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Hey all.. 

Well here goes another thread for HH.. (FIFTEENTH  one). Thank you so much for liking this story of mine ... plz leave me thora lamba comments and lots of likes ... They are gonna encourage me to post soon...


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PROLOGUE

I don't regret loving you. I don't regret trusting you. I regret giving you the power to hurt me in a way that I'll never be able to be fine again!
                    Maan...

If someone hurts you, just keep your head up high and prove to them that you don't need them to be happy.
                   Geet


Courtesy :- Taken from Google...

CHARECTER SKETCH


Maan Singh Khurrana:- 28yrs old, Rude, Arrogant ,businessman.. His life involves only round his business world..Nothing to do with anyone... Has no one in his life.. Neither his family nor friends...


Geet khanna:- 20ys old, Sweet, loving, bit childish, bit matured and caring girl... had done her graduation ,wanting to join post graduation college.. Her dream to be independent and join colleges for medicine and surgery... lives with her parents..


Just wanted to let readers know abt the age and attitudes of main chrs ... that's all...



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PART 73

She liked that He actually considered of her willingness first, before thinking on telling others abt this trip...He cared for her consent.. But, she also felt bad that she was feeling so much shy in front of him and that's why she couldn't give him any positive response, that he understood and her nod meant everything to him... Relaxed,. Geet started to think on the upcoming picnic...

It was evening time, and everybody was sitting in the lawn for the evening Tea/Coffee... Geet and NT brought the trays ,along with snacks, since Maan has suggested to have the tea in the garden area for a change... Everybody looked surprised as it was rare, that Maan spent time with the family... But when he suggested, everybody gladly agreed..After a few talks, Maan thought to talk on actual point...

Maan:- I wanted to say something...(Hearing that everybody looked at Maan keenly... With Yash's nod, Maan contd)Was thinking, why don't we go out ... on this weekend??? To some far place.. Away from this busy world...

Yash(raised his eyes hearing Maan,ST):- Go out ??? okhh, so he is talking abt that picnic plan??? But, did Geet agree or he, is imposing this decision as well, on her..(Thinking that Yash looked at Geet, trying to look her surprised rather shocked face.. But , he found her calm, smiley face)This means she does know...

Everybody looked at Yash...When Yash didn't say anything, Dev tried to talk...since , silence wasn't comforting at all..

Dev:- Uhh!! That's really a great idea, bro...Right NT???

NT(smiled brightly and nodded):- yeah !! perfect idea... But, can't we extend the days ?? I mean, just two days??? One day will go in travelling ... then when we will enjoy???

Dev(ST):- Oh!! Keep quite NT, if Bro got angry then he might cancel this plan...

NT(got Dev's glares and she rectified):- uhh!! Its ok... We will enjoy anyways...(she passed a smile, uncomfortably..)

Dev:- uhh!! Yes bro.. That's really nice idea of going out...

Maan(looked at Dev and nodded):-So, what do you say Dadimaa???

Dadimaa(nodded, feeling emotional , seeing this side of her grandson):- Am happy for you Beta...

Maan:- So, its set... We all are going to the trip on this weekend... And everybody has to join... Even You too Dadimaa... You are coming ...

Dadimaa(shook her head):- No beta... Am too old for this trip... What would I do there...I will get bored there ...

Maan:- Dadimaa, you aren't going to be bored... Coz, your best friend is going to join you... (Everybody looked at him in surprise...  Even Geet, was unaware of his actual plans) Well., yeah... Was thinking to invite Geet's parents there too... They will also get a chance to meet their daughter and you will be meeting with Geet's Grandmaa...(He looked at Geet and then contd) and we can extend days... Like more than 2 days ...we can go for 4-5 days ...(He said that while looking at NT, who instantly smiled)Isn't it good???

Geet:- Perfect... (Geet exclaimed , forgetting that she was sitting with everyone... She got happy, only hearing his plans..Everyone looked at her and Geet then realized what she did)Matlab, nice idea... (She tried to be nonchalant)

Yash(smiled at her child nature... The girl got happy, just by hearing abt her parents):- Its ok beta, you don't have to feel embarrassed ... We all know, how much you miss your parents ...  After all, you seldom meet them... So, we all understand...

Geet looked at Her papaji and passed a smile to him.. Then she looked at Maan, who was looking at her only but when he saw her gaze on him, he looked down and smiled.. Maan knew, her parents were somewhat offended with Khurrana's .. specially her mother... after all happened in the party... So, he wanted to let them know that Geet truly was happy in this relation and that, they were now comfortable with each other... This was his way of getting their apology.. Asking for silent apology...

Avi(also was delighted):- Wow... bohat maza ayega...Mere friends bhi jatey hain picnic pe har saal, ab hum bhi jaengey aur khoob maza karengey.. hai naa mama???

Geet:- Hmm.. (She smiled looking at her son) haan ab se hum bhi enjoy karengey, aapke friends ki tarah...

Maan looked lost in thoughts, first he was thinking abt Her parent's apology...and now, Avieet's talks made Maan mum...There was so much happiness in their voices and their eyes... They surely, were going to enjoy the most, as Avi never had been to such outing and Geet was all happy for Avi...

Yash(finally broke the silence):- So, this is all set... we all are going on picnic on this weekend.. But, what abt your business Maan???Won't that  get affected??? (Maan knew His Dad again was teasing him)

Maan(Smiled at him and replied):- Don't worry Dad, that won't get affected.. Will manage everything .. and Am not having any meeting, the next week.. apart from one, where we are heading to...

Yash(smiled shaking his head, at His son's workaholic nature):- okhh...

Nobody dared to deny Maan to not to bring business in this trip.. He was arranging this trip, even himself coming with them all.. This itself was a big thing.. So, they left this workaholic Businessman alone..

All set and done, Maan called her parents and after exchanging hello HI's ...Maan told abt the picnic, after a bit of hesitation, Geet's father agreed and then Maan handed his cell to Geet..She talked to her parents ..For the first time, Geet's mother sensed that Geet truly was happy ...She blessed her daughter and then the call was cut...

Next Day, At Geet's college..

Geet's friends wanted to meet their jiju, as they didn't get a chance when they visited Geet's home the last time...

Shefali:- We will meet Jiju today at any cost...

Jia:- Yes Geet, you can't stop us now... We have been requesting you from long time now... You will have to at least one Hi...

Geet(looked apprehensive, but they were pestering from long time now so she shrugged and said):- Well, as you wish...

They all were waiting for Maan to come... Actually, Geet was waiting for Maan to pick her up and Jia and Shefali wanted to personally meet and introduce themselves to MSK... In talks, Geet told them abt her picnic plans ... and they were teasing Geet of lots of things... She, being helpless to stop them  and in turn get more teasings from her friends, just shied and blushed... 

Rahul was looking at Geet with a dreamy look .. and a smirk... He was hearing their talks...and was planning ways, to spoil her plans with his plans... Geet turned and glanced at him, he sweetly smiled at her, Geet ignored him and she and her friends left from there... Leaving a fuming Rahul behind, she insulted him yet again... Now, all the more determined to ruin her picnic...

Maan arrived and Geet moved to his car's direction.. Jia and Shefali tagged along.. Maan looked at the two girls and got down from the car...The over excited girls couldn't stop smiling ..

Shefali(came forward and took her hand out for a handshake with a dreamy look on her face):- Hi... We are Geet's friends... Am shefali... and She is Jia... (she told as she looked over her shoulder to Jia,)

Maan(looked at the girls and then at Geet..Then took the extended hand in his and smiled at the girl):- Hello.. Am Maan...

Jia (too forwarded her hand, saying):- Of course, we know, Maan Singh Khurrana...The Business Tycoon...

Maan:- Hmm... (he smiled and shook hand with her too..Feeling a bit awkward to see their weird looks on him) Shall we go??? (He looked at Geet)

Geet(eagerly nodded):- Jii..(Glaring her two friends..Didn't realize she was feeling J)

Maan(smiled at the two girls):- pleased to meet you both...

Jia:- Same here... (She sighed)

Maan smiled one last time, and Geet and Maan moved to sit in the car.. while the girls dreamily looked at them... And Rahul looked at them both in anger...

Geet:- Am sorry, if you mind their talks... They are my only friends..

Maan:- I didn't mind at all.. Guess, they are the girls, who visited Mansion before...(He completely ignored their odd ..dreamy  looks at him and recalled something, he asked)

Geet(looked at him in astonishment):- You remember them??? But, you didn't meet them that day???

Maan:- yeah, didn't meet... But, Dadimaa told me that day abt your friends so guess, these are same girls...

Geet:- yeah they are.. Actually they wanted to meet you from so many days .. If I have denied now as well, then they might have thought that something is not right in my marriage ... so... And I don't want anyone to know that we haven't started our marriage properly from day one...

Maan(looked thoughtful for a few secs before he smiled at her):- Its ok.. I understand ...

Geet:- Great... (she smiled back at him and he concentrated on the road)

For next couple of days, Rahul tried to know more abt Geet and her husband... And he got success, when co-incidentally he met with Dadimaa on her way to Mandir and he got free with her... Dadimaa talked to him as he told her that he was Geet's good friend at college..She had thought to mention abt Him to Geet.. but every day it slipped from her mind..And Rahul got to know a few things abt Geet... Her marital life...Her husband...And her SON...Providing him lots of ways to get a hold on Geet, which he has failed till now..

Weekend day

Khurrana's left for the picnic along with Geet's family as Maan sent someone along with Dev, to pick them up from airport and as they reached KM...and all left together...

Maan, Geet,  Avi and Geet's mom and Dad were in one car while in the other, Dev, NT, Yash,Dadimaa, and Geet's GM, were coming behind them.. And after them, was a car of Maan's BGs...

While Rahul followed them, he had heard abt Geet's picnic plans while she was telling to her close friends, the other day ...and he knew, at what time Geet will leave for picnic...So, here he was..prepared for everything...

Precap:- Will Rahul get success this time ??? or MSK will come in between yet again, to flop his plans...Evil Smile

Well,  Hurtful Hearts has completed a Year today so this update is for its Anniversary..Thanks to all, for  being a part of it... Heart Appreciate it ...Thumbs Up

Hope Long Parts don't bore you all... Its almost 1700 words part..

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Read This:- Honestly, Am not at all motivated to post the updates, besides having my very tight schedules these days...am taking time out to think...type and update.. Ouch But Since have started this .. am bound to end this ... So, won't ever ask for likes or comments... Do whatever you want yaar... Will just post the parts when they are ready... Being rude???Confused No, that's what called as Enough is enough... Look at the views to the updates and the responses in here... They are poles apart...Am not a person to Beg responses..Even if you don't like any part.. Then you can pm me or leave your views on threads...I don't take these comments on Heart... But no, you ppl read and go just like that... Anyways, Special thanks to those who still are sticking round my works...Really respect you all...  Smile

PART 74

Maan,Geet,Avi and Geet's mom and Dad were in one car while in the other, Dev, NT, Yash,Dadimaa, and Geet's GM, were coming behind them.. And after them, was a car of Maan's BGs...

While Rahul followed them, he had heard abt Geet's picnic plans while she was telling to her close friends, the other day ...and he knew, at what time Geet will leave for picnic...So, here he was..prepared for everything...

After Maan, only Dev knew, exactly where they all were heading to...since He also was driving and so, Maan told him abt the outing spot...First, they reached to airport where after boarding all took their seats..

Avi:- Mama, hum kahan jaa rahe hain???

Geet(looked at Avi and then at Maan, who was sitting beside them):-Pata nahi beta... (She knew, they were going to Shimla, but where, she was clueless abt that)

Maan smiled, he knew she wanted him to answer that question but he didn't...They were going to Shimla by crossing Chandigarh..and then taking Cars again to reach their actual destination.. in a way, this was Maan's plan to enjoy the weather ... Khurrana's had a Farm house, in Shimla and they were to stay at that place...

Soon Avi was tired and slept, keeping his head on Geet's shoulder.. She, for a while looked out patting Avi with affection and then she too dozed off, keeping her head on Maan's shoulder... Maan, who was working on his laptop, was startled at the weight, placed on his shoulder, but then one glance at the side, and an automatic smile spread over his lips... Adoring the sight, how Geet kept Avi to herself.. her one hand still on Avi's back, as she was patting him... while she , herself was leaning on Maan..

Maan closed his laptop and looked at them both... She was a kid at heart...He had been utterly wrong in thinking otherwise abt her... and he knew that... He always felt positive, when she was around him.. But never got to accept that to himself before, and now that he was witnessing her innocence, he was getting attracted towards her...

For a few mints, He just gazed her face... So calm, silent and Beautiful... He admired her sleeping form and then leaned backwards to give her more comfort.. and soon he too was having a nap..

Yash went to have a check on the ladies-His mother and Geet's DM, since they were sitting together to have chat... and when he turned to go back to his seat, his gaze fell on the sleeping beauties... He smirked and took a pic in his cell.. mentally deciding to tease his son later on.. with this pic.. .

After the plane landed, all again were escorted to their cars and Maan and Dev again took charge of the driving...  With a slight change Yash sat in Maan's car with Geet's father now, and Geet's mother went to sit with Her MIL and Dadimaa... Yash, now guessed that they were going to stay at their Farm House there...and he smiled looking at Maan...

Rahul's plan to follow Geet was terribly failing, when he got to know that they were off to Chandigarh..But then, being an influential Dad's son, he was determined to ruin Geet's trip at any cost... So, he managed to get in the next flight... where he found his Dad's secretary... and on inquiring him, he got to know that His Dad asked for his secretary to be there at Shimla where His dad was to meet Mr MSK... for a meeting...

Rahul(Smirked, ST):- Oh!!So, I guess, Mrs MSK is also going to be there in this meeting ... So why should I waste my time at Chandigarh, lets go to Shimla directly... (Rahul to secretary) when is the meeting???

S:- Sir, tomorrow at 7pm...

Rahul(ST):- Cool, wait and watch Geet... I will get you now at any cost.. everything is in my favor now...Wow... Am so excited...

He dialed his Dad's no. and informed him that he was coming to Shimla, just for fun.. and His dad remained clueless abt his son's plans...  

On the other hand.. Maan drove the car..The silence was killing... So, Avi thought to switch on the radio system... He eyed Geet to switch the radio... Geet nodded no...  

Geet:- Avi, nahi...

Avi:- Mama, plzzz, main bore ho raha hoon..

Geet(reluctantly looked at Maan and then said to Avi in hushed tone):- Nahi Avi... Papa ko gusa agaya tou...   

Avi(looked at Maan and then slowly said):- Papa, main FM suno???

Maan(glanced at Avi and nodded):- Hmmm ...

Avi(smiled and looked at Geet):- Thank you... and so, he switched the radio on... After playing with a few stations, finally he settled on one, where an RJ was talking ... and soon, RJ played the next song...

Song suggested by idunno...Yeah Am late on fulfilling your suggestion... was just thinking a situation so it was late... But its here ...Thanks for the suggestion...Smile



Dheere Dheere Se Meri Zindagi Mein Aana

Dheere Dheere Se Mere Dil Ko Churaana

Tum Se Pyaar Humein Kitna Hai Jaane Jaana

Tumse Milkar Tumko Hai Bataana

(As the song started Maaneet looked at each other...While Yash smirked at the perfect choice of the song...He mentally thanked RJ, for such beautiful song and yes, Avi too.. since he was the one who played the stereo system)

Dheere Dheere Se Meri Zindagi Mein Aana

Dheere Dheere Se Mere Dil Ko Churaana

Tum Se Pyaar Humein Kitna Hai Jaane Jaana

Tumse Milkar Tumko Hai Bataana

(Geet looked away feeling shy.. and fearing at the same time, what if Maan got angry..hastily she tried to switch the Radio off but couldn't, as Maan's hand was resting on the gear and radio was closer enough that she feared she might touch his hand )

Jabse Tujhko Dekha Dil Ko Koi Aaraam Nahin

Mere Hothon Pe Ek Tere Siva Koi Naam Nahin

(Maan smiled as the lines finished and glanced at Yash- who now, was smirking at Maan...Maan sighed and looked away..seriously , his Dad was too much)

Apna Bhi Haal Tumhare Jaisa Hai Saajan

Bas Yaad Tujhe Karti Hoon Aur Koi Kaam Nahin

(Geet felt, as if those lines were meant for her.. Yes, she was lost in his thoughts, nowadays after their dinner date together..They had shared quite a friendly dinner that night, but still Geet's reluctance was there... As He didn't confess what actually he felt for her apart from just LIKING her)

Ban Gaya Hoon Main Tera Deewana

Dheere Dheere Se Dil Ko Churaana

(He smiled recalling their first night...her attitude towards him...Her love for Avi... and her loud confession, truly had made him a fan of her..Her skills... Skills to win A child's heart.. To win his heart... Without much doing on her part)

Dheere Dheere Se Meri Zindagi Mein Aana

Dheere Dheere Se Mere Dil Ko Churaana

(Geet smiled at her own thoughts, while Maan too smiled at the other hand..The clearing of throat , made both of them to come out from their dream lands)

Geet glanced at back, to find Her Super Dad giving her an amused smile...She guessed, he was teasing.. and just then she switched the Radio off.. Feeling shy and uncomfortable under Yash's smiling face..Maan looked at that and smiled...His Dad, sometimes was too much...He shook his head at his Dad, when he winked at him and concentrated on the driving...

Just then Avi saw an ice cream vendor and wished to get that...Geet denied...

Avi(whispered near Geet's ear):- Mama plz...

Geet shook her head.. Yash saw the small talk between them both and asked Avi...

Yash:- Beta, kya hua???(Before Geet could have something Avi said)

Avi:- Dadu ice cream khani hai...

Geet closed her eyes ... while Maan and Yash smiled at Avi's odd demand...

Yash:- Maan, park the car at side... Lets have ice cream, weather is so beautiful... (He looked at Avi) Aur ice cream khane ka maza tou winter mein he ata hai naa...

Avi:- Bilkul sahi kaha Dadu.. (Yash looked at Maan)

Maan:- umm..Yeah Dad...

Maan parked the car, Dev's  and the other car also was stopped with Maan's car being stopping in the mid... Maan got down from the car, to inform Dev and rest of the family abt Ice cream plan... Geet's father got down, followed by an over excited Avi and Yash... Avi was more comfortable with his Dadu than His Nanu.. So, Avi tagged along with Yash, and Yash was busy in talks with Geet's father...

While Geet was trying to open the seat belt... which suddenly was being complicated to open... The button was struck and the car's doors were closed, automatically ... She realized she was trapped...  Hastily, Geet tried to open the door, but it didn't work.. and she saw her whole family was going around the ice cream vendor, since Maan and other cars were parked away from the road, at a side...

Geet(ST):-  Oh no!! They left me... When they will return.. I too want to eat ice cream.. For a few mints she just blindly tried to open the seat belt, but in vain... Forgot that ,she could have called and asked anyone or Maan to come there...

Maan was going with others when suddenly he realized that Geet wasn't with them... He looked around for Geet... But she wasn't anywhere near ... Worried, on not finding her there..He thought to ask others...

Maan:- Dad where is Geet???

Yash(too glanced around):- Arey !! Don't know beta... (That alerted others and specially Geet's parents, looked worried...Maan tried to ease them)

Maan:- Maybe she is left behind.. Will just check and come... You go ahead..

Yash too looked at Maan in resentment . while Maan quickly escaped from there...On his way, he tried to call Geet...

Geet heard the cell phone and grabbed her purse to get that out... Maan was waiting for Geet to receive the call, but then he found her inside the car and he cut the call, taking long steps to reach there...

Geet(ST):- Arey !! He cut the call..

Hitting her head with the phone she thought and then dialed Maan's no, as that call brought her back to the reality, that she could have made a call..instead of fearing , sitting alone in the car... But the call wasn't answered instead Geet heard the car door being opened...

Gasping in shock she looked at her side and was relieved when she found Maan there... The seat belt still was intact and so she sat there ...

Maan:- What are you doing here???

Geet:- wo... This seat belt isn't opening ... It has struck here ...

Maan sighed, controlling his anger and worrisome, didn't know why suddenly he felt that .. when first he heard the silence which was rare since she would have talked to Avi and everybody would have enjoyed their talks...and then,when he looked around, he found Geet missing .. He shook his thoughts away and came forward, trying ... opening the seat belt... 

Geet pushed herself backwards..finding him too close to her... almost leaning on her... breathing on her face ...She closed her eyes, feeling tickling sensation ..And She stopped breathing as his face came down on her neck..

Maan was no less, he too felt the shivering.. that Geet transmitted to him... as she, unknowingly clutched his arm.. Maan was quick to get out from that effect and soon he released her from the seat belt, and straightened himself... after clearing his throat to let her release his arm...to let her know that he was done undoing the seat belt, so that she won't feel embarrassed in front of him...

Geet too realized that and immediately got down from the car... that Maan locked again..and then both headed towards the ice cream stall, avoiding any contact with each other.. Where Geet was shy and blushing and Maan was smiling as he liked the growing closeness and comfort  between them both...

Hmm this time almost 2000 words update...  Smile

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PART 75

Farm House

Maan:- Welcome to our Farm House...

He looked at all and smiled..Geet's mother wasn't pleased with his casual tone... She knew nothing was between her daughter and her SIL so she started to dislike her own SIL but Geet's response to this trip was making her change her mind for Maan.. Geet was more excited and enthused for this trip, that surely made her happy.. But, the mother in her still wasn't satisfied so she looked at Maan a bit conscious and with lots of suspicions..

Geet looked around really liking the new atmosphere ..The new looks ...Everything was beautiful... Avi too was looking round the new place by running here and there... He never was out of the mansion that too with his parents...before and so this new place was making him happy...

Avi:- wow papa, ye jagah kitni achi hai...

Maan(smiled and bend down on his knees):- you liked it ???

Avi:- Haan... bohat...

Maan stood up, after ruffling his hairs playfully and looked at Geet... She passed a small smile to him that he returned and then turned to look around ...since everybody was in...He then asked Dev and NT to settle, while he looked at Geet's parents...

Maan:- Umm, lets rest for a while ..We will have lunch and then we will go out on dinner ..Nights here are chilly.. we will enjoy there... (Yash looked at Maan, at the word enjoy..He never used that word before forget abt enjoying his life... He nodded with a smirk...that Maan completely ignored and looked at Geet's parents again) Uhh!! I will show you, the guest room... And Dadimaa??? (He looked at his and Geet's GM, His Dadi came as a savior)

Maan's Dadimaa:- Maan, my friend is going to stay with me.. So, you can let your in-laws see your guest room.. Am going ..Saying so, Dadimaa smiled at Geet's parents and went to the other room... while Geet's parents followed Maan.. Geet and Avi looked here and there and when Yash gave a quizzical look to Geet ... She  got embarrassed and tagged along with Maan and her parents, since they were new and Geet wanted to follow Maan for some odd reasons ...and Avi being mama's boy, took hold of Geet's hand and went with her... Yash shook his head with a small smile.. and went to his own room...

After settling Geet's parents to the guest room... Maan turned to go to his room...He looked an uncomfortable Geet and thought to talk to her...

Maan:- Ahh!! Geet, lets go to OUR room...

Geet(smiled hearing him saying OUR room):- Ji...

Maan, Geet and Avi entered the room and Avi, without thinking anything else, just crashed on the bed.. leaving Maaneet to stare at him with a smile,the kid was so much tired... Geet then turned and took hold of her bag-that, servants left in their room-she started to take out her things ... and tried to keep them at a side... Maan saw that and asked...

Maan:- You can use that closet... The second one, its empty...

Geet(looked back at him, blushing ..he was being thoughtful and caring these days..and no doubt she like that):- Thank you..Thanking him, she started to adjust her things in that closet...

Maan(saw one of her book and commented):- You brought books here???

Geet:- yeah.. Wo, I thought to study harder from this year so...

Maan(smiled, liking that she was being serious for her career):- Well, Have thought, we are here for a small vacation...

Geet:- That applies to you too right??? But, you also are gonna attend a meeting here ??? So...

Maan:- Oh that... (He liked her complaining for the first time, maybe..That showed her authority on him and he felt the urge to explain his point)well, umm.. Am a workaholic, you know that.. Can't stay away from work.. And Mr Verma is in here... So, and its not just a meeting but Dinner meeting so.. its kinda outing too...

He finished with a small smile and Geet returned that... Feeling special as he kept his views in front of her this openly...

Geet:- And I just brought this , coz maybe I get free time here so... (She gestured to the book she brought with herself)

Maan(smiled):- That am sure, you won't get ...

Geet(was offended with his sentence):- Are you trying to say I don't want to study???

Maan(shook his head):- No.. Not like that... Just, I know, Avi won't leave you at peace here... That's why...(he added)and plus, we are here for relaxing not for stressing... I didn't mean-when I asked you to study-to forget the enjoyment of life... but my point was, just concentrate on your studies...Be a bit serious abt your career ..That's it.. One can't force anyone for anything ...

Geet(smiled):- Nowadays, your talks makes me wonder, are you the  same guy who, on very next day of our marriage taunted a good morning wish, when I was lying on floor... (She giggled at the end) I mean you were so rude and serious ...

Maan smiled and looked away, remembering that day when she proudly announced that she won't come anywhere near his things and to prove her point, she slept on couch, and when Maan woke up in the next day, she was lying on floor and maybe was in pain...

Maan(he then looked at her):- Trust me, am trying to change ...

Geet(s instant reply was):- That I don't doubt...

Maan(nodded with a sigh):- Anyways, why don't you also sleep for a while...

Geet:- No, am going down... for lunch preps...

Maan:- Geet  relax, you don't have to work ... Servants are there, they will make everything ... You just rest...

Geet:- No.. but , I will just look after them... Don't want to sleep ... Am fresh ...

Maan(shrugged off):- Whatever...As you wish...

Geet:- Umm ,what are you doing??? I mean, sleeping ???

Maan:- Naah!!  Am gonna freshen up and then will do some work...  

Geet(sighed heavily):- Can I say something??? If you don't mind... ???(Maan nodded and she contd)You, know, you are kinda boring sometimes ...

Maan(smiled):- Tell me something that I don't know..

Geet(ST):-Mr Hubby Khurrana, you won't ever forget this trip.. I will let you get familiar with the word ENJOYMENT in this trip and when we'll go back, you will say, that you enjoyed here...

Geet smiled and started to go out of the room.. Maan for a few secs, looked at the closed door and then shaking his head he went to the rest room to freshen up and then got himself busy in the work...He didn't feel like sleeping after the small nap with Geet in his arms and he had nothing to do, so to engage himself he had only one option like always ... and he opted that ...

Those Who don't wish to hear the song in the BG, can STOP the song by pressing STOP or pause button, given at the mid of PART 74...Am not removing, since am liking this ...Smile

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PART 76

Geet smiled and started to go out of the room.. Maan for a few secs, looked at the closed door and then shaking his head he went to the rest room to freshen up and then got himself busy in the work...He didn't feel like sleeping after the small nap with Geet in his arms and he had nothing to do, so to engage himself he had only one option like always ... and he opted that ...

After lunch all were sitting in the hall...Maan was seated beside Yash... and Geet at Maan's other side on another couch...Geet's father was in front of them and Dadimaa, Geet's Grand mom and Geet's mom were sitting a bit far from them, talking... Maan was having his black coffee..Geet was watching Avi...  Yash was looking at the three... Just then Yash thought of something and looked at Avi, who was watching cartoon on TV...

Yash:- Avi beta, idhar aao...

Avi:-Ji Dadu... He ran to where his Dadu was sitting and then Yash brought him in his lap...

Yash:- Avi, main soch raha tha kyun na main aur aap ek room mein soyen yahan par???

With that said, Maaneet looked at Yash with quizzical gazes... whereas Geet's mother's eyes and ears caught the talks while busy in talking to Dadimaa...

Avi:- Main mama papa ke saath rahoonga... (Instantly he looked at Geet for approval but before Geet or anyone would have said anything, Yash quickly cajoled Avi)

Yash:- Dekho, sab log sath mein so rahe hain, bas ek main he hoon jo ke poore room mein akela hoon, aap mujhe company dogey???Hum khoob maze karengey( and then he whispered) Akele main, cartoons dekhengey,games khelengey, aapki fav wali ice cream bhi khaengey...

Avi(jumped with claps,feeling excited ):- Haan.. Main Dadu ke saath songa...

With Avi's happy nod to Yash..He smirked at Maan... and winked at Geet... Geet's eyes were widened looking at her FIL's wink and she got a doubt in her mind that it was all sort of planning for giving her and Maan a lone time... with each other... Geet looked at Maan, who was staring his father... but when he felt a gaze on himself, he looked at Geet.. and she drew her eyes away from him... with a slight blush creeping up on her cheeks...

Maan(thought to decrease this awkwardness and so diverted the talks):- Dad, I got a meeting with Verma's ... tomorrow, it's a kinda dinner meeting... Then am free , we will go on sightseeing and wherever all want...

Yash(shook his head):- Maan, we are meant to be chilling out here... you are the only one, who needs this break, the most...and you are saying that you are going on a meeting??? I mean, seriously this is really not acceptable ...

Maan:- Dad its important... And promise just this meeting.. no other meetings are lined up... You can call and ask from my PA... get confirmation from her...if you want...

Yash(hearing the words PA Yash got a plan):-So, where's your PA???Isn't she here???

Maan:- Naah! Its just a single meeting ... So, I didn't brought her here...

Yash:- Then, who will get the notes???

Maan:- I don't need it Dad...

Yash:- Hey Maan, why don't you take Geet along with you???

Maan(s head snapped at his Dad):- What?? She isn't my PA Dad...(Even Geet's mom felt offended that Yash was making her daughter PA...Their Bahu as a PA???She looked at Geet..But Geet's concentration was on Yash and Maan's talks)

Yash:- I know Son... But this project is for building Hospitals right??? Mr Verma is a Doc...  See, she is a Doc also...(He pointed to Geet )she knows lots of required depts. to be opened for any Hospital...I mean, come on, who would be knowing more abt these things than her... (Hearing Yash's explanation Geet's mom was relaxed... that they weren't treating Geet as a servant or anything...But this was good for her daughter's career)

Maan(guessed what his Dad was saying and he whispered a bit seriously):- Dad what are you trying to do???

Yash(smiled at Geet's father and then whispered back to Maan):- Planning to send you with your wife on a Dinner date there...

Maan(looked at his Dad , dumbfounded as he just accepted):- Dad???

Yash(cut him and looked at Geet):- So, Geet beta.. You too get ready for tomorrow..

Geet(at first was startled at her FIL's words and then reluctantly looked at Maan's expressions... she thought he is upset with His Dad):- Jii main??? I mean, I have got lots of works to do... And besides, I don't know much abt Hospital requirements and all..Am still in second yr... what would I do there???

She tried her best to decline..Maan was abt to second Geet on that matter But her mother jumped in the convo... rendering not only Geet but Maan also...As she said...

Geet's mom:- I think, bhai sahib is saying right... Geet you should accompany your Husband ...It would really be a nice experience for you(At the end she even eyed Geet to not to say no)

Geet was trapped...She was scared from all sides... At one side, She was worried For Maan's reaction and his anger..From other side, Her FIL was looking at her with questioning eyes as if, asking her why she was denying...She didn't want to upset him.. From third side, Her mother, left no room for her to say no.. and at the last side , her own willingness to go there or not... That also, was a question... 

Maan sighed as His MIL stepped in and closed all the doors for Geet to deny... He knew, Her mother still was unsure of their bonding..relation and so she probably was going to test them by sending them both together somewhere... Maybe she wanted to see how Maan was going to get furious and say an outright no to Geet.. But he knew to not to interfere in here .. and so he agreed, shocking Geet...

Maan:- yeah Geet...I think your mother is right... Come with me.. If not for any help.. you would be learning something from Mr Verma... He is very intelligent person...

Geet looked at him, widening her eyes ..Couldn't believe he was talking to her so casually as if, it indeed was a good visit for her... Both knew, nothing was going to help Geet.. But as now Maan, himself has consented so she just agreed without much of fuss... and Maan, mentally thanked her for her understanding ...for not saying no.. He smiled at her, this smile was of an assurance that it was fine she could join...But, did Geet understand the silent language????

Dev and NT looked at the tensed atmosphere ... NT saw Geet's mom eyeing Geet to get up and follow her...Maybe Geet's mom was going to give her a list of do's and don'ts..  But before Geet could have stood up from her couch.. NT saved Geet from her mom's scolding by saying...

NT:- Ahh !! Veerji.. where are we going for outing this evening???Nowhere???(She resumed the talks from the start, which Maan started)

Dev(added, after looking at Geet's angry mom):- Of course we will go out today too... Hai naa Bro... You said  so when we arrived here???

Maan(was abt to retort back to Dev when he eyed towards Geet's mother's interested look..Maan sighed and nodded):- Yeah we are going to nearby park today..(He smiled and looked at Avi, who still was sitting on Yash's lap) Avi will love that park...Right??

Avi:- wow... Hum park jaengey??? (Maan nodded with a small smile) yeyy... Thank you papa...

He left Yash's lap and came to Maan, he brought him up in his lap and Avi kissed Maan's cheek, happy that His Dad was changed totally... He now loved him and didn't even hesitate to show that to others ...


Suggestions are welcome for outing..What do you want to see.??

Abt Rahul... He would come soon... And Abt the short parts , well, these never are intending ...but I just split the part as per my choice.. making sure, that it is at least 1000 plus word's part... and this part is 1200 plus, this time..


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PART 77

Avi:- wow... Hum park jaengey??? (Maan nodded with a small smile) yeyy... Thank you papa...

He left Yash's lap and came to Maan, he brought him up in his lap and Avi kissed Maan's cheek, happy that His Dad was changed totally... He now loved him and didn't even hesitate to show that to others ...

Their family time was disturbed as Maan's cell phone rang, and he excused himself to attend that call as it was from Mr Verma, who called to get the confirmation if MSK was coming for meeting or not..

Mr Verma ended the call and informed Rahul-who made him call Maan- that MSK was coming with his wife on this dinner meeting .. Contended Rahul smirked ... His stars were  on his side these days.. and he planned this dinner accordingly...

Geet waited for Maan to end his call and when he did Geet made an excuse from the hall and went after him... He was going to their room ...Geet called out from behind...

Geet:- Maan... (Maan stopped and looked back at her) Am sorry.. I.. Don't want to come between your business.. But...

Maan(smiled):- Geet..There's no issue..In fact just now, have told Mr Verma that am bringing you too in this meeting .. and he was fine with that... Maybe , he will also bring one of his family members to get you engaged with...I mean, like giving you company.. (Geet still was reluctant so he said)okhh.. If still, you felt uncomfortable with this all... then we will excuse after discussing the matters and then we will go for dinner separately.. Now fine???

Geet:- Umm.. Am(she looked down) not sure... I mean, this is really awkward for me.. I.. don't wanna go...

Maan:- Geet, your mother would mind, if we don't go there...  I don't want to give her bad impression.. She already, kinda dislikes me... I think, she stills is worried for you... your marital life... We have talked already, that we will be friendly with each other and are giving this relation a chance, right???

Geet smiled and nodded, thinking that he was trying to impress her mother ... and that's why was suppressing his irritation and frustration too.. How sweet was that... But still she was reluctant... Seeing her still silent he reluctantly placed his hand over hers in an assuring gesture and looked at her...

Maan:- I Will be there with you... Don't worry... Hmm???

Geet:- Thank you...

This was the YES from her side, and he knew that, unknowingly, knowing this silent language of her...Smilingly he patted her hand that he still was holding in his hands gently... and after a few secs he left her to go to their room...

Geet looked down at her hand, when he left from there thinking of his touch .. She blushed and then looked at the way Maan was going... She shook her head and went from there.. Not wanting Maan to see her shyness...

But someone did witness the whole convo... and of course, the  gestures and emotions-appeared on Maaneet's faces ...

That was Geet's mother, who smiled and felt like thanking Her SIL for trying on establishing their relation..and maybe Geet also was now more open to her Husband..But still her shyness was coming in between their budding relation ..That she thought, to not to interfere in their matter, and let the Husband and Wife deal with that, as they wanted .. or maybe she must talk to Geet on that later on..She silently left,  happy and contended for her daughter...

Evening , At park...

Getting down from the car, all looked at the park... which was not crowded today, to their luck... Avi saw the playground and ran to enter that.. But, Geet's hand on his shoulder hindered him from going..

Geet:- Avi ruko, saath jaengey...

Avi:- ok mama...

Maan looked at the two kids, who were very excited to run and crash the park, he knew even Geet was wanting to go there ASAP but as elders were present and to top that, Her mom was looking at the trio very keenly, Geet somehow controlled the urge and even was successful in stopping Avi from going there... Maan smiled and shook his head... and when Geet looked at his way, he looked away...

Geet's lips also curved a bit and she too smiled as she noted Maan's smiley face, she thought Maan was amused at Avi's antics -his eagerness to go and play with other kids...

After entering the park, Finally Geet left Avi's hand who cribbed to go and play with other kids ...She was disappointed as Avi didn't wait for Geet and ran ..Dev offered to look after Avi along with NT and they were gone..Geet spread the mat and the elders sat down there...She offered something for everyone to eat ...and then at last, Geet looked around for Maan, found him sitting on a bench and looking at Avi...

Geet wanted to go to him and ask him, if he needed something .. But was feeling hesitant... But then she looked at Yash-Her Super Dad, who nodded with a smile and with a slight blush she made her way towards Maan...while Yash smiled and shook his head..

Sitting down beside him, Geet looked at Maan.. He was lost ... silent, and when after 5 mints, he didn't say anything, Geet tried to initiate a convo... looking at smiling and giggling Avi, with NT and Dev...

Geet:- Am so happy, that you have accepted him as YOURS...You have changed ...a lot.. Thank you...

Maan(was startled as he heard her voice coming from his right side.. after when she was done, he smiled looking at her and then concentrated ahead):- OURS... He is OURS!!!(He looked at her and she smilingly nodded..Again looked away and started) Geet, when he was born...I didn't even look at him... I.. used to Hate him... His mother HURT me a lot ... I vowed to never look at him... Dad used to get hyper and Dadimaa, she even blackmailed me emotionally.. But, I.. didn't give in... His face only reminded me of Her betrayal.. But, now.. when I look at his face, I get your image in him... your face in him...(He looked at her and then ahead, at Avi) If he is smiling ..laughing ...enjoying today, its all coz of you... Thank you for coming in OUR lives ...Thank you for changing me for good...

Geet(complained):- But, still you aren't enjoying even being out here...

Maan(sighed):- I.. Just don't know..how to.. (He looked at her with that said and smiled faintly at her, then looked away)

Geet placed her hand over his which was resting at his side... He looked at their hands and took her hand in his.. both sat there like that for a while looking ahead..Then Maan asked...

Maan:- Lets walk???

Geet:- Ummhmmm... Let's enjoy... Will you.. plz???

Maan:- But I...

Geet(interrupted):- Don't worry, I will teach you how to enjoy..

Geet pleaded, waited for his response in Yes  and she smiled when he nodded.. they started to walk in the garden, there was a fountain for kids, which was less crowded at the moment...

Song suggested by Sheetalvaasa and one more readers, am forgetting the name..sorryEmbarrassed... Thanks sweets... 


Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo-- 4

Yash looked at them both and smiled...as they were walking away ...and soon were vanished from everyone's sight...Finally, they were trying to spend time together, by their own will.. and not by forcing them onto each other...Yash felt relived ...That now he wouldn't have to push them, and his work was done here...

Do Dil mil rahe hain--2

Magar chupke chupke

Do Dil mil rahe hain

Magar chupke chupke

Sabhko ho rahi hai

Haan Sabhko ho rahi hai

Khabar chupke chupke

(Maaneet started to walk around that fountain.. and then sat at the side..at the moment, silence was so comforting)

Ho O O O do Dil mil rahe hain

Magar chupke chupke

Geet(looked at the water and thought of something):- Can I do something??? Only, if you don't mind???

Maan:- Sure...

Geet:- Don't get hyper okhh??? (Maan smiled and nodded, already knew, she would ask for something really childish.. the way she was looking at him, he guessed that)

Sansoon mein bari bekarari

Aankhoon mein keyi Rat Jage

(Geet smiled and splashed water on Maan's face... With a surprised look, Maan looked at Geet..out of all things, he wasn't expecting her to do that)

Kabhi kahin lag jaye Dil to

Kahin phir Dil na lagey

Apna Dil main zara tham loon

Jaadu ka main ise naam doon

Geet(giggled and said):- Let's play... see, you promised you won't get hyper...

(Maan felt instant chilly feeling in his whole body as the water wet him..just superficially though.. He got hold of Geet's hand... and she looked at him)

Jaadu kar raha hai--2

Asar chupke chupke

(indeed her presence was affecting him.. And he didn't  mind that at all.. So, he just smiled at her, letting her know, that he wasn't angry)

Aise bhole ban kar hain Baithe

Jaise koi Baat nahin

(But Geet felt conscious after her act...and when he touched her.. So, she sat silently after that..And this time, Maan initiated the game... He splashed water on her face,and smiled at her...Surprising Geet and she then looked at him in silence)

Sabh kuch Nazar Aa raha hai

Din hai yeh Raat nahin

(Maan too felt awkward as she was silent .. and so, he too sat without speaking anything )

Kya hai Kuch bhi nahin hai magar

Hoton pe hai Khamoshi Magar

Baateen kar rahin hain--2

Nazar chupke chupke

(Both stole glances of each other and when both were caught, they just couldn't control and Geet giggled... making Maan smile at her)

Do Dil mil rahe hain

Magar chupke chupke

Maan:- Shall we go???

Sabhko ho rahi hai

Haan Sabhko ho rahi hai

Khabar chupke chupke

Geet(nodded):- ji...

Ho O O O do Dil mil rahe hain

Magar chupke chupke

(And they stood up, to walk towards their families...But  suddenly, Geet's feet tripped and she was abt to hit the floor, But Maan's hands came around and caught her on time)

Kahin Aag lagne se pehle

Uthta hai aisa dhuan

(As Maan's hands shifted to steady her, Geet felt current all around her body)

Jaisa hai Idhar ka Nazara O O

Vaisa hi Udhar ka Samaa

(He was no less... He could feel her shivering..and he got to know that she was too affected by him as he was by her)

Dil mein kaisi Kasak si Jagi

Dono Jaanib barabar Lagi

(Both wanted something ... But, both were feeling hesitant and shy...awkward)

Dekho to Idhar se Dekho to

Idhar Se Udhar chupke chupke

(He left her after breaking the eye contact and then again walked)

Do Dil mil rahe hain

Magar chupke chupke

Sabhko ho rahi hai

Haan Sabhko ho rahi hai

Khabar chupke chupke

Ho O O O do Dil mil rahe hain

Magar chupke chupke

Well, this is round abt 1600 plus update... Hope, its not SHORT... 

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