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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 7:58am | IP Logged
good update Angarani JS.
U adapted so many dialogues  from Star Mahabharat.
I never like that dialogue where Karna's talent was compared with  Rakshas, danavs & all.
waiting for the next part.


Edited by sania_58 - 14 February 2015 at 7:59am

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 10:14am | IP Logged
amazing update ... angaraj's emotions ws described really well... as a woman I would support draupadi bt angaraj's pain s different.. he faced every insults wid boldness.. dts y all admire him even n kalyug... u portrayed hs feelings beautifully... awesome update..

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sonatia

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhivyakrish31

wow!!! again a swayamvar part..but unexpected one..u made karna  dury..panchali to speak more now..normally all the FF s here will make me to cry but made me to clapp my hands ..well done aarya..u gave a nice tongue lashes to all and duryyy wow..love him here in this hall standing for his friend..soo nice..very well written angarani dear..the thoughts of supri is also very well penned here.
  no need for any sympathy for panchali and krishna here..let them as it is.because what he lost in her swayamvar is a loss..
  btw..u forgot to PM me this time alsoAngry Cry

First of all sorry that I didn't send anyone the PM that time 

I post it then I am really lazy dog at sending pms so sorry Di

Well before writing this part I got through some ff and all were amazing

But all had one thing in common that there karn was suppressed in anger I know that he was actually like this but that's how I wanted him to be little open this time
Tysm you got my point 

Overwhelming cmnt Di mwahh

But I guess shree kanha must say something



Edited by angrani - 14 February 2015 at 2:29pm
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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuppypie121

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Sanskruti

A good writting style J...I wont say such things r nt related to the epic nd all...everyone has the right to enjoy their creative liberty!...its ur FF go ur way thats it I wont comment more!!

Arey didn't you like it dear but karna  doesn't have to be the goody tragic hero always I took the brisk risk saw   result I know that you didn't like this pov
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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sania_58

good update Angarani JS.
U adapted so many dialogues  from Star Mahabharat.
I never like that dialogue where Karna's talent was compared with  Rakshas, danavs & all.
waiting for the next part.

Yup madhu sorry for the hurtful lash out of draupadi
even I don't like it but..


Edited by angrani - 14 February 2015 at 2:35pm

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