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Posted: 13 February 2015 at 10:02pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 4:49am | IP Logged
wow!!! again a swayamvar part..but unexpected one..u made karna  dury..panchali to speak more now..normally all the FF s here will make me to cry but made me to clapp my hands ..well done aarya..u gave a nice tongue lashes to all and duryyy wow..love him here in this hall standing for his friend..soo nice..very well written angarani dear..the thoughts of supri is also very well penned here.
  no need for any sympathy for panchali and krishna here..let them as it is.because what he lost in her swayamvar is a loss..
  btw..u forgot to PM me this time alsoAngry Cry

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 5:07am | IP Logged
A good writting style J...I wont say such things r nt related to the epic nd all...everyone has the right to enjoy their creative liberty!...its ur FF go ur way thats it I wont comment more!!
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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 5:21am | IP Logged
That's So Nice !!

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 5:29am | IP Logged
I wanted Karna, Duryodhan and Draupadi to speak more during these episodes.. Bt tht never happened.. Thanx for PMing me.. I love the fact that the three spoke more here..

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 7:58am | IP Logged
good update Angarani JS.
U adapted so many dialogues  from Star Mahabharat.
I never like that dialogue where Karna's talent was compared with  Rakshas, danavs & all.
waiting for the next part.


Edited by sania_58 - 14 February 2015 at 7:59am

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 10:14am | IP Logged
amazing update ... angaraj's emotions ws described really well... as a woman I would support draupadi bt angaraj's pain s different.. he faced every insults wid boldness.. dts y all admire him even n kalyug... u portrayed hs feelings beautifully... awesome update..

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Posted: 14 February 2015 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
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