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TaaRey 4Shots: Special Proposal(EPILOGUE up 27/1 pm later) (Page 19)

Jasmine_ash Goldie

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 1:50am | IP Logged

SURPRISE! SURPRISE! Ok guys finally back with ur fav SPECIAL PROPOSAL.
Thought to make update next week, but got many request to update soon personally, so to make u happy on this Special day with an Update . I hope u like it .

CHAPTER 2 part b
REY(closed his eyes tightly): I LOVE... I LOVE YOU TAANI.
Will U be my Girlfriend?
Everyone present in party clapped their hands.
Kriya was broadly smiling seeing his nervousness and intertwined her hands with person beside her (later).
Rey opened his eyes to see Taani but she was not there. Swayam was having mixed feeling of both happiness and sadness.
Rey's eyes were searching all over the place to find his Sweet Heart. But sensing her absence directly went to Swayam.
REY: Swayam where is Taani?
Swayam tightly hugged Rey.
REY(confused): Swayam U can hug me later first answer my question. Where is Taani?
SWAYAM(facing ground): She went.
REY: Pls don't say she went for important work (running his hands through his hair)
SWAYAM: No Rey, Taani went to Railway station.
REY: What? Railway station?
SWAYAM: S dude to Jodhpur.
REY: What happened to her Swayam , these days she was behaving strangely with me.
SWAYAM: Taani thought U r in love with Kriya.
REY: WTH? When is her train?
SWAYAM: Still 1 hour left
Before Swayam could complete Rey rushed out of party, marched towards his car and decided to go to Railway Station.

Gang came towards Swayam.
VICKY: What is happening.
NIL: We thought Rey loves Kriya.
NEHA: But?
KRIYA: But Rey loves Taani only his Taani.
Gang & Swaron:?????
KRIYA: Guys I came to know about Rey's love few days before. Do U guys remember when we met in mall.
KRIYA: Actually I went to meet my boy friend that time Rey shared his feeling about Taani to me.
Gang: Boy Friend??
GUY(remember Kriya intertwined her hands): Y Kriya, whats wrong with U, I hope U r not Leba...
Before he could complete Kriya gave small hit on his chest.
GUY: Ouch(playfully)
KRIYA: Just shutup Karan. Guys he is my boy friend Karan.
KARAN: Hi guys
GANG( still unable to believe): Hi Karan
Vicky (who is damn confused to Kriya): Y u ? I mean Y Rey choose to share his feeling with U.
KRIYA: Bec Rey thought U guys will spoil his SPELICAL PROPASAL plan since u guys r chatter box.
Gang mouth formed perfect O' shape.
Swaron and Kriya laughed at gangs reaction.
NIL: Oye, Swaron don't laugh ask her y Rey didn't share with U guys too(stressed word Too)
SWARON(towards Kriya):???
KRIYA: Obviously U R Taani's Bhai(towards Swayam) and U R her Bhabi(to Sharon).
Swaron blushed blushed at her statement.
Boys did their Chemistry sign and all shouted in happiness.
While Taani in train watching her and Rey's Dance video in her mobile (TAAREY danced together for NEW YEAR it was V.P sir order both GS and AGS has to dance on Romantic song).
TAAREY on center of stage
Facing back of eachother. Song starts

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
(Rey and Taani turns at same time, Rey puts his hand forward)

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
(Taani shyly places her hand in Rey's )

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
(Rey pulls her towards him & she comes crashing on his chest)

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
(Rey slowly slides his hand around her waist, Taani around his shoulder)

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
(Rey moves backward and Taani forward still holding and looking into eachother Eyes)

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
(lifts her up)

Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Jagah Mil Jaaye
(slowly puts her down Taani breathe on his face a shiver went through his spine)

Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaaye
(still looking into their eyes)

Jitne Paas Hain Khushbu Saans Ke
(Rey creased Taani's face with his)

Jitne Paas Hothon Ke Sargam
(Their lips were inches away)

Jaise Saath Hain Karvat Yaad Ke
(Taani closed her eyes feeling his proximity)

Jaise Saath Baahon Ke Sangam
(Rey smirks and hugs her )

Jitne Paas Paas Khwaabon Ke Nazar
(suddenly Ray lifted her in air & twirls)

Utni Paas Tu Rehna Hamsafar
(Taani moves away when Rey put her down)

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
(He twirls himself coming closer to her)

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
Rone De Aaj Hamko Do Aankhen Sujaane De
(Taani acts like crying)

Baahon Mein Lene De Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jaane De
(Rey hugs her from back and nuzzles his nose into her hair and turns her, wipes her tears. With a hug lift her above oner his head)

Hain Jo Seene Mein Qaid Dariya Woh chozt Jaayega
(again they hold each other hand & makes movement in sideways)

Hain Itna Dard Ke Tera Daaman Bheeg Jaayega
(Rey goes on his knees, Taani goes around him swing her hands)

Jitne Paas Paas Dhadkan Ke Hain Raaz
Jitne Paas Bundon Ke Baadal
Jaise sahaq Sa Chanda Ke Hain Raat
(pulls her on his lap and Taani places her head near his heart. Rey kisses on her head. Taani looks at him with teary Eyes)

Jitne Paas Nainon Ke Kaajal
Kaajal is black powder type which is applied to eyes
(Rey smiles and wipes her kaajal which was spreaded. Taani smiles shly and turns her head, Rey cups her cheeks which was deep red in color due to blushing, share an eye lock)

Jitne Paas Paas Saagar Ke Lehar
Utne Paas Tu Rehna H amsafar
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Ham
Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham
( both stand up, Taani wraps her hand around Rey's body and Rey at her back, slightly lift and twirls.
At end Taani move her hand around his neck, Rey around her waist pulling closer into him. Both smiled, panting heavily with eye lock)
Taani kisses video on her mobile. : I LOVE U REY.
REY(looking at Taani photo on his mobile): I LOVE U TAANI

... I started to love her when I was 13...

Thanks u guys for ur wonderful comments and likes.
pls guys it took 3 hr to update so pls do bigger comments no one word or one line pls guys

Edited by Jasmine_ash - 01 January 2015 at 1:51am

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princess1926 Goldie

Joined: 25 March 2014
Posts: 2007

Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Wow Dii..
Awesome update!
TaaRey dance was so nice...
Update asap
Viji.Chandran IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 25 January 2013
Posts: 11916

Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:29am | IP Logged
nice update...

kriya knew everythng before...

thats nice...

dance seq ws cute...

more excited fr precap

as i really wanna know rey's pov
Sona_loveVD IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 March 2013
Posts: 3677

Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:31am | IP Logged
awesome updt
loved the chapter
liked the taarey dance part
waiting for nxt part
updt soon
umatejesh Goldie

Joined: 27 September 2014
Posts: 1344

Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:35am | IP Logged
amazing upd
rey special proposal for taani got spoiled bcz of his stupidity
hope rey reach taani before she leave
the dance was so nice
aww rey pov he love taani when he was 13 yr old but why he didnt accept when taani propose him
want to know why so plz upd nxt prt soon...
amridhi Senior Member

Joined: 09 May 2014
Posts: 877

Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:37am | IP Logged
 Vry nice update. loved it thoroughly.  beautifully penned down. Eagerly waiting for tarey meet. Please update soon n thanx for the pm dr. 
tamanna-azaan IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 September 2012
Posts: 4494

Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:44am | IP Logged
thanks for updating so early..
it was nice update..
i knew rey loves taani..
ahh gang was so confused..
love it..
song description was superb..
akira223 Senior Member

Joined: 23 November 2014
Posts: 647

Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Awsome update
Taarey dance was NiceeClap
Update soon

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