivation and of course had a serious condition of 'writer's block'. I also didn't want to give up this easily on something I believed in whole heartedly. Nevertheless, I'm back now with chapter three.. 

Chapter 3: 

 

Rudra's eyes shot open startled by the loud banging on his door. Silently fuming he made his way to the door. He had taken a day off today and didn't expect to be woken up this early. 

He opened the door only to find an angry Bapusa.

"Ap kya hai.." Rudra agitatedly said.

Bapusa hopped in and slammed the door behind him. 

The father-son relationship was an odd one between these two. While they've spoken with bittersweet tones and threw words at each other, concern had always been present. They were both incomplete yet they complimented one another because of being so.  

"So you two have been sleeping apart?"

Rudra took a seat, knowing his father only had more to say and besides he was barely half awake for his brain to function.

"Did you think I wouldn't notice, it wouldn't be long before the rest found out as well. It might be alright for you, but I will not tolerate that conniving woman's sneers at my daughter in law. " Bapusa continued.

Bapusa's main concern was Kakisa endless taunts towards Parvati. Rudra wasn't one to worry for. Rather it was Kakisa who tip toed around him. He saw his son run his fingers through his hair and sigh before answering him by saying

"It's not what you think. There was no need for you to bang on my door this early in the morning. But just so your heart is at ease, Sunheri had wanted her in a matter and oddly enough it turned into a sleepover." Saying so, he rolled his eyes.

"I won't say anything further on this matter but if tonight I see that this has continued like the past two days, trust that I will not be quiet about this boy."

Bapusa's last remark did manage to sting Rudra's manhood pride but he didn't act upon it, knowing that he had a point.

Just as his father was about to walk away, in a voice so sincere he finally said 

"If I were you, I'd pay special attention to her eyes. They weigh and say more than her words ever have."

Those words lingered for quiet some time in Rudra's head. It occurred to him that his father was hinting that Parvati maybe hiding something. 

 

When breakfast was ready.. 

Bapusa told Parvati to knock on Rudra's door to tell him breakfast was served, with the excuse that he was feeling quite fatigued this morning and Rudra was unusually late. If anything Bapusa was feeling quite mischievous taking on the role of cupid.

Hesitant as whether to knock or not, Parvati's legs made it all the way to room, she stood before his door for a few good minutes mustering the courage of putting on another act. The act of being okay, the act of playing along yet silently dying from the inside with each passing glance, because with each glance she gave, her emotions reflected to be so firm and in exchange his eyes were motionless and unaffected. Just as she was about to knock the door opened and was greeted by a rush of wind.

Rudra opened the door to quite a mesmerizing view of his wife. Her dark long beautiful tresses dancing with the wind, her big doe eyes widening with surprise and her small fist hanging in the air. For a moment, everything stood still as they were both lost in trance. Parvati's heart skipped a beat, standing in disbelief at how her husband was looking at her, but that trance ended so soon when she remembered what she was there for.

"Major Saab, breakfast is ready."

She said those words and was quickly on her heels to leave when he gently pulled on her wrist

"Wait," he softly spoke up, closing the door behind him and closing the distance between them. A little frightened, Paro moved a few inches away, unfamiliar with such proximity.

"I just wanted to ask you, um is there anything bothering you? Anything you'd like to say." Rudra continued.

Paro was again in disbelief but was contemplating whether this was another opportunity to spill the beans

"Woh, kuch toh hain lekin-"

She was interrupted by Danveer's call to hurry to the breakfast table as everyone was already there and waiting for the two of them. 

"Let's talk when I'm home from work tonight hmm," With that both of them made their way to breakfast and Parvati could yet again feel the anticipation building up as today was going to be a very long day. "I'll also try to finish early." Rudra finished off.


When the night came..

The day did feel like an eternity to her as she waited and contemplated the reasons to be honest with her husband. But now as he stood before her, she could sense a storm brewing slowly as the words about to come out of her mouth were bound to cast a stir.

"Major Saab, I'd like to be honest about something. The reason I've been sleeping at Sunheri's room is because I can't bear sleeping next to man who I see as my husband but he only looks at me as his wife. You know how much you mean to me and that I l.. that I love you. What's troubling me is that I don't know where I stand in your life. But I'm not asking you to nor do you have to, only I want to know is that if this marriage is still a pretend marriage' then we don't have to go on much longer pretending. Your job is back and I can testify the reasons for our marriage not being able to satisfy either of us."

Rudra was definitely not expecting this out of her. Nothing would've prepared him to hear those words coming out of Parvati's mouth especially. At first he was trying to absorb what she had just said, as she could see his eyes blinking a few times looking at her and his facial expressions ranging from confused to angry. Here he was thinking they were about to move forward now that the cat was out the bag. Though here his wife is thinking about getting a divorce. Even though deep down inside him, he knew what she was really asking, whether he stills wanted to be married to her knowing they no longer have to. He also knew that the only person falling short in their relationship was him, otherwise, there would be no problem from Paro's end. She was caring, loving and more importantly she chose to see the passionate man inside him when his exterior clearly projected him as the destructive and mad jallad.

He broke out of his thoughts when she started calling out to him several times.

"Unfortunately that's not an option for us, it's hasn't been that long since we've been married, if we get divorced now, they'll know it was all a scam." He said it so casually, as if he wasn't hurt and that brought no surprise to Paro. She was smart enough to not set high hopes but she was when he continued..

"You can, however, sleep elsewhere if the idea discomforts you that much."

Surely this was a storm, and a very silent one.

Neither of them spoke after this. Rudra felt it too soon to have such intense feelings for her, in fact he felt less equipped and intimidated contrary to his wife's emotions towards him. That managed to push aside any potential chances of him trying to make things better in the long run, for now at least. He simply made his way to wash up and go to sleep.

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Shocker? I know. But this is the beginning of the Lion's transformation to a chuha. Plus the fandom is so dead..this is my way of reviving y'all. Let me know of what you think in the comments below. Constructive feedback is more than welcome.


Lots of love, 

Ru. 

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