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Manhattan Dreams-SS |Vikram&Shobha| Chap3 pg4

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Hi lovely people EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 My name is Lekha /Lee and I am an aspiring  writer and  some day  would like to publish my work.. I am currently  writing a novel whose theme sorta made me want to recreate the storyline with  Vikram & Shobha... I really liked how intense  Viku's  confession  to his naani about  his love was!!! 

Also as a side note  can anyone help me  with making  this a forum exclusive post??? correct me in my comment section here 

Here is a little teaser of my novel Aptly styled for the forum ( With l'il changes  here and there)

Set 5 years  from the  current plotline of the show
Ages of characters 
Sharda -67 Vikram- 39  Jiya-11
Shobha -38  Rehaan- 11 Naani-- 75
(taking creative liberties with ages)

Those misunderstandings that Sarika/Madhura had created between us  made her leave the  kids the  family and me behind... couldn't she have trusted us..  me ..   her  eyes when she left  made my  heart weep... realizations sometimes  come too late.. and  having let her go was the worst mistake I have ever made in my life... Come back to me  my love... my heart is weeping...  Wherever you are  Come back to me my darling!!!

TADAAA!!!

Positive Constructive Criticism Appreciated!!!!

Loads of Love 
Lekha!!


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Do not ever think of Shoba leaving Vikram.
Our threads of lives hang on their union
Even writing otherwise  will make all our ADHYs weep.
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rangamma

Do not ever think of Shoba leaving Vikram.
Our threads of lives hang on their union
Even writing otherwise  will make all our ADHYs weep.
Happy ending type  story  ... angsty  in  beginning but  yeah!! I won't disappoint ...worry not
thanks  for commenting though...

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No no no. Dont separate shobha and vikram even in dream my dear.
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Originally posted by fan555

No no no. Dont separate shobha and vikram even in dream my dear.
NEVER!! I promise that!!! Thanks  for  commenting <3

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Chapter 1

In sickness and in health

He made a promise to his love and ready  he was to keep it... Vikram Ahuja remembered what he had  said  to Shobha  after Sharda aunty had been shown what a wench of  a daughter she has.. Sarika  was exposed for all her  deeds...especially driving away Shobha
*Flashback*
What would you ask me to do  for you  when you need me by  your  side Shobha.. especially when you are  vulnerable?? Vikram had asked randomly face just shining with emotions
I need you to trust me and love me  whenever I am at my worst... i  need you to be there with me Vikram... in sickness and in health  promise me .. Shobha seemed  supremely emotional

I PROMISE..In Sickness & In Health... Always... he  whispered sealing a trust filled bond with her.. unsaid  words of love filling the air

*Flashback Over*

Shobha meant the entire world to  him...  He knew  nothing about her whereabouts but he knew either Sharda or Garima knew  where she  was because everytime  he spoke  about shobha  in front of them  their faces would turn grim and unusually sad as if they knew  something about where she was... 

Garu  can I ask you something?  Vikram asked garima hopeful that  she will lead him back to  the one he loves  immensely 
 
Go ahead bhaiyya  Garima smiled at him and  let him speak to her...

I want to know where Shobha is Garima ... he whispered adding Mujhe jaana hai ke meri best friend meri partner kahan hai..

Ok... Garima  had  decided to tell him the truth. Bhabhi is in  New York City for the last 5 years...  She had blood cancer. she's in rehabilitation now  all cured from her illness.. after Sarika di was exposed  we realized that she kept falling  sick... so mom and I decided
to send her to NYC to be  with my cousin Aman bhaiyya a  cancer  specialist who helped bhabhi out a lot.. she never  wanted to burden any of us  not EVEN YOU!!!
go get her back.. go  get your  love and unite  forever... She keeps asking about you...  not one  moment goes  without her searching  for you  during our  Skype calls ...

Vikram Ahuja had never  cried before this but  now  his tears  streamed down.. without shame!!!

He  ran home  smiling ...  He saw  Nani sitting there  sharing  chocolates  with Jiya & Rehaan.. those babies of his  he had adopted 5  years ago  making  them his children...

Naaannniii  he  screamed shocking  everyone  with his high  pitched  scream Jiya & Rehaan had unceremoniously  giggled in unison... at the  goofy antics of their dad...

Oye!! Chillana band kar  khote!! bata  kya hua Nani  asked  She  was super excited to  see  her champ smile and  scream after  so  long!!!

Shobha  mil gayi  Nani  she's in New York City... Vikram  said whilst he hugged Nani & the  kids

The kid's  eyes  twinkled  Really dad  they asked him  Mom ghar  vapas aa rahi hai naa???
 All Vikram could do was  smile and  whisper a small yes

498 words!!!  almost  500  word target  for the writer in me  No more  angst  from my end !!!  Phew  that was  hard  for me to write ... More fluff tomorrow

Ps I will try  update  daily... be on the  look out  


Lekha
re verified for spelling errors  too!!!


Edited by -Destiny- - 25 December 2014 at 8:24am

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INDEX
In Sickness & In Health - Page 1 
Just like I had promised  -  Page 3
Character Sketch #1  Page 3
She's A basketcase - Page 4
Embarrassed



 to be  edited as I  post


Edited by -Destiny- - 01 January 2015 at 10:33am
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Please continue !! We are all in love with the pure romance of Vikram towards Shobha elements with the way they show beauty grace affection !
We encourge all various shades of that looking fwd to it,

Thanks comtinue soon Smile

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