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TaaRey 4Shots: Special Proposal(EPILOGUE up 27/1 pm later) (Page 11)

angelshah IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
plz upate

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Big Thanks for ur likes and most valuable comments :)

I am glad you a liked the concept.
My genuine apologies for not giving individual comments.

I will try to shortly update chapter 2. Chapter 2 will be divided into two parts :)

Hope u will support and encourage me with your BIG COMMENTS THIS TIME TOO.


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Jasmine_ash Goldie

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
CHAPTER 2 ( part a )

After Taani left in mall, Gang marched towards Rey & Kriya greeted 'hi'.
Rey and Kriya: Hi guys.
GANG: Kriya, what r u doing here?
KRIYA: I came to meet my bo (stopped) i mean my friend.
Rey gave a teasing smile to Kriya.Kriya glared at Rey.
Other side Boys did chemistry sign. Rey passed whatever look towards them for their stupid action.
REY: Hey Swayam where is Taani.
Gang noticed Taani missing.
SWAYAM(blankly): She went away.
REY & GANG: Went away?
SHARON: He means Taani got some important call so she went.
From next day onwards, Taani started to distance herself from Gang especially Rey. She
barely talked to them, most of the time only about competition. All girls in college started to laugh at Taani bec Rey and Kriya were hot topic in college.
Gang missed to see Taani's pain since they where busy in practising.

On the day of competition, Taani wished all members with smiling face. But Swayam could see pain behind her smile. This is why he always wanted Taani to stay away from Rey. When she came to Rey, without even looking into his eyes she blankly said "ALL THE BEST". Whole Gang was amazed bec everytime when Rey participate in competition Taani wishes him with tight hug. But threw their thought since more excited about competition.
Gang performed, it was an fabulous one. They burned stage with their awesome performance specially Rey. Gang won competition and Rey was awarded Star Performance of the Show. Gang was Rewarded cash amount of 1 lakh rupees and Rey with 50000 rs. All gang members shared a group since this was their first competition where Cash was rewarded.
Taani was feeling happy and stood away watching them, Rey went close to Taani. But Taani forwarded her hand to congrat him. Then she moved to Gang congratulated them and Swayam with a hug.
TAANI: Guys V.P Sir arranged party for your success, tomorrow evening.
All members shouted in happiness and went back to their respective homes. Taayam in car, taani was silently gazing through window.

SWAYAM: Taani.
TAANI: Haan Bhai
SWAYAM:Are you alright?
Taani could not control anymore started to cry.
SWAYAM:Pls stop crying pls baby.
After sometime Taani composed herself.
TAANI:Bhai, wo wo tomorrow i am leaving to Jodhpur.
Swayam was shocked by her decision.
SWAYAM:Taani are you in sense, do you know what u r saying, u decided to leave ur Bhai.
TAANI:No bhai, not like that just i need a change over of place for few days. Already I informed V.P Sir, he gave permission for 2 weeks.
Swayam felt little relieved. He knows his sister really needs time nodded his head in agreement.
SWAYAM: Taani, I promise your bhai will be always with U.
Taani gave a small smile and swayam hugged her.

At evening in Party all were present .TaaYam came, Taani who kept her luggage in car, she decided to move after sometime directly from party to railway station.
Gang including Taani came to know Rey is going to propose in front of everyone at party and felt happy for him. Rey moved to center of hall, at sametime Taani who was unable to bare pain anymore left to railway station bidding bye to Swayam.
REY(in mike): Good evening guys, hope you all are enjoying. Hmmm i want to share an important thing with you but in this prefect evening (he was feeling nervous). Ok guys finally I am going to propose my girl, I have been madly in love with her.
Swayam closed his eyes, yet felt happy for Rey.
REY(continued): I know girl to loves me a lot.

Gang turned their gaze towards Kriya who was smiling at Rey.
REY: She completes me, she will be my soulmate. Today i going to officially propose her.

All people present in party cheered him to proceed.
In party
Someone: pls go on
Other person : tell her name.
3rd person: hey get ur girl man.

REY(closed his eyes tightly due to nervousness): I LOVE .. ... I LOVE YOU *******.
Will you be my girlfriend?

Everyone present in party clapped there hands.
Kriya was broadly smiling seeing his nervousness and intertwined her hands with...


Thanks for reading. Pls do Big comments. UR comments r only source of encouragement :)


Edited by Jasmine_ash - 29 December 2014 at 12:15am

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
aww superb update lakin suspen pe chod diya next update soon plzz..

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radhikha Groupbie

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:00am | IP Logged
I think rey is going to prapose tanni nd nice update

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piyali_rockstar Groupbie

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:10am | IP Logged
interesting..omg..meri taani is crying..i am feeling sad ..pls taani ko sad mat update soon.thnx for the pm

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dh19 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:12am | IP Logged
awesome and emotional
loved taayam part
missing them 
not fair
kaha pe lake atka diya.. 
do cont soon

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Iman_taarey Goldie

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:12am | IP Logged
nice part
bt tumne etne imp point mai kyu churdia
let it be
loved it
tani went to jodpoor
i think rey il propose
n kria is his bff
so they meet in mall
update nxt part soon

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