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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Veryy good update J
BTW Sakhi is your name JyotsnaWink Its just a guess tell me am I correct or wrong!
Nw abt update
really well penned...Hmm Supriya nd Drau both lookin at the same thing...bt with difft eyes nd emotions so good written!
Now chalo make Arya look at his Supriya quickly
update soon!

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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 7:28am | IP Logged
wow! fantastic update angarani dear!! really i love the way u handle ur river like words flow ..u penned extraordinarily the anxiety of supri..fantastic..hats off to u dear.and the folk lore u wrote..yes!! I too heard it..and enjoyed it in ur words..continue soon dear

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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Wonderful update J Smile

The anxiousness between both the princess was well described each with different emotions Star

Loved the way u described Angaraj when he stepped in the main dais when his name was called.Embarrassed

And the words & the emotions u used to describe priya's emotions was apt, restless, crazy in love and childlike...

So the fiery princess did stop Angaraj & he has to face the humiliation he never deserved at the first place Cry

Update soon J...would like to know soonn how supriya would react to this Panchali's sudden outburst & humiliation towards her love Tongue

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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 9:31am | IP Logged
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Lovely 1 dr.awesome wr8 up.sry 4 late dr...

Edited by Sonatia - 06 February 2015 at 1:44am

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Wow...Wow...Wow...Fantastice updates,very well written..First Hats off to u for giving this beautiful story,AngraniClapClap
Supriya n Karna...wow super jodi...Liked them very much...
Supriya...hahaha...really a cutie pie.EmbarrassedLOL.her inner feelings r nicely portrayed in all chapters,but especially in last chapter,I liked her feelings...
Haan...forget to say...Ur description about Angraj was first-class...Thumbs Up
Supriya would feel like flying in the sky now na??...hahaha...LOL

Thanks for the pm...waiting...Pls do PM  me whenever u had done the update...Thank u..Smile
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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Sanskruti

Veryy good update J
Thanks sansi
BTW Sakhi is your name JyotsnaWink Its just a guess tell me am I correct or wrong!
Nope it's JAYA VARSHU LAXMI 

LOL WHO told you about my name ???? Did aarti told you...

Nw abt update


really well penned...Hmm Supriya nd Drau both lookin at the same thing...bt with difft eyes nd emotions so good written!
Now chalo make Arya look at his Supriya quickly

He will soon

Sorry very busy but will update on 5 th if possible
update soon!
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Posted: 04 February 2015 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhivyakrish31

wow! fantastic update angarani dear!!

Thanks :*
really i love the way u handle ur river like words flow

Well thanks that's literally overwhelming

Well I am nothing as compared to you
You are a pro at writing Di
Love you
..u penned extraordinarily the anxiety of supri..fantastic..hats off to u dear

Crushed by cute compliment
.and the folk lore u wrote..yes!! I too heard it..and enjoyed it in ur words..continue soon dear

Ab apne kaha h toh aapko wait nhi krvaungi I ll continue soon

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Posted: 04 February 2015 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Hemangi

Wonderful update J Smile

The anxiousness between both the princess was well described each with different emotions

AWw Thanks Di if you think that yes you got my idea diff emotions flowing out of the princesses both are anxious but for different reasons

Star

Loved the way u described Angaraj when he stepped in the main dais when his name was called.Embarrassed


Well he needs description does he
After he is the king of all hearts here


And the words & the emotions u used to describe priya's emotions was apt, restless, crazy in love and childlike...

Well supriyaa is me here so she had to be child-like lol ty



So the fiery princess did stop Angaraj & he has to face the humiliation he never deserved at the first place Cry

Yes he never did she will get it all back



Update soon J...would like to know soonn how supriya would react to this Panchali's sudden outburst & humiliation towards her love Tongue


Just wait how supriyaa reacts panchaali get ready for her rudra tandava lol in upcoming updates

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