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Manhattan Dreams-SS |Vikram&Shobha| Chap3 pg4 (Page 3)

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiranpreethee

Looking forward to your story. Happy Shobha did not leave them because of Sarika. Now waiting for Vikram to woo her back to India.
naa tauba.. meri itni himmat!!!LOL
Update  coming up in a bit!!!

Thanks  for  commenting  hope to see ya  as a regular

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Writing  for ViBha is so  easy  ...   Tried to keep it as happy as possible... the backstory of the Oberois will be  revealed  in the upcoming chapters
Next Update Tomorrow Big smile

Also here's a chapter you  were  probably not  expecting me to write
 Thank you to all those who have  commented!!!!  Makes me One happy writer !!!


Word Count :- 994


Chapter 2 
Just like I had promised 

Nani & the kids  wanted to come along with him ... Vikram had failed to mention to  Nani about the fact that  their Shobha  was sick.. Nani I don't want you to be alarmed just wait  nani...  jiyu rehu  please go wait inside your rooms...  Vikram says a little anxious...  The kids obey and leave

Puttarji kya hua ??? Nani  beseeches Vikram worriedly with pain  seeping in her heart

Nani  Shobha has been sick really  sick.. Usse  cancer tha  nani vikram cries his heart  ACHING... I promised her that I'll be there in sickness and in health & I  broke part of the said promise

Gal sun  Nani says tu jaana chahta hai na  meri pari ko laane wapas she adds  slowly caressing  his head  mai bhi aaungi tere saath. bacchon ko Sharda aur Garima ke paas chodke chalte hai apni pari se milne  hmmm Vikram nods and hugs nani saying  Best birthday gift ever...

Meanwhile In  The Sachdev House

Sharda was at peace with what was happening with her family  Shobha was recovering well, she had her nephew Aman to thank for  that.. Vikram made her  daughter  so happy. Everything was falling back into  place  she started to think of Vikram as her  own son despite  not being blood related.. she sees  Her partner in Crime Pammi (Nani) walk in  smiling and nudges  her

Kya hua  aap itna  khush  kyu  lag rahi hai di..(nani from Sharda's mouth  sounds weird to meLOL) she asks her BFF  smirking  knowing that her  baby Garu had played catalyst to this entire  fiasco

humari  khushi  is back soon sharda nani says  Vikram &  I are leaving to get Shobha back and we wanted to leave the  kids with you and Garu if that  is  okay with both of you

Garima comes & Interrupts saying  ofcourse Nani ma we both love the kids to bits and  we want you  to go safely and call us as soon as you  meet bhabhi ok  Vikram bhaiyya has my skype id  and we  will talk.. aap aur bhaiyya  meri di ko  bacchon ke adoption ke baare  me mat bataiye... we want a full family re union haan

nani laughs  haan baba haan I won't  deny you  anything Garu she says pulling her cheeks we  need time to leave  samjhi  2 weeks ke andar Vikram is arranging for our visas...


In NYC

The  air is  crisp and the  inmates of The Oberoi mansion  are  giggling away at something.. its  Christmas eve  there is this one lady who remembers  Her Beloved's birthday every year her eyes welled up with unshed tears  happy  birthday Vikram she says  crying  holding onto the photograph of theirs  with  jiyu when she was  6 the last time  she  saw her daughter badal gaye honge naa aap Vikram??? she thought  sadly..

Dr Aman Sachdev who was walking by  notices her tears starts talking Shobhi di aap ro kyu rahi hai ?? he asks her  with warmest of warm voice

Chotechand mujhe kuch nai hua Shobha turns around and says with all smiles she could muster... bas aaj Vikra.. khair tu  ek kaam karega  please mere liyye ?? she looks at him hopefully  please  jaa kar Garima ko skype  karo.. mujhe bacchon ke bare me puchna hai...

Ok boss  he says smiling knowingly...


The Skype Chat & Call

Crazygal_garu123 :- cant talk in  call  aap  batao  kya hua  ...aaj bhi Vikram bhaiyya ke  baare me??

DashSach2225:- Han  par Garu Video call now!!!!  Chachi  hai saath ???

Crazygal_garu123 :- nahi  hai ... aap mujhse  baat karein naa accha lekin  mein  friend ke yeha jaa rahi hu  in a  bit... aap jaldi connect ho...

DashSach2225 :- ok done 


a moment's pause

oii Garu aaj Vikram bhai ka birthday hai kya??? Aman asks  her 

OMG YES  Aman bhaiyya  kya  di??? ek minute  I want them to come face to face now   aap  laptop  sleep mai rakho aur  di ko leke aao... mai  Vikram bhaiyya ko laati hu Aman  nods and screams Shobhi dii Garu aapse  baat karna  chahti hai  jaldi  aayein

Chotechand chillana  band kar  by god ! ab kya hua hoga Shobha wonders silently

Plan Milap  part one done  Aman  thinks and  smiles  gleefully... then puts a  poker face and says  aap  baithke  baatein kare  I'm off to  the hospital  phir  aaj shaam ko Gini ke saath date  and all  he  blushes making Shobha  giggle

Jaa ab ... she whacks him giggling and turns on the laptop  and she freezes.. on the other side  there is  Vikram... Garu had said that Aman had wanted to talk to him  but she had  set up  both of them elaborately and left satisfied to her friend's place...

Vikram... Vik.. Vikram aap... Shobha  was  shocked and crying...

Please, Please my love don't cry please... aaj 5 saal ho gaye hai  tumhara chehra dekhe.. bohot badal gayi ho haan... Aur aaj tabiyat  kaisi hai tumhari?? Vikram asks her 

Considering everything  I'm doing ok way better than ok Shobha  whispered... Jiyu Aur Rehu ko  miss kar rahi hu aaj bohot aap ke saath hai naa?? she beseeches

Haan  & they  miss you immensely Vikram says  omitting the fact that  the kids now have  2 parents and that He had adopted them legally he had wanted it to be a surprise.

Acha  waise aaj aap ka special day hai naa  Happy  40th Birthday my  love  aap ko bohot  miss kar rahi hu Shobha says. Her eyes  twinkling...

Yaad tha  tumhein?? Vikram asks surprised 

Haan.Har saal roti thi main... with regrets  that I  never got to wish you  in person in the last 5 years  humari photo  dekh ke  jee bhar jaata tha she says...

No more regrets Shobha Vikram says Main aa raha hun tumhein lene  "Just Like I Promised" 2 weeks just 2  more  weeks sare  visa issues  sort hone ke baad  I''ll be there  with a  big surprise for you  he smiles into the laptop

I waited  5 years Vikram.. what  is two  weeks  she says  smiling...



Fin!!

See you tomorrow lovely people!!!

Lekha

proof read  for errors  sorry if there are any other mistakes


Edited by -Destiny- - 27 December 2014 at 2:19am

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
will proof read tomorrow  have a great day!!!!!!
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Great to read the second chapter and I like the positive outlook  of the story. So are we going to be treated to cute and romantic vibes scenes soon?
Mature love stories is another type of understanding and I believe depth. The passion would be different as two mature persons come with experience of life and they will have a different outlook about love, commitment, relationship etc. So looking forward to the meeting of Vikram and Shobha after 5 years separation.

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiranpreethee

Great to read the second chapter and I like the positive outlook  of the story. So are we going to be treated to cute and romantic vibes scenes soon?
Mature love stories is another type of understanding and I believe depth. The passion would be different as two mature persons come with experience of life and they will have a different outlook about love, commitment, relationship etc. So looking forward to the meeting of Vikram and Shobha after 5 years separation.
yes  light fluffy moments in store  for the  next  few chapters  
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Character Sketch 1

Touted as  "The Cuties" by Shobha 

Aman Sachdev (Played By Sidharth Shukla)
A few  things you  need to know about him
He's a/the
  1. Cancer Specialist
  2. Closet  RomanticEmbarrassed
  3. ViBha shipper Big smile
  4. Problem solver 
  5. EASIEST Bakra to prankLOL
Nickname(s) :- Chotechand (by Shobha)

Ragini "Gini" Oberoi (Played By Aamna Sharif)


Few things about her 

 She's a/the
  1. Child Specialist
  2. Shobha's  younger sister (more to be revealed  in chapters)
  3.   SANEST Saint amongst  Of All OberoisLOL
Nickname(s) :- Gini (by Aman)   &  Melody (by Shobha & Vikram)


Edited by -Destiny- - 27 December 2014 at 10:53am
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
thanks for commenting!!!!!!!!!  sorry about not updating yesterday!!! had a  l'il accident whilst I was out!!!!  Dead bruised my  knee  really badly Cry  and the pain was  hindering my  creative  thinking  but I'll update double to make up!!!
Embarrassed sorry  aagain

Lekha
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Nice update dear, looking fwd to Vibha meeting, take care of your knee. Sorry to hear abt it.

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