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Familiar Strangers - OS (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 7:38am | IP Logged
wow...marvelous...
beautifully written...Clap
u hv a portrait each and every feelings of adi brilliantly...
he state of mind, then while recieving gifts ... wow...
just loved it yaar...

Ishra scenes was awsm... 
thank u so much

 

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS aaniBig smile it was veri different OS,really liked  how adi's feelings were described,how he was feeling left out from family members...he was actually suprised that his family loves him so much,and he was being kept away from all these happiness,happiness of being with family...then adi watching raman and ishita talking about him,it was awkward seeing his father with the person he hated ,but he could actually understand what was going on,ishita was not the person he thought she was.she actually cared for him.like a mother.it was beatifulEmbarrassed...this time even his mother words didn't made him hate his family,because he knew what feels when you are being loved by your familyBig smile
Fab OS:)...i mostly read stuffs on ishra,but for a change i actually loved reading thisBig smile you write so wellBig smile keep writing more and thanks for pmHug


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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 8:19am | IP Logged
superb os

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 9:33am | IP Logged
This was lovely...very nice to read something from Adi's point of view. Hopefully something similar will happen to him on the show

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:23am | IP Logged
What a beautiful piece of writing! You are an amazing writer...could imagine the scenes so clearly and feel the love between IshRa and Adi's confusion.

Would be brilliant if something along these lines was shown on screen...Adi needs to know of his father's love for him and Ishita's care too.

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:56am | IP Logged
nice.. loved it..!!

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Aaah now I like adi..thanks to ur os...I can totally see this happening in the show...amazing yet again
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Brilliant Brilliant.. im at loss of words!! beautifully written! A child's pain, his earlier mistakes, the way he thinks about each and everyone while opening each gift and last but nt the least from his papa and step-mom! wowww!!! 
i loved it completely! i so wish if the CVs wud explore Adi's character more deeper and the Bhalla members helping him out dearly! it would be a treat to our eyes! 

do write moree!!! <3 :D

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