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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 6:27pm | IP Logged
Note to reader's the title miss understanding is not a spelling mistake it's a pun intended that will be decoded only after reading chapter 2 
Open for reviews and comments 

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Beautiful Sakhi really well written Embarrassed
u said it very well abt my Arya making girls drool over him even now so true Embarrassed I love him veryyy much Embarrassed
veryyy sweet nd cute Supriya loved it, nd Kadu thanks a lot for it dear
waise u forgot to PM me Cry so early u forgot your sakhi who won ur heart Angry Cry

Edited by .Sanskruti - 05 January 2015 at 9:32pm

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update J Smile

The way you have penned Karn's physical features, his aura, his smile was beautiful Embarrassed

KaDu part...aww I loved it Smile

I also loved the way you have written the teasing part of Govind. Supriya teased by Govind in Drau's swayamvar is a refreshing take in the story...I liked it very much

Continue the next part soon...& also forgot to PM me Cry

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 4:36am | IP Logged
very nice dear!! lovely one!!! supri is going to die by the cupid arrows of lord of love now..LOLoh!! again i am going to face my arya's humiliation in the next chappy..u forgot to PM me na..update soon dear and PM me

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
nice start
& beautiful updates.
I love the name of ur fic, Karnpriya.
Thanks for sending me the link & sorry for my late reply.
continue soon.

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Sanskruti

Beautiful Sakhi really well written Embarrassed
u said it very well abt my Arya making girls drool over him even now so true Embarrassed I love him veryyy much Embarrassed
veryyy sweet nd cute Supriya loved it, nd Kadu thanks a lot for it dear
waise u forgot to PM me Cry so early u forgot your sakhi who won ur heart Angry Cry
 
Ty so much I drool in my dreams so added this line
Supriya ko thoda karnali touch dia more Kadu to be witnessed
Arey sansi sakhi tumhe hee nhi sabhi see puchlo kisi ko PM NHIkiya tha UPDATE WALA

Arey why in my wildest dreams will I forget my sweet sautan


Edited by angrani - 08 January 2015 at 5:38pm
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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Hemangi

Beautiful update J Smile

The way you have penned Karn's physical features, his aura, his smile was beautiful Embarrassed

KaDu part...aww I loved it Smile

I also loved the way you have written the teasing part of Govind. Supriya teased by Govind in Drau's swayamvar is a refreshing take in the story...I liked it very much

Continue the next part soon...& also forgot to PM me Cry


Ty hems dear 
comic content was much needed ...so  teaser
Arey saari karnalis itni emotional kyun Ho jaati h
KISI KO BHI PM NHI KIYA THA AB krungi
Aap sab arya ki tarah emotional mat Ho ... nxt time sabko milega PM

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhivyakrish31

very nice dear!! lovely one!!! supri is going to die by the cupid arrows of lord of love now..LOLoh!! again i am going to face my arya's humiliation in the next chappy..u forgot to PM me na..update soon dear and PM me

Arey baba kisi ko PM nhi kia. .
Ty ab thoda serious ... I really don't want panchali humiliating  him 
par I cannot distort history 

Pinky promise dat I'll PM nxt tym positively

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